Blast from the Past Thread #26 ** Talk to me ** P 132, Ep 299 - Page 76

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Posted: 10 years ago
hi all,


indu, rhea,

thanks for reading my takes... i am flaked out after writing an update the whole day... oh the madness one gets up to...

will reply to you tomorrow.

mad desire to write poem.

no words.
Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: indi52

^^^

how beautiful, kate.

so i sat in front of the comp, listening to that little girl voice, reading the words, thinking should i make a vm? and felt a funny surge in my heart for a man who doesn't exist really and yet who does. surreally or supra really or some other really but really, really.

i am coming home... i can feel asr in those words. i hope his home gave him all that he sought and he felt at peace, safe, in control... finally.

Di thanks for liking!! I feel ASR in those words too. I found a vm of ASR coming home after the kidnapping with the first version of this song but now I can't find it in my playlist. The channel might have gotten deleted!! 😭 I really wanted to share that vm badly but the next best thing to share the music instead. I love this song and have many different versions. Di, please do make a vm if the mood strike you...follow your heart, muse...I'm coming home...
Edited by Katelyn - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Thank you everyone for liking both my poems.

I had decided I would become a silent reader for sometime and read all those beautiful posts on 288. Finally managed to read all. Spread over all these pages starting from page 63, the amount of quality work those 10 minutes on the cliff top has induced is unbelievable. And we are not yet done, Faiqa and Ami's takes are still awaited.

Through these many posts on so many pages, many times, I have heard him call her name, plead, order, request to say something, to breathe dammit. And many times, the breath would stop only to be revived with a hmm... followed by a jubilant smile which got wider with a lapel holding. Many times, found myself smile and cry at the same time.

Brilliant job writers. 👏
Cynthia, loved your piece, simple and straight to the point.
Sohara, you wrote in two parts, good idea. Enjoyed reading them. And anyway, no number of parts are enough to discuss the hill stop scene.
Rhea, your complete involvement in this episode is shown clearly in your poems and review. Loved the flow in your take.
Indi, as always, brilliant writing, loved the water, gomti, ocean connect.
Kate, thanks for the segments and promo.
Faiqa, aww he wanted to kiss her hand, embossed in mehandi with his initial! Loved this connect and the others too.
Issk, truly what an action sequence that was. I agree, reminded one of those pre special effects days when there was genuine fight choreography.

Hiis constant request to her to say something reminded me of this vm. It's on daily motion, so can't embed it. It is a long one, but worth a watch. After all it is by none other than Zoha. 😊


So, how many times he took her name? It never mattered, did it? Her name is there in every cell of his body, his universe, just about everywhere, echoing all around. Khushi, Khushi ... truly there is no count.

p.s. On the side, a little silly query. So during kidnapping, ASR gets to brush, eat, shave, have regular medicines and exercise too, to maintain a good physique. Then why not let him take a bath and/or give him a dress change.

Oh ok, the vest had to remain, I guess. For obvious reasons. 😆



Posted: 10 years ago
For all of our Blasters awesome writers, there's an IPKKND Fall Writing contest in case you are interested!! See the link for info and deadlines.

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4170911
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Posted: 10 years ago
I refrained from talking about reruns here and jumping ahead... esp in the 300s...avoiding reaching that endless end..
Mentioned this on another chat, yesterday's episode, as I checked 314 it is, I was completely floored as if I was watching the first time...as I never really watched these dadi episodes after how many ever watches of the their initial telecast day ...
There is some thing in this posture that is talking to me endlessly... a man who cares for his wife... rendering her support, a bit of guilt and plead also perhaps.. as he said she was at NO fault at how their marriage happened...a conversation set up in a higher plane...
As much as he disputed with nani and dadi, he was always quite respectful to them...that doesn't mean he would concur with them on all counts...respectful disagreement at its best or worst..as he entered that room where nani and dadi are exchanging quite a wrath, he didn't really try hard to mask his displeasure, an apathy a 14 yr old felt perhaps in their most needed hr. As he exactly vented his frustration at her indifference and antagonism for his father, he was trying to hard to contain his rage but not his beliefs...a perfection hard to miss...
Then happens the most beautiful moment... his wife was not allowed to enter the room.. he quietly goes and joins her by her side... he didn't bring his wife inside...he could have.. but he very much respects his dadi's own little space .. but same time respects the space his wife duly deserves...
" mei yaheen se sun raha hun.. kahiye".. I am listening from here.. you tell me...with a killing softness.. there was no bundles of anger .. yet unrelentingly firm...character growth in the right direction...I wanted to reach inside my screen.. and hug him..
After IPK, I have learned that being interfering, sacrificial, God- playing is a commonality for the bahus of telly land. Sadly, my favorite female lead couldn't escape from those clichs..but here after an year of its inception..and my leading man is still very much intact.. talking to me .. as confidently, clearly as ever... no wonder he is the most cherished one and this love story still invokes lot of things in me..
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Posted: 10 years ago
I watched this too indu di. And I promise I fe;l madly in love with the character ASR all over again. want to hug you for saying what all you said about him in this episode.
res want to talk about it.. uff why is there no time..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: indi52

episode 279/280

the most significant thing about these two episodes is, i really remember nothing.

except for maybe this.

honestly, nothing made a scratch or dent or scribble in the mind.

this could be because now i know the whole kidnap story is pointless and inept plot construction. whne i thought there was a story here, i did find khushi throwing herself into doing even what gives her the creeps to get her arnav ji back, intersting.

she uses the word "ghin" again and again while speaking of shyam... and later she told him he has no idea to what extent she can go for arnav ji... kis had talk gir sakte hain... how much i can fall, is i think what she says.

and in that the writers wrap up this sub plot idea neatly... but alas the main action has no meaning, so all this is pointless. made me think of the witness for the prosecution by agatha christie, where the wife does all sorts of things to save her husband, including dressing up as an old woman and making her own testimony seem unreliable, when the lawyer asks her if she'd done all this because so sure her husband was not the murderer, she replies, no, it was because she knew he was.


but here, forget a smashing twist, even the basic linear tale was not there...

and a confounding mystery.

how can those who had written telepathy for 278 and teri meri for 277, even begin to write janpath pendant pen drive bilge in the very nexyt episode.

and really, now that rhea has brought in chip and dale... why were nk and khushi doing that loud act at the poolside. don't they know that place is meant for subtle, sheer romance... fairylights, almost kisses, hamari dhadkane, throwing out of bride, divine hurlings of i hate you, hum bhi aap se nafrat karte hain, even crick in the neck and a checkout by forum girls of colour of underwear.

no no this is not the place to be discussing jiju's, ugh i hate this jiju thing, plans. and suddenly khushi starts talking about asking the right questions. how that would lead them to finding out his whereabouts. really?

"jab humey in sab sawalon ke jawab mil jaayenge toh who jawab humey arnav ji ke paas le jayga," sounds very interesting as though many questions will be answered... well, they won't. this is a whole lot of meaningless talk to keep the audience hooked.

did not work... because the most important sawal had not been asked...

dear audience, are you fools?

it was just assumed we were.

really bad episode... lots of hamming.

to add ipk style to a supposedly tense episode, some crazy funnies were added... payal, akash and buaji got caught in the chameli tel and eye making tactics of ensnaring your man.😆🤣 i did giggle, but not for long.



nani was worried about her grandson. at last, someone was saying something is strange about the man not coming back.

a lot of tense eyes swivelling around and giving me a headache later, shyam decided to have a rude conversation with rocky and tell him to send gifts to asr's home from asr. why must he sound so crass and almost careless. one rather funny thing though, kidnappers are getting fed up... they were not paid to work for so many days, the idea was to finish off the guy... not keep him alive, tolerate his ways, take care of his diabetes... oh the everyday problems of hoods and those they call boss.

one more thing, shyam, asr is in scotland according to the fam. i don't think you get in chandni chowk the things scotland is known for... watching this nonsense is making me want to have a couple of quick shots of a typically scottish thing.😆😆

however, since star plus, 4 lions and all writers have decided we are indeed not too affected by grey cells, rocky does some shopping in daryaganj or wherever, puts it in a cardboard carton and sends it off to shantivan... direct from scotland.😆😆

actually harry potter is from there, maybe the story could do with some help from wizards and witches. or perhaps we could get another scottish gentleman and his wife over, since clearly a murder is in the making. i speak of mr and mrs macbeth. oh all the hubble and bubble and toil and trouble of kidnap... but, dear people, what's the plot.

never mind... a gorgeous man, now looking extremely tired in a room stacked with cartons and dust and forever shamelessly naked bulbs, has rushed around madly for a pen, he will write a note on a restaurant bill to his wife telling her he is close to this place.

being the only one with some serious grey cells here and with a complete lack of love for hamming and melodrama, he gets straight to the point... can't write his name, must write something the kidnapper won't get, but the wife will. so what should he write...

feel like yelling at writer. you had to find some way to do that cutesie pie laad governor love note thing, to help khushi and nk reach the hideout. couldn't you find anything to exploit other than nani's love? and she should have been asking this question a few times before, then it might have made some sense also.

all along there's a feeling that the story is being constantly pushed around, changes at will, practically every day.

and that khushi in red all over shyam in his lust, was nauseating.




Indi that was really good one for laugh, I am coughing due to that...😆
Yes these people have written Telepathy and now this...Shame Shame

Gifts were sent by who...these people who don't know anything under Shyam's instructions and if teh boss is Nikama then chailey bhi waise hi honge na...

But Nani was thinking about him...

Now the Lust of this filthy man who is after money and honey...It was totally heartwrenching for me seeing Khushi going through all as how hard it must be for a girl who hates the person who nearly destroyed her , her family and now she has to win all and that is why when she said...hum kissi had tak ja sakte hain...I love her...because that is her extreme for her love ...her Arnavji

Underlined...I am having different point of view...

Poolside is not only for romance but it also a place where Anjali's Hubby can sit, can use to come and go to her room, can make plans to kill the child , his own unborn child by spreading broken pieces of glasses...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sohara

Episode-278


Arnav and Khushi both are despondent and distraught without each other. Sitting by her husband's eternal heaven his poolside, laying her head back Khushi is ebbing in the thought of her Arnavji, the love of her life. she closes her eyes to conceal the turbulent emotions frothing at the surface, battling hard to break free. Tears brim and flows from her closed eyelids.

In the dark warehouse, Arnav hollers Khushi, but Khushi is nowhere. He buries his head on his folded arms, what are kept on his knees. Darkness again envelopes around him, like the moon gets veiled by dense swathes of dark clouds make the night even darker. He lifts his face up. His handsome features are marred by intense pain; his eyes have the somber expression of a person intensely lost in thoughts. To mollify his tumultuous heart he tries to submerge in the cocoon of Khushi's thought.


He was in deep pain , has no clue what will happen and she was in her anguish state ...both alone in each others thoughts

And the gust of wind starts to blow wafting his mind to Khushi, so that he can talk to her and she can hear him.



Khushi sun skate Ho Mujhe. Can you hear me?... he says with billow of emotions.

Hamesha...always...her mind is completely overtaken by him.

tum tare dekh rani Ho Na...you are watching stars, right?

Khushi nods her head and looks at the sky, says, apke aur Humare Amma babu ji ko dekh rahi Hoon...watching your and my parents.

Humara parents ko...he swallows hard to control his emotion.

Tum he Pata he Yeh Baat Mujhe Ek saal pehele kahi hoti to maine usse Bishwas nahi karta. Lekin aaj, Mujhe Lagta he Ki Yeh Baat sach hai.

(You know, if any body told this to me one year ago, I wouldn't believe him. But today, I think it's true)...his voice sounds tired but it is seeped with a touching need to have his lonely heart assuaged to be reassured by any means possible.

Humne apse tab Bhi Kaha Tha na ki Baat sach ya jhoot Ki nahi, Baat Bishwas Ki. Ek atoot Bishwas.

( I told you then, it's nothing about true or false, it's about your credence. A strong credence.)

Tumne Mujhe Yeh Bishwas Pe Bishwas dilaya. (You made me believe this fact)

ye Kya Kar diya Khushi Tum Ne mere saath...what have you done to me...he smiles with disbelief.

Itni koshish Ki Maine. Itni zada koshish Ki tumse nafrat Kar Sakoo. par Mai tumse nafrat Kar hi Nahi Paya. Mera Khud Ka Dil meri Baat hi nahi maan Paya.

( I tried so hard, tried so hard to hate you. I just couldn't hate you. My own heart couldn't make me understand.)

He says in voice laden with contrition. Yes he hadn't been able to completely thwart a feeling of self doubt that had been gnawing at his heart ever since he met her. Unbeknownst to himself, she had permeated in his heart and seeped deep in his soul, slowly, stealthily and with infinite gentleness.


Yes he couldn't , he just couldn't and that is why sahi aur ghalat has no meaning at this point...he loves her and she loves him


Aur humne Kitni koshish Ki apse Pyaar Na Karneke Liye. Lekin humari Dil Ne Bhi humari Baat nani mani...she shuts her eyes to control her emotions.

You know Khushi, Mai jab Bhi Tumhari Paas Hota hoon...his voice is deep dense with emotion. Hamesha tumse door Jaane Ki jaldi mei reheta Hoon.

Lekin jaise hi tumse door jata Hoon, Hamesha Tumhare Paas aneka khayal reheta hai. I don't need anything else Khushi. I don't need anything.

His voice constricts more and his adam apple bulbs up and down as he swallows in an attempt to thwart a rising wave of emotions.

Aap Paas Rahoon ya door, lekin Ho to humari saath hi Na.

Yeh dooriyan humari rishton Ko Kaam Zore nahi Bana sakte hai Na.

Jo Ki hum Ek doosre Ke sun sakte hai, mehsos Kar sakte hai.

Ek doosre Se bate Kar sakte hai. Abhi Bhi hum Baat hi to Kar Rahee Na.

(you stay near or far, but you are always with me, this distance can weakens our relationship, because we can hear each other, feel each other, talk to each other. That exactly what we are doing right now.)

Arnav nods his head and a glimmer of smile glints his face.

Aap humare sath hai Aur door, bohot jaldi, aap Humko wapaas Le ayenge.

Aur Yeh humari wada hai apse arnavji.

(you are with me or far from me, pretty soon I will bring you back. and it's my promise to you.)

He smiles as if he is hearing her and having credence in her words.

Khushi touches her chest where her heart is hammering behind her rib cage.

Dhak Dhak Dhak Dhak

Can you hear my heart beat? aap sun sakte hai Humari dil Ki Dhadkan?

Hamesha,,...he nods his head. Hamesha; he aspirated to utter Hamesha as if the assurance made their heart assailed with fresh reservation.

After talking to each other they felt as their pent up misery finally found a release and their face beheld a perfect mirror of tranquility. Both leans down their head behind, tries to feel each other. Though they are looking decadent, but a deluge of indecipherable and powerful feelings of love washes across their hearts, as their love and trust dilute.


Loop closed ...she answers Hamesha and he finishes with Hamesha..No room of denial...now its next phase of acknowledgement...before accepting compleletly...putting all the ego aside

They were in soliloquy, but it was actually a conversation between them what is nothing but some kind of sublime telepathy.

In the wake of realization there raged some severe tempest in their life which threatened to throw thoughts, emotions and every thing else that stood in its path, into complete chaos. But in spite of that only one thought reigned supreme over this inner, conflict ravaged landscape...their unconditional love. It was intermingled with heartache, abhorrence, bittersweet memories, a burgeoning desire, what is blessed with something wonderful called love, a love that avowed to cross all obstacles.

U said it beautifully and explained it so nicely...that underlined is what made them to overcome with all of these hurdles...

Khushi is lying down on her bed, looks derelict without Arnav. Suddenly the power goes off. She gets scared and sits up in fear. She recollects how Arnav brought fireflies for her. But when the fire lies flew away, she was not scared at all, cause Arnav was there by her side as a protector, the light of her life. As she can't see him anywhere, a pensive thought broke through the hovering cloud of gloom. She suddenly feels that somebody entered her room. Arnav's name comes out from her mouth involuntarily.

It's Shyam who came with the candle. He thought she must be scared, that's why he brought light for her. In the dark room, shyam's presence felt sinister. He now dares to come in Arnav's bed room in the night. How gradually he is encroaching Arnav's possession, disgruntled me. Khushi is in revulsion to see him in her room,😡 but she tries to dissimulate.

Shyam says she should not feel awkward, as he will not do any such thing what can make her uncomfortable. He says, as both of their intention is same, they should be united. When Khushi looks at him with bafflement, he mends that we should support each other and she must know how he feels for her. Before leaving he says that she must asks him whatever she wants. After he left Khushi utters Arnavji with so much longing. She is missing him so much and wishing if Arnav was here to protect her from that filthy man!

That's why when he accepts to remarry her in front of hitler Daadi , he looks ather...hum dono phir se...because he does that only for her...and Payal also makes her understand...but his reminding her each and every ritual was the way to show her that their relationship was meant to be for eternity

When Khushi was still embroiling in the vortex of tumultuous thought, NK comes there. She initially got scared to see his silhouette, thought Shyam came back again. Nk can sense her embroilment. He tells her to relax. But Khushii is woebegone; she feels infernal inwardly, to act with Shyam. He tries to touch her in any excuse. When she sees nk's bewilderment, she controls immediately. Nk is ambiguous, what did she mean! Khushi prevaricated the truth and says because of work purpose she has to be around him, what she is not liking at all. She thinks as Shyam is very cunning, they have to be careful. Nk tries to comfort her, that's why they should ignore and focus on their goal. Khushi assents him and she also came to know how to handle Shyam. She has to keep a keen eye on him. NK supports her, they will sure endeavor.

Payal fears to go to office party with Akash. She is asking him who are coming and all. Akash can sense her awkwardness, so he tells her if she feels uncomfortable, she doesn't have to go. Payal feels good. But when she calls bua to tell her that she didn't go with Akash, bua chides her, she made a mistake, she should go with him. Payal becomes sad. bua tells her to come to her place, she will teach her everything.

Bua is Payal's mentor. Payal tu to gayi kamse!😆 poor payal

Shyam is having problem with his goondas. Rocky tells him about the problem. Shyam tells him to pay them more money and keep them shut.

I am surprised, where did some get so much money! Rani Sahiba

When he was scolding rocky on the phone, Khushi comes there with kheer. She brought kheer for Anjali. Shyam tells Anjali is not here, but she can leave the kheer here. Khushi thanks him for the last night, as he brought candle for her. She is scared of darkness Shyam tells her rhetorically that, he will not let the darkness come near her. Khushi abominates but tells him to eat the kheer. Shyam tells her to feed him with her hand. When he sees khushi's awkwardness he tells her not to misunderstand him. As both of their aim is same and as a Shagun, she should feed him a spoon. Khushi fells in to a predicament, what she supposed to do, to win his trust she should feed him. She cringes inwardly with abhorrence. Her trembling hand rises up to feed him. Shyam ogles her lasciviously. But Anjali reprieves her by entering there right then. She gets a bit incredulous to see Khushi feeding Shyam, but doesn't ponder her thought when Khushi says that she brought kheer for her and jijaji wanted to taste, so she was feeding him. As she came now, she should feed him. Anjali trusts her and happily goes to feed her swindler husband. Khushi looks at Shyam with embroilment. Shyam also looks at her tries to comfort her.😡

Bua is teaching Payal how to tame Akash. She thinks she should sing and use her eyes to seduce him. When Payal doesn't get what she was saying bua chides her, that she is a budhuu.

really she is a dolt, a dumbo.

Khushi tells NK about shyam's phone convo. She is sure Shyam is going to give those goons money. Nk thinks to follow him. Khushi also wants to accompany him.

She hears Shyam is telling Anjali that he is going outside. Khushi comes on his way and asks him where is he going?

Shyam doesn't tell the truth but he can stay back if she doesn't want him to go. Khushi says, he should go.

Khushi thinks it's a very good opportunity to follow him, to see where he goes.


[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZM1uNBTDtgo[/YOUTUBE]

credit goes to the maker




Sohara,😊👏

Lovely up there with telepathy...I just loved when they accept with Hamesha...both of them...That was the end of denial...my thoughts are in between
Loved this VM and what happened to gifs???
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: MehreenB


Beautiful connections Apu👏

Didn't occur to me , he wanted to kiss her hand that day when he saw his name in it and today he did indeed finished the job after she calls his name Arnavji.A single key of two beating hearts.


Thnx Mehr 😊

Tht pink is what this all matters in between them as always


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Katelyn

I'd like to share this song...ASR I'm coming home...

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=u-6Yg8RSRqw[/YOUTUBE]


DL: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=u-6Yg8RSRqw

credit to uploader


I love this one Kate👏 Yes he is coming home

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