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sk2405

@sk2405

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#71

Akash's description was so much like Arnav and honestly I did consider it to be that way. But this was entirely different. I loved all the characters in the OS and the way they met, courted and fell in love with each other.

Anjali defintely played a very big part in making Arnav a strong man and then Khushi played a bigger role in keeping his confidence intact. The way she appreciated and not sympathized with him was perfect. About Akash, I seriously think he should realize that his best friend is a happily married man and has loads of other priorities too. If nothing else, he needs to learn the sense of timing.

Lovely OS!

Waiting to read many more. 😊

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Neetz11690

@Neetz11690

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#72

just one word fabulous loved it awesomely written😊

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Sutapa Sarbabhom

@sutapasarbabhom

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#73

Always lov ur storis its amazing thanx for sharing waiting for ur another magic

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Aishwarya

@Aish002

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#74

O.MG...that was such a cute story with so much romance n a little bit of everything...

in the beginning i thought this story was going to go the predictable way of Arnav being the cricketing superstar n all...So glad u made him the normal guy and gave a backstory for him..

Loved this O.S and do write more...xoxo😊

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badfaith4u

@badfaith4u

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#75

That was too good
First I thought the cricketer was Arnav, not Akash
I liked how Arnav rebuilt his life
Khushi was so cute and adorable

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sindhu

@misscrazyfan

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#76

i just cant express how much i adored and loved this cute little story of arshi

the contrast personalities and varied professions but united together with single feeling called love,,

these souls r amazing yaar,,what ever we read and write r just more than apt for arshi

i though she was dreaming abt ASR in the beginning but alas it is aakash,,seriously😡

and arnav is limping,,this a great shock ever i have read ever..amazing touching point🤗

and khushi is ballet dancer,,ofcourse she is a swing dancer,,,

and the chemistry they created,,they talked,,,moved,,,loved lived are just heavenly,,

at the end fussng over her x fav akash was so cute😉

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l.o.v.e.

@l.o.v.e.

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#77

Hayeee...sooo cute...she hate akash now b'coz of that now. Lol...

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Param

@pup03

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#78

wow superb OS !!! loved it..

thanks for pm 😊

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mansijani21

@mansijani21

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#79

Superb story
Loved it 😊

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Nandz

@Nandz

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#80

First of all cheeni congrats on trying something new!
M sure we all must have thought that the cricketer was Arnav but surprisingly he turned out to be manager!
You know arnav's story reminded me of another such player's story! Hockey player jugraj singh's! I remember he was a young shinning start, with a brilliant promising career in hockey! He had contributed majorly in winning india it only under 18 hockey world cup! But then he was met with a major accident! N this put a brake on his career as a hockey player! Though i believe he had turned coach of something !

Anyway coming bk to story yes it was brave of Arnav to move on n giving up on your dreams specially wen he had such a brilliant future ahead of him! But then had he not been reckless and driving carefully he would have saves him this ordeal!

Anyway i loved how their love story progressed! N khushi was mighty bold i must say! She proposed the guy herself! Though i didnt get how relevant ballet dance was to the story! I mean just that momentarily arnav got dissuaded seeing her dance like that? I mean y did he? He didnt have to dance for her? Nor did she ever demand that? I mean she enjoyed dancing n that was it! I didnt see why Arnav thgt what he did after seeing her dance!

Though i defintely loved the last bit! I mean imagine once her fav cricketer, her hero now turned in to her nemesis! Who would have thought that?

It was another cute os cheeni!
Keep dishing out such sweet OSs from time to time!!