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cheesemad

@cheesemad

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

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avni_barun

@avni_barun

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

I am super happy and dancing after reading this amazing piece of work...
You are a Rockstar cheeni...

U know na i love cricket but tujhe e nahi pata hoga dat I love dancing as well (aata nahi hai par)... 😉
So I just loved this OS...

Initially I was thinking Khushi is Arnav's fan but vo to Akash nikla... 😛

Khushi called him dumbo.. 😲 😡 😡 😆 😆 😆

Arnav couldn't walk properly since 8yrs... 😭 😭

She didn't meet Akash after meeting Arnav... Mere Arnav ke saamne sab fikee lagte hain... 😉 😳

Didn't know y I had tears in my eyes after reading abt Arnav's accident... 😭 😭
May be I am crazy...

Cheeni I loved Khushi's words...She was so right...Arnav was an inspiration and ur thoughts which came from Khushi's words inspired me...
Simply amazing... 👏 👏 👏

Felt bad after reading Anjali's words which Arnav told Khushi... 😔

Dumbo and then buddhu...Ye ladki kya chati hai... 😡

"Mike Tyson ke khandan ki ho kya?" 🤣 🤣 Your sense of humor is superb yaar...

So Khushi confessed her love and made him confess as well... ❤️

I cant believe Khushi behaved with Akash like dat... 😆
"He is still alive just because he was the reason I met you!" 🤣
I like it... 😆

That was sooo cute and adorable...
I just loved it completely...
Superb writing Cheeni... 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 ⭐️
Will wait for the next... 😉

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Soujanya

@SSK27997

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

Yaay!!!im second!!!anyway that was a beautiful os!!!thanks for sharing!!!

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javeria

@Javeria3991

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

Awesome 👏

The settings in which Arnav and Khushi met with each other, Khushi being a crazy cricket fan and Arnav an impressive man who didn't loose hope to live life even when he became disable, are stupendous. I love their characters.

Khushi was crazy and absolutely cute throughout the story and that's why Arnav couldn't escape from her charm and fell hard for her.

Love it that when Arnav back down from proposing Khushi but Khushi didn't let him leave and herself confess the love and propose him. I love her silly yet funny English mix Hindi dialogues.

Love the one shot.

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C3_IF

@C3_IF

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

that was an super cute OS...luv ur writings 😊 👏

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ll..Gungun..ll

@ll..Gungun..ll

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

Awww this one was sooo cute
Write more like this

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sirivalli

@sirivalli.t

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

awesome n a very cute os 👏 👍🏼

loved it ❤️

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Jyothsna

@joe4joe

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

this was mindblowing di.
Bombblastic theme.

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Sona257

@Sona257

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

Loved the os.. In the beginning I really thought that khushi was drooling about arnav but it was akash..

But loved arshi cute scenes.. Felt bad for arnav that he couldn't continue his cricket.. But he's now launching new talents which is a good thing.. I'm happy khushi became a dance teacher.. She followed her dreams..

And at last poor akash hahaha

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arnavbarun

@arnavbarun

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#10

Haaye! Itna pyara os

a smile was simply plastered on my face throughout the os.

Loved khusi. And also the fact that you didnt show arnav as some saint.

AMAZING!