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shr1234

@shr1234

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Amazing Rae. At the outset I knew this is something different and through to the end it was all poetry. You conveyed so much in so few words, poetic indeed. So poignant.

Thanks for the PM dear :)

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faffy

@faffy

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Poignant and agonizing!! Succinct and intense!!!

In this you have reached the deepest recesses of Arnav's heart and decrypted him completely! My heart cried for both...they were so meant for each other...

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ranogill

@ranogill

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

you can never turn the clock back...awesome

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
well written..

Originally posted by: Arshi.Sugi.IPK
Sad os well written

Thank You! :)

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stg1

@stg1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

wow, u paint such a vivid picture with ur words, beautiful and haunting ❤️

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Pastellitesoulx

@xMIC.Dropx

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Loved the way you have written arnav's broken state.
It is brilliant <3

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nnhk

@nnhk

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

very emotional and touching.

love reading your stories and posts

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aquagal

@aquagal

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+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Sad and heart-breaking!!! Love the way you write this angst filled Arnav filled with self-loathing. I especially loved the lines where you wrote "she was no longer to make his house his home, his existence his life..." In simple words, one line you showed that he has lost meaning of his life without her. And then the end with his reasons of hating her, hating himself!!! Can a man be hurt more than this??!!!
Lovely Rae...
I haven't yet heard the song - Let Me Go but this OS has strangely left me humming "Gaye tum gaye kyun..."

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Arshi67

@Arshi67

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+ 13

Ocean of Happiness

Posted: 11 years ago

#39

Rae, I don't think I can add to all that's already been said for this superlative piece of writing.

Arnav's introspective self loathing so painfully evident.

He 'let her go' haantho mein se reth ki tarah.

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: shr1234
Amazing Rae. At the outset I knew this is something different and through to the end it was all poetry. You conveyed so much in so few words, poetic indeed. So poignant.
Thanks for the PM dear :)

Thank You so much for such kind words! And for the constant encouragement! :)