arshi ff: without you... #3, chapters 28 - epilogue **completed** - Page 95

Originally posted by: anamika00

a beautiful ending for a very beautiful story...:)

Originally posted by: IronButterfly

What a lovely ending.

Enjoyed this journey with you and of course we will meet again.

Originally posted by: archmink

Starting of a beautiful bigening

Originally posted by: srya

i really wished that this story never come to an end...i realy likr every part of this fiction...ur way of writing and putting forward the views of each and every character in the story pull us to read it out again and again...the emotions make our heart stir with joy, tears with the pace of the each and every event occurs in the life of khusi and arnav...hope u write more of this type of fiction.. so that we who are glued to laptop for ur fiction will be obliged...

Originally posted by: shiv456

superb

Originally posted by: Raadhiyaaa

superb ending

Originally posted by: wiwy

In di it was a brilliant conception, moving the story back to Sheeshmahal where the family really belonged!

It was in Sheeshmahal where Anjali' s marriage had broken so many years ago and now she gets married at the very place and above all gets her true happiness back with her husband and child with her Chhotey and Khushiji andNani and Mami and all by her side!

As for our Arnav Khushi I felt ASR had come back a full circle in the last update. That feel grew stronger in this one with both finding themselves in the swimming pool of love! Lol! Now whether they stay afloat or drown...it will be in love, faith, trust hamesha...with a housefull of their kids brightening up with their smiles and giggles the darkest corners of Sheeshmahal and of their father's heart...sigh!

This is the epilogue of without you, I should be feeling sad, but strangely I am not...ajeeb!

Thank you In di for that

The story shall go on feeling...

Originally posted by: .ArshiHamesha.

Indi👏

I remember when I asked you, r u out of your mind.Why are you starting from this point as I hate that and now you have ended that journey by changing the directions of wind, water, Fire and all and have crafted an immortal story . thank so much,faiqa. yeah, pagal to have started with an accident of asr.

Indeed Arnav and Khushi will always live in our parallel world because that is the true reality. true, they are me parallel world really.

Now among couple of things, My most fav part of this story is

The progression of love and comfort among this couple...

he married her for all wrong reasons but her belief in him never left her...he was lying there helpless knowing even unconsciously that she is here because his heart was beating for her.His unsaid sorry and her unconditional forgiveness is what makes this story a unique one. real love i sense they share, so glad you felt that even as he lay unconscious.

Their journey to Nainital and the moments under the stars, her kidnapping, his following the heart steps which always aches in those walls but he found the truth ...a truth , a reason, a love to kill the rooted ,unwanted thoughts which always made him disturbed...

Their trust on each other while coming out of that mess and then Shyam's truth to reveal and finding his evilness... thanks, faiqa... a bit filmi it all was, but real life i have often found, is filmi and yes, when he turned and ran back toward the conflict and she didn't even think of questioning him, i liked that. but he didn't kill him...no matter what...but hardest of all to accept the death of this child...

His belief that she is alive took him where she is .a tiny heartbeat which connected him to his beliefs to make him alive again .A 14 years old who lost that day had brought everything back into his life.His uncle threw him out but he diminished and erased that act with his action...That is my most fav part of your story.

he is a man who acts. he doesn't sit and cogitate and wonder and blame, he just does what he thinks he should, i adore this trait. thank you for elucidating how he erases all that is negative by his actions.

Anjali got his life back...Drji is nice but ajeeb in my sense...may be ajeeb is way better than teh other alienated form. aww, maybe i should have shown more of vijay verma, but he is opening up slowly.. a solemn, committed man who has been touched by life and has a connect with anjali.

Love Love the ending...👏

Hamesha...to be continued in our parallel imagination

Originally posted by: sohara

Indi, please don't try to make me believe that it was your first ff. he he it is my first.

what a beautiful ending! thank you. muaah.

You are really such an amazing writer. um thank you thaaank you hugs.

Hats off.👏

Asr and khushi 's story will never end for us. never... this is for hamesha.

Anjal's wedding was blissful. She lost so much in life, but finally is bestowed by a beautiful girl and an awesome husband. She truly deserves this.

Rosh and her mamu's bonding is so cute. He actually is ready to have kids. i will tell him sohara said that. 😉

But 4 kids! 😆 yeah, laad governor and sanka devi haven't heard of family planning.

Khushi got his nephew too, her aloo kumar.

The whole family looks happy and settled.

Will sure miss this story.

Originally posted by: Arshi67

The banner is exquisite Indi. I love it! thank you. that scene, wo.

How perfectly you showed life come to a full circle. Bas the difference in emotions between tab aur ab, is zameen aasman ka. Our journey with them ending where it all started. glad there was a sense of a journey and change. and you enjoyed that.

Naniji, indeed such a gracious lady. What better way to eradicate bad memories than to subsume them in happy ones. Those ones which I'll carry with me from "Without You" hamesha. this is really sweet of you to say, thank you so much.

You know in the show, Khushi had said "Sambhal liya" to which he'd responded "hamesha sambhalta rahunga". It's she who has sambhaloed him, has understood him. has made him whole again. You've showed the two of them truly to be "meant everything" to the other. they were, i was chatting with wiwy and rhea on reblast, i see them as, essential to each other. she unlocks him, his heart and becomes his sukoon. he infuses in her a sense of belonging, which as an orphan she may not have had in an inalienable sort of way, he changes that, takes her home, to his heart. i sound soupy but kya karoon, am like that only.

Thank you :)