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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 10 years ago

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Misnomer

@Misnomer

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

Wow ..

This was simply Beautiful ...

Loved it ...

Keep writing...

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bablubli

@bablubli

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

Aaaw Rae...how cute & sweet is that! Thank you for reposting this one...I loved it!!

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SS88

@SS88

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

I have been waiting for this since I read your tweet. Such a lovely story. And really, they're both lucky to have found each other.

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PixieFlame

@PixieFlame

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

Omg!

I remember reading this before!

Thanks for reposting it! :D

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Mirabell

@Mirabell

Navigator

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

I have been reading your works now, having discovered them recently. It has been such a joy, and this is why - The way you show these big moments in such small ways. The smallness of your portrayal does not diminish the enormity of the sentiment. On the contrary! Just like here.. the way you say it..

- so sweet that he needed nothing else to satiate his sweet tooth, one which he had developed only after he had met her and one which was only for her.

Nothing over the top, just enough to tug a sigh out of your reader!

Just so sweet that it makes me wonder if this is as sweet as the jalebi that Khushi made, for her Arnav!

❤️

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Sharmila

@ongongong

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

I remember reading this long ago.. Well,it was nice reading it again :D

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shruti

@shruti46

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

Cute o.s. simple things makes life so beautiful

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Breath-Mark

@Breath-Mark

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

What a sweet piece of OS. 😃

So many emotions power packaged.

Payal finally had a role in Arhi's love story. 👍🏼

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Anu567

@Anu567

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#10

What a truly lovely OS. Wish we could have seen something close to that on the actual show...always wanted to see Khushi and Arnav make jalebis together...ah!

You write so beautifully girl! Take a bow!

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