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shr1234

@shr1234

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Wonderful! It's so good to read this once again Rae. I always love the way you make them all a loving, caring family. You explore each relation of ArHi and show how the family as a whole live these chote chote pal fully. And of course there is the couple itself! So sweet. Love you :)

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Seeta

@LadyR

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

I'm so glad you opened your 'Pandora's box of OS's' and shared this one with us..

You can relate to the conversation - as if you're hearing it more because you wrote the dialogue in Hindi..

I felt Arnav's despair at his diabetes and Khushis' concern was really endearing... she knew how to satisfy his craving but at the same time not endangering his health.. Seeing Arnav's love for her, one has to think he would have eaten a regular jalebi to make her dream come true..see her smile

Jalebis are one of my favorite sweets too. I ate so many when craving for them during my pregnancy - we nicknamed our daughter jalebi for that reason !!! Coincidentally my husband is diabetic too and cannot eat them !!

Hoping you'll share more of your work soon..

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meera06

@meera06

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Haye ..this was a such cute and romantic OS...

I loved every word of this one shot😊

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

he cant have sweets
but he can have sweetner waali jalebi
so yes her dream did come true
but had payal not said it
well he wouldnt have known
aww that was cute
how much they live on another right

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secretidentity

@secretidentity

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

how adorably sweet. beautifully written

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FeistyDewdrop

@FeistyDewdrop

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Hayee!! This is so lovely Rae... Heart melting i tell you <3

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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Wonderful OS
Loved it
Thanks for the pm

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xBabyAngelx

@xBabyAngelx

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

That was so sweet

Loved it very much

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aquagal

@aquagal

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

First and foremost I want to tell you that it's 10 in the morning and when I saw the title I was tempted to have jalebis. Ab kahaan se laoon jalebi I'm in the office 😕
What a beautiful OS and a beautiful way to fulfill Khushi's one dream without letting her know. Arnav has always tried and fulfilled her wishes. He did the same with the silver coin and now with the jalebis making it look like his wish.😳 And thanks to Payal for letting Arnav know.

I loved this sweet story filled with sweetness of love and care, of desire to fulfill each others wishes. Simply beautiful and heart-touching.