ArShi OS#28: Bawari Piya Ki

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xBabyAngelx

@xBabyAngelx

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Thanks for this wonderful OS😃

Simply loved it

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sspoorthy

@sspoorthy

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

amazing OS

ruhi is so evil

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Rish_Rubles

@Rish_Rubles

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

OMG it was such a great OS

So long, it could have easily been broken into a SS 😆

You did an awesome job and i loved it

how arnav gets to know the truth and he confronts Ruchi and then romance ☺️

Khushi is perfect here and with faith, she achieved many things :)

Keep writing!

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@_CrystalFlames_

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Such an awesome shot...
You describe the whole journey beautifully 😊

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jisa

@jisa

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

A long but definitely worthy OS..
loved it !!!

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zebali

@zebali

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Awesome awesome dear.
Loved it.
A love story started with hate going to end with love.
What a lovely stuff dear.
Ruchi such a characterless girl.
But mahul taught her good loss on.
Arshi ups and downs was the best.
Now they realized their mysterious and continue their love journey.
Khushi father had good sense to recognize
And judged the people.
He took decision by marry his daughter with Arnav.
Waiting for next.
Pm me season 2 pls.

Waiting eagerly d
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Tfs golden and lengthy is.

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Chinnu

@Phoenix_413

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

It was really gorgeous !

I can't believe Ruchi... she is so evil and unlucky to have let go of Arnav's love 😡

I loved Khushi's character... so selfless 😊

Arnav was angry but then softened... I'm glad tht they started a new life together 😃😃😃

Continue writing ... I love this story so much.

Very relatable 👏

Once again, lovely story and great thought ..

I love it that all your OS's leave a message behind and once again

'Sabar ka phal meeta hota hai '

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sillykudi

@sillykudi

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Dude that was freaking awesome!!I literally had goosebumps during some parts girl!!The way you narrate all your stories each one of it is unique from eachother as it ends we are left with happy and sad feeling sad bcs end has came to the beautiful story and happy of course for reading everytime such different and strong characters! The way ypu choose an apt song evertime title itself catches one attention!!I am sorry i have always been your silent reader but Just wanted to say I LoVE ALL of them and there is a smile flashing up my face everytime I receive your pm...

Have you sent pm for this os i bcs i haven't received one and if you have removed me from buddy list I wld kindly request you to add me back

Edited by sillykudi - 10 years ago