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Posted: 11 years ago
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yo yo dj .. 😳


this a comment which i am writing right now and this dedicated to the cutest person i have known on IF dee_j aka my dee jayy / deepu/ dj no more arshi fan πŸ˜†

COMMENT FOR YOUR OS : CRAZIER

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dj ! how well did you start this OS well , what i mean is the perfect examination hall atmosphere πŸ˜† students whispering and sometimes begging and whispering the other one to tell the answer . The moment lavanya called khushi a nerdy b** i was like 😲 acha kiya answer nai btaya lavanya ki bachi ko 😑 btameez πŸ˜›

intentionally or intentionally , khushi had to look to arnav s direction when he had whispered chh chh khushiπŸ˜† aha ! abhi arnav ko tou cheating kraye ka pari πŸ˜‰


oh my my ! who is this lolwa ?dj .. 😳 such a cute , sweet , pretty , lovely girl πŸ˜† arnav is so lucky to have her as his bestie πŸ˜ƒ

ya so true khushi never spares me a glance when i ask her a question πŸ˜† maybe because she is jelly of me ? nai πŸ˜‰.. as i am arnav s bestoo friendoo πŸ₯³


payal s and khushi s convo was cute-ishly funny . i was -->πŸ˜ƒ<--- while reading that πŸ˜†
poor payal .. finally realized that she will have to ask arnav if she wanted khushi to do anything πŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒ

did i tell you before that i liked the part where arnav had called khushi and she missed it only to be so restless later on . πŸ‘πŸΌβ­οΈπŸ‘ bang on hai πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

i think i have told you this that the foot ball ground scene is the best scene ( except me πŸ˜†) in the OS . The flirty raizada is always ❀️ and the best thing about your writing style is .. it is easy to read . i never get uncomfortable reading any part of your OS' πŸ˜ƒ .. oh i loved when pecked at her cheek ..and πŸ˜† she did nt wash her face πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

and the valentines question πŸ˜‰

aha !1 my entry just after THE RAIZADA fumbles infront of a girl πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰

may ny mari entry aur dill mai baji ghanti yar tan! tan! tan! tan !πŸ₯³


arey lolwa in the party too ...

o balley balley i made arshi meet


( thnx chandani )

and i dragged khushi πŸ˜†( not literally)
but yes i made arshi meet and confess ;D


thank you so much dj for writing and sharing this cutest OS with us and more than that thank you so much for dedicateing it to me πŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒ it really really feels nice . trust me πŸ˜ƒ and its the first OS being dedicated to me wholely and solely to me 😎 again a muah to you


πŸ€— thank you :) and everyone who agrees that i am crazy , thanks :D i am 'crazy ' and i know it πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†

i loved yur comments including my name in them . like button does not always work ..sorry .. but be assured i read and loved each comment .

dj .. keep writing and keep dedicating to me πŸ˜†

may God bless you with a lot of success and endless happiness .. hamesha πŸ˜ƒ



Edited by AALUSLOLWA - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Me... 😈

this is such a cute OS Dee...
i am in love with this young Arnav and young Khushi... loved this nerd-brilliant-oh-so-serious Khushi... if she was in my AD, we would call her 'Aatel'...loved her...
its evident that Arnav too was very much affected by her from the beginning...
loved ArShi friendship... small small, sweet sweet moments... these are the moments to be cherished later... these things are what make life beautiful... loved them...
and the proposal finally... lovely... beautifully written Dee...

PS : i love Arnav's bestie here...πŸ˜›

Edited by nishu_shorna - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sooo beautiful πŸ‘
Loved the OS. how I wish
I get my Mr Perfect like this too 😳
Awesome πŸ‘
Very well written πŸ˜ƒ
Edited by kidrauhlforever - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Taken :)
Edited
Such a lovely dovey cute OS Deepa..!!
You have nailed this perfectly..
The entire journey starting right from their 10th and coming to halt with the love confession has been beautifully penned down.!!
Not to forget, Lolwa's special appereance in the OS was icing on the cake.
reading this brought a smile on my lips..
Claps to Lolwa for keeping Arnav sane all this while with her friendship.
Hugs to Lolwa and you... <3
Edited by Pearl_Oyster - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This was such a cute and feel good OS Dee.

More to be followed (I'm so silly. I first read then took the spot πŸ˜›)

Anyways I loved this crazy story with the crazy tadka of Lolwa πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†
Lolwa your name is Saiyeda 😲 ya phir Saiyyu ka maara (saali adhi gharwaliπŸ˜†)
It's so cute to read about two people who have known each other for so long, have liked and developed feelings for each other. Arnav was cute here. Khushi was Khushi.😳 I loved Lolwa's and Payal's teasing their friends. Friedns isiliye hote hain πŸ˜†
And that terrace scene was perfect. Ek terrace pe 2 saal pehle ek MU hua tha and aaj ek terrace pe do dil mil gaye 😳
Loved it Dee... Keep writing...
Edited by aquagal - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow That was such a sweet os
Wah Lolwa united ArHI here.That was cute
And Khushi she does everything for Arnav
And hahaha Poor Payal When she asked NO when Arnav asked YES
And Lolwa's name is Sayeda just got to know that
Such a cute os it was
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res.
Unresd.
Loved the OS.
Arnav and Khushi were so lovely.

That exam scene remainded me of my board exam.

U wrote ths OS in an awesome way.

Keep writing OSs like ths .

Thanks 4 the PM.
Edited by ..Sangu.. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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omggg tht was simp;y awesome one
loved it awe sooo cute <3 <3
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awww that was wonderful yet beautiful OS...

Really, Kushi is is crazy, nah too much crazy...

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