ArHi OS: Ballet Swing||Removed

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deepa

@deeps_92

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#61

hi komal...

how r u...

actually I got bored of studies and came to if in search of something nice to read...and luckily I found your os...

it was lovely dear...I loved the concept of ballet swing...ballet dancer plus swing bowler...

when Kushi went to hotel to meet her fav cricketer, I thought he was arnav ...but the moment u introduced Arnav...I fell in love with two things...your way of story telling and limping Arnav

loved his attitude...Kushi was right...he is real hero...loved his honest confession just at their second meet

loved the intruding aakash too

nice one dear

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wiwy

@wiwy

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#62

Amazing, superb, spectacular, fantastic, min blowing OS meri Cheesy! 🤗

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Neha

@..Neha.

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#63

Love the is..
It was soo cute...
Awesome work!

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Chandu2000

@Chandu2000

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#64

The OS is just too cute !! Loved it !!

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ABCDesiGirl93

@ABCDesiGirl93

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#65

lol funny os! thanks for the pm i loved it! :)

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snoopy84

@snoopy84

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#66

Awesome os loved how she met Arnav through Akash the end was real cute

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#67

Awww this was a beautiful, amazing and wonderful one shot,

Bless Khushi was a fan of Akash but decided later on that Arnav is her hero, so sweet.

Loved there first meeting, Arnav actually thought she was cute and khushi's concern over his limp was nice.

The part where they went for a coffee was awesome with Khushi talking so much, lol.

Love how Khushi explained what she felt regarding Arnav's limp and bless he was left stunned and very touched with her confession,

Wow Khushi actually proposed marriage that was brilliant, I'm glad she did not let Arnav back out as he was worried that they did not suit each other.

Khushi is so funny she was clearly frustrated when Akash disturbed there passionate encounter and she made it so obvious, lol.

Loved the one shot, a brilliant read.

Thanks for the PM xx