arhi os: cloudburst

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Sharmila

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

I indeed enjoyed reading it. It was beautiful.

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javeria

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Wonderful one shot 👏

Love your insightful turn to one of the important scene where Arnav listened to his heart and accepted that farak Parhta hai

Love the way you describe the sensuous kiss they shared and Arnav healing khushi's wound by sucking it and the rain did rest of the magic.

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

^^^

hey javeria,

thanks so much... this one was for supriya's bday 😳. wanted to give her hot gift. glad you enjoyed the rain.

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jg12

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Beautiful. Really enjoy your OS and how you start from a scene in the series but make it much more better .

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wiwy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Yay! you posted it at long last in di! 😃 what a wondrous burst of ethereal eternal love!👏

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: jg12
Beautiful. Really enjoy your OS and how you start from a scene in the series but make it much more better .

hi jg,

thanks so much... glad you came and read and liked.

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: wiwy
Yay! you posted it at long last in di! 😃 what a wondrous burst of ethereal eternal love!👏

hi wiwy,

yeah thought i might as well... thanks for reading again.

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

^^^

thank you, esamoe. 😳

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Arnav_Khushifan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Indrani what a treat again!!!! I just love the way you take a scene from the show and make it so much better. This was a hot one and Khushi was an equal participant. A bold Khushi 😉😉. I like that. Thank you for posting this one and sharing with us.

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: Arnav_Khushifan
Indrani what a treat again!!!! I just love the way you take a scene from the show and make it so much better. This was a hot one and Khushi was an equal participant. A bold Khushi 😉😉. I like that. Thank you for posting this one and sharing with us.

hi rashmi, me glad you read and liked. good to see you.

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