OS SERIES : With all due FARAQS! [OS 6 PG57 ] *AWARDED* - Page 4

lol nice one

Originally posted by: cheesemad

RES! :D :D

Edited!

What an OS JJ!! I just loved it <3

I have always adored this beautiful scene in our beloved IPK. It had everything, Khushi's nervousness, Arnav's anger, their attraction. And you have excelled it!😃better than any OS I have read on IF based on this scene. Why do I feel your stories are making me give some controversial comments😆I don't mind saying that you are the best

Now coming back to the OS, it was fun to see the scene with Arnav's point of view. What he felt when he looked at her in sari and that too red😳The very first rabbe ve ever and you have nailed it😉

I liked that sweet element you added in the OS, Jeff clicking their picture, That was adorable JJ. And ending was awesome!! I liked when Khushi spoke about sexual harassment but that is our ASR you are talking to😆I loved his reply!

JJ I want more stories from you, bas!!⭐️

Okay! First things first. My cheeks are paining.

i thought it'd be harder for me pen from ASR's view but everything kick started when I re-watched first Rub Away just to write this 😆
ASR's eyes were uber hot and I realized Khushi looked absolutely gorgeous in that scene. Bas kuch zyada hi inspired ho gayi thi 🤣

And now, people are pressurizing for a second part 😛

I need to watch more eye sax to pen it down.

CC, like always your comments make me feel really good about myself haha. Thanks for always being there,

muahs

Of course, we want second part! :D

I took so much time to comment, but it was the best <3

Superb OS.. Reminded me of IPK days.. Khushi, Arnav and this tug of war between them.. Sigh!!

Loved it.. 😊

Originally posted by: cheesemad

Of course, we want second part! :D

In fact you should take some scenes from IPK itself and write it in you own way! IPK scenes JJ-Fried :P

what do you say? I am in :P

PS: Is this spamming? One year away from IF and now I post things getting scared :P

What what and what?
You do know that you have this uncanny ability to pressurize me and turn this into one freaking SS?

And no, the definiton of spamming didn't change in your absence 😆
Go spam the chat thread lol

P.S. It'd be really nice of you to suggest the scenes you want to be fried. I'll make sure that you get that in a platter pretty soon.

Originally posted by: Rishaal

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">I took so much time to comment, but it was the best <3</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">I say the best means it IS the BEST!</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">You write the scenes so well which are almost plotted on the show scenes but it is fried in your style</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">.🤣</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Your blending is absolutely brilliant and the way this OS was written was fab</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">So I want an extension too bae, if you write another part to this story, I would appreciate and hug to to the point of strangling you😆</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">BECAUSE I LOVED IT!</font>

Okies... Hold your horses lady... I totally get it. Now, dont choke me to death (virtually, of course)😆

Yes I'm planning to write the second part. Ab khush?

Originally posted by: snoopy84

awesome os please continue

Aww thanks yaara.

Originally posted by: sincereme

Superb OS.. Reminded me of IPK days.. Khushi, Arnav and this tug of war between them.. Sigh!!

Loved it.. 😊

Thanks a lot. I'm glad you enjoyed reading it

You are such an angel JJ!! :D

Originally posted by: cheesemad

You are such an angel JJ!! :D

Yes I am declaring my love you!! I LOVE YOU JJ!! :D :P Yes I would love to suggest you some scenes :D

(1) When Khushi leaves RM after Diwali episode, remember? Then that sweet Mandir scene? Please I want that one!! :D :D

(2) Also that one, Payal and Akash's havan, Khushi in yellow suit, goes with NK to get ghee!! :D

(3) Anything regarding Arnav's past. I didn't like the way CVs rushed with it!!

I should stop or you will hit me!! Mwahahahaha I don't care.

(4) Hospital scene, where Khushi cries and Arnav puts his hand on her head :D

Okies looks like you've got an enormous list to fire my ass 😆

So, I was wondering if I could continue this OS, writing all those scenes as a continuation from here itself?

And yes...that means this is going to be an SS.