arshi ff: without you... #3, chapters 28 - epilogue **completed** - Page 98

Originally posted by: Angellic_doll

Read this story almost this entire week...
Loved it... It was a beautiful journey of arshi...

Originally posted by: indi52

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thank you...

thank you...

thank you...


durga,

for that gorgeous comment up there. i am so so grateful that you enjoyed it so much. i too don't read fanfiction and after these two i may never write any more too, but asr particularly and khushi too have given me things as a person who likes to write which i can't describe in words. not really.

they kept me tied to my keyboard wanting to tell a story.

just for that i owe them so much.

roshni.

she tumbled into the story gurgling though i had major doubts and reservations. yet, the stories of nurses and strange things that happen in hospitals and the fact that anjali was almost full term kept playing in my head. it was like my insides wanted to correct a terrible wrong completely forgetting this is merely a tv soap. and asr... i could see him standing there staring at the little girl and a million strains of love and restoration playing in him. he deserves a break dammit.

I really loved that scene when Arnav meets his niece for the first time. Could visualise it clearly. I am glad you had an unsettling feeling and brought Roshni back. 😊

khushi in an off the shoulder dress... you are right in your way of seeing it. i felt, this coma and near death of asr has nudged deep essential places in her and she would take steps never contemplated before, touched by that. he likes her in that dress, that may be enough for her... and really if you're slim and not too voluptuous, an off the shoulder with a not too low cut bodice can look pretty elegant not so "sexy".

i am passing out thinking of asr just looking at her. 😆 Ha, ha. Ok, ok. I get your point. Case rested. 😃

may i hug you and look embarrassed as hell when you say i get asr like no one else. i don't think i do... but i do love him and i do wish him only good things. he is a man my land could do with. and he is complex, not only good, plenty bad, bits highly unresolved and yet so deep and strong... i would love to watch him go through his years, see how he evolves. and i think khushi loves his complexity too, it excites her. Why do I feel there will be a 'without you - bees saal baad' sometime in the next few years? 😉 😆

thanks for liking the drama at sheesh mahal... nothing was simple there, nothing was sweet... i had to go there to find out. something gul khan should really have insisted on as the originator of this character and his story. She should have, that was the crux of the story, something they had intended to go to right from the start. Felt disappointed when the past didn't get the digging it deserved. Thanks for making up for it, and how! 👏

durga, i will not insist, but if you can ever bring yourself to... read those bits you didn't. i want an opinion... did it feel real and asr khushi or just silly done up generic so called hot. i attempted he former. Mmm... I wouldn't say I skipped entirely. When their act would begin, I would start skipping words, jumping across lines to see where their act ended and the next scene would start. You write in such a way that in the middle of their act they would start fighting with each other, or would start talking about something important or go into a confessional mode. Of course, the second time I read, I happily skip the part with a sigh of relief. 😆 Coming to your question, before the London trip, the scenes were written with passion and fitted the story (of course for me it was always overboard. You know, I wouldn't even create such a scene.😆) But during the London trip, I felt there was too much of it and I did skip reading at more places than usual. Anyway, I think thanks to you, my tolerance limit has improved a little post the Chapter 1 shocker. 😆

you like his helicopter thoughts? and her bakbak... imagine a wife in that state, her man in a coma. both so young, so much in love. but khushi would not give in or give up... there's a reason i can't let go of ipk... Indi, there are some scenes ... infact many in wy ... which just register in your mind, makes an impression. All those scenes I listed out in my previous comment came out of my memory. I haven't read those earlier chapters for sometime now. When I thought of wy and how the story started and progressed, all those scenes popped up and I jotted them down as I recalled them. That's the impression you've left in my mind. Unforgettable and classic in its own right. 😳

see ya and bahut dhanyavad.

published or not... my friends read it. matters. bas. 🤗