Firstly, Thank You for dedicating for LOLWA. That gave her tension filled brainwa some relaxation 😳 I so like you for that DJ 😃
Coming to the update...
I started laughing with the first dialogue itself 😆😆 (I can't copy paste it 😡 You are so nasty 🤢)
The examination and Khushi not helping Lavanya... Hahahahahaha... I went back in time. When I did my exams 😆😆 I too never help people during exams 😉 But there was this guy: we study in the same school, who was peeping into my paper, even after knowing who I am (😈) Lol... It was my science paper and you know HOW GOOD I AM IN SCIENCE 😆 I let him copy 🤣 Wonder what his results were 😆 Hahahahaha... the same reason why even I don't help others 😉
So-pe, they were having soft-corners for each other but as usual did not confess 😳 Payal spoiled it all 🤢
Ah haan... there comes the entry of LOLWA 😉 Why doesn't Khushi spares a glance towards LOLWA? 😡 What is she? How could she resist LOLWA? 😆
Payal is so intelligent 😆 By the way, where is Akash? 😛 I wonder if this vacation consisted of some interesting shy 'Akash' 😆 Okay now, Khushi rejected Payal's invitation while she accepted Arnav's, that too without a second thought... How can one deny Arnav? 😳
Bwahahahahahaha... did she just say, adventurous and fun 🤣 That was really the lamest reason ever. DJ you proved you are lame 😆😆😆
Deee Jaaayyy!!!! 😈 Do you do that? 😉 Asking your Papa to recharge so that you can...? 😆 I have started doubting, beware! 😆 But that was sweet, I love how she yearns to talk to Arnav 😳
The phone convo was a calm and sweet one 😳 Why did Payal call? 😡 Why do you writers like interrupting them? 😡 A good one by Khushi to Payal, she deserves it 😛
Hahahahaha...Someone used that line on me a year before 😆 I am talking about 'I am gonna ask him, if I want to get any of my things which involves you' 😉 Oh yeah, it's a her not him 😛
You have perfectly used LOLWA accent there 😳 It was as if LOLWA really was there with Arnav 😳 Stylish and the perfect Hindi flow 😃
'Looking for me, princess', Okay now why the hell is he using 'Princess'? That sounds so cheesy and unlike himself 😛 Anyways, I'll move on 😆
Aweee... that scene was such perfection there. 👏 'Naak laal ho gai hai' and the peck 😳 I Love Love Love Love it! ❤️
Yar that's so 'Ewww...' She did not wash her face for days 🤢🤢🤢😆😆😆 I think maybe her face wash was over and her financial state was down 😆😆
Hahahahahaha... Arnav fumbling on his words is really funny Just like you DJ 😆😆 The teasing LOLWA comes again... Hai hai, LOLWA you never told that you are planning a 'Love Marriage'😆😉
The mischievous LOLWA 😆 See, you always wanted t play ArShi's cupid and now you have really done it! Congratulations 👏👏👏😆😆😆😆 DJ, you Rock! 😆
And the whole terrace scenario was ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Lastly a Rabbbaaa veee ending! 👏 It was flawless 😳 I loved the whole plot 👏I am very choosy and don't find everyone's writing enjoyable, even the forums best writers. But I found yours really thrilling and enjoyable. You really have a nice writing style *Hats off*
Continue writing buddy! 😃 No offense about the writers comment 😳
As I told in ma previous post, I wished to read more LOLWA-Arnav part 😳
Arjun
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