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CastleOfDreams

@CastleOfDreams

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#41

Awesome OS!

The title itself is very attractive "Jalebi"⭐️

Keep writing more

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Maya

@What_the

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Hi AT!

Long time, hope you are doing well!

This OS was sweet as only a Jalebi can be, made me smile involuntarily as I read it..

Feel-good writing...especially loved the moment where she entered the room and he sensed her presence, holding his hand out for her.

Oh they were so perfect, Arnav and Khushi...sigh!

Always happy to read your work...thank you so much for the PM..

I am not very regular on IF so sorry for the delay in reading and commenting.

Cheers

Maya

PS: Snuck into the kitchen now, with a sudden craving for meetha 😳

Jalebi toh nahi mili, but found gulab jamun in the fridge 😛

Edited by What_the - 10 years ago

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anera

@anera

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Nice

But could not she just made sugerfree sweets

Very lovely update

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scrapbooker

@scrapbooker

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#44

One of the my most favorite parts of the show was how from the very beginning Khushi assumes responsibility for Arnav's condition. Making all kinds of food which he could eat and reminding everyone what he couldn't. This story combined that with Arnav's wish to fulfill all of Khushi's wishes so beautifully. Kudos!