The beast & his belle

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Sona

@mistyrains

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

So its a 500 words something long, yet its so pictorial, so eloquent. Like I said, I could literally see Arnav crying and that image stings.

Then secondly, that phrase about leaving a scorching tale behind - I love that! Then as the drabble went on, it was like we were walking through Arnav's mind, living, scrutinizing his thoughts, his actions with him. Very powerful ( especially the last few lines!). Very poetic.

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gata

@gata

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

Can feel Arnav's pain ... where is she? don't end it ,bring her back

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

One sad story, Rae.

Hate him as much as you want, one can't help feeling sorry for the arrogant man going through so much pain. He is miserable and he alone is the reason for this misery.

One sad state of affairs.

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BlueMystique

@BlueMystique

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

I like the way you write Arnav. Especially, Arnav who is broken.

His thoughts reminded me of the 10 things I hate about you speech, a much sadder version of it, of course.

Poignant and Poetic. I liked it :)

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Seeta

@LadyR

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

Brilliant, once again a few words that speak volumes. By not revealing too much, you leave the readers mind open to many interpretations. I loved that

Arnav's hate for Khushi made him forge a realionship with her, his hate for himself forced him to let her go...

Hate the sin, love the sinner...

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SS88

@SS88

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

MistyRains (Sona) I'm so glad you made Rae write this. It's an amazing piece. And something I've always wished Khushi had done.

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DDC1

@DDC1

Navigator

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Posted: 11 years ago

Dark angst concisely written but effectively communicated

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bablubli

@bablubli

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

Thank you Rae...beautifully written! So aptly describes Arnav & the state of his mind. Very poignant. Please do write more often...

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Anjani Patel

@Titaliya_AP

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

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This is how Arnav would have handled being separated from Khushi. We do not know if he knows the truth or not because it does not matter, all that does is that Khushi is no longer with her Arnav. Belle left before she could save the beast in this one and now he has doomed himself...

Beautifully written, a little over 500 words that convey so much. Hate, love, anguish, desperation, loathe, fury, and probably so much more. I could clearly visualize this, I can imagine this scene happening in IPKKND, actually I find myself wishing it did!