The beast & his belle | ArHi OS - Page 3

Originally posted by: LadyR

Brilliant, once again a few words that speak volumes. By not revealing too much, you leave the readers mind open to many interpretations. I loved that

Arnav's hate for Khushi made him forge a realionship with her, his hate for himself forced him to let her go...

Hate the sin, love the sinner...

Originally posted by: SS88

MistyRains (Sona) I'm so glad you made Rae write this. It's an amazing piece. And something I've always wished Khushi had done.

Originally posted by: bablubli

Thank you Rae...beautifully written! So aptly describes Arnav & the state of his mind. Very poignant. Please do write more often...

Originally posted by: Titaliya_AP

This is how Arnav would have handled being separated from Khushi. We do not know if he knows the truth or not because it does not matter, all that does is that Khushi is no longer with her Arnav. Belle left before she could save the beast in this one and now he has doomed himself...

Beautifully written, a little over 500 words that convey so much. Hate, love, anguish, desperation, loathe, fury, and probably so much more. I could clearly visualize this, I can imagine this scene happening in IPKKND, actually I find myself wishing it did!

Originally posted by: IronButterfly

Couldn't live with her & now can't live without her.
He's broken.

Very well written.

Originally posted by: AngelTeen

To rephrase (if I may) -

Arnav's 'hate' for Khushi made him forge a relationship with her, his hate for himself allowed him to let her go...

And I love this line - Hate the sin, love the sinner...very nice.

Thank You so much for commenting and the constant encouragement! :)

Originally posted by: Japonica

AT, WOW! This is the perfect short story.

Super to read your work after so long!

Originally posted by: PixieFlame

Heart breaking, beautifully written! :(

Originally posted by: What_the

Short yet powerful...you did it again!!

The ansgty Arnav...makes you feel for him...no matter how big a jerk he may act like...

Good read...an Arhi piece after a long time...thanks for the pm!

Originally posted by: meera30

The opening lines of this OS set the tone. Such beauty, such imagery! As always, your writing is nothing short of magic when it comes to angst!