OS SERIES : With all due FARAQS! [OS 6 PG57 ] *AWARDED*

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dolly477

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

love it..is there continuation??would like to read more

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Sadh123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Amazing..But can't we have a continuation? It has great scopes of being a full fledged story!! Loved it..

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..sweetchilly..

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Verbal fight between ASR and Khushi is always a treat to watch.
Loved it loads :)

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Rami

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Awww cute one,...wen can v expect part 2 😉

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Pastellitesoulx

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

can we have part 2 plz???
sankadevi aur laad governer ki kahani aur padhni hai 😳

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cheesemad

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

RES! :D :D

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What an OS JJ!! I just loved it <3

I have always adored this beautiful scene in our beloved IPK. It had everything, Khushi's nervousness, Arnav's anger, their attraction. And you have excelled it! 😃 better than any OS I have read on IF based on this scene. Why do I feel your stories are making me give some controversial comments 😆 I don't mind saying that you are the best

Now coming back to the OS, it was fun to see the scene with Arnav's point of view. What he felt when he looked at her in sari and that too red 😳 The very first rabbe ve ever and you have nailed it 😉

I liked that sweet element you added in the OS, Jeff clicking their picture, That was adorable JJ. And ending was awesome!! I liked when Khushi spoke about sexual harassment but that is our ASR you are talking to😆 I loved his reply!

JJ I want more stories from you, bas!!⭐️

Edited by cheesemad - 10 years ago