arshi ff: without you... #3, chapters 28 - epilogue **completed**

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Deepa876

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Posted: 10 years ago

#981

Dearest Indi,
Read all of this ff in one go and I just loved it so very much. While reading it sometimes I was on the edge of my seat, sometimes crying and laughing and lots of times blushing and going awww over Arnav & Khushi.
This story is so much like IPKKND or I should it's way better than the original series. This is what makers should have shown us. Instead of letting their beautiful hard work go down the drain.
Anyways loved this story & your amazing writing. Please do start a new ff, cos we need a great story again & we don't have enough talented writers like u on the forum. Also a big kudos to you for completing this story & not abandoning it like other people have on the forum. As a reader I'm really thankful to u for that. Keep rocking and hoping to read something great from you soon. Take care.

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indi52

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Posted: 10 years ago

#982

hi deepa876,

thank you so much. i am so happy to read without you touched you in so many ways. it's dear to me, my first attempt at fanfiction. was wonderful to go through the whole thing, the thinking, the writing, then listening to readers.

i do wish ipk were never allowed to slip for it's one of the most beautiful things ever... rare and precious and maybe through my stories i just try and say that... again and again.

about a new story, i am thinking about it a lot these days... maybe soon. thank you so so much again. take care.

"dearest indi"... thanks for writing that.

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Anu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#983

i just happened to read this in the passing...once started i just couldn stop at all...it was wonderful story and an intense one too...especially arnav...i loved the way u had described his taughts...the way he starts imagining stuff randomly was intriguing and quiet confusing to follow...but the beauty lies in it as u follow the story...i loved arnav s dedication of love on khushi and her selfless love for arnav as well...indeed a brilliant story i would never forget :)

I am very happy with the way it ended as well...as set and happy...just a small wish to read about arnav-khsuhi s children and how arnav would react to it...if u could please write an os continuing this story or a second epilogue...i would just literally fall flat! please if u can...

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indi52

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Posted: 10 years ago

#984

hi soapopera,

i love you name.

so glad you found this story and enjoyed it. it is a bit confusing i know and i do appreciate your making the effort to read. glad you love the relationship of arnav and khushi, it is beautiful. about children, i have been asked to think of this by anotherreader of my other story... will seriously give it a thought and if a compelling idea comes, will certainly right, thank you again for reading without you.

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Shamz

@Shamz94

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Posted: 10 years ago

#985

Loved it amazing just out of words really

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indi52

@indi52

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Posted: 10 years ago

#986

^^^

hiyutim

thank you so much. i hope you enjoy the story.

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anukap

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Posted: 10 years ago

#987

Dear Indi,

great to read without you too...you brought alive ipk and took it to level the makers and writers could not even think of. Arnav and khushi stayed true to their characters in your story till the very end, which was not the case on the tv show...of course sanaya and barun did a fab job of playing them and making a place in our hearts hamesha...

As a first ff this was way up there amongst the best stories.

love your work and will now get down to reading the os's.

Hope you will continue writing...cheers!

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indi52

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Posted: 10 years ago

#988

^^^

hi anu,

yay... you liked without you? i am happy and really appreciate your reading both the stories. was smiling as i read your comment. i'd never ever imagined i'd write fanfiction. but i did and it was the most fun thing. absorbing. i do wish the writers had taken their beautiful story all the way to where they could have. you're right, post 200 started an odd tussle between good and bad story telling, 311 on it was clear who had won, but barun and sanaya never ever gave up and kept something alive till the very end.

thanks for reading the shorter ones. hope they're fun. see you.

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akai

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Posted: 10 years ago

#989

It's really very lovely. Ur writing bring emotions from the heart which is bottledup inside.

It's little different versions of original story but it seemed nice.

Ur nice. Keep going. Like to read more..

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indi52

@indi52

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Posted: 10 years ago

#990

^^^

hi akai,

thank you. so glad you enjoyed without you. i do hope to write some more, will let you know. thanks again, great to see another happy reader.