ArHi OS: You Are The All I Have|| TY Note, page 19

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Rotlu ji

Cheeni emotional kar diya Tune mjhe 😭 Tu mere liye surprise plan ki and i didnt have a slightest idea of it 😲 Oommmggg I wanna screammm loud 😆

Nd d cncpt was again Diff 👏

How do u do dat 😳

Yar Mera Arnav ka charm se koi nai bach sakta nd here Khushi didnt acknowdledge him only 😲

U gtta be kidding me

Hayeee i loved it wen he was beating dose sickos for khushi ^^

Specially d tym wen khushi stop him nd he leave demy instantly

It wasnt destiny lol it was arnav who kept meeting khushi 😉

Upar se Arnav cnfession ⭐️ was cherrry on d cake

I m glad her freind didnt turn up for shopping warna arnav khushi akela mein kaise milte 😃

Kisses ☺️ ☺️

Damn dat Shyam 🤬 How cheap he could go ...

Marriage life is toh always blissful nd a permanent license for passionate night ☺️ ☺️

I wndr how did arnav manage to keep his hands off till one year 😕

D name of arnav khushi son was awsm

How did u get it :-D

He workaholic 😡 He didnt cared for his relationship damnit ..

She was leaving him nd he allowed her to go

He saw d consequnces nw he lost his only son

Who was his shadow

The son who loved his dad more den mom

But dere son did one thing wich dey demselves couldnt do

He united dem

Nd dey were blessed wid a son again 😃

I loved d last ❤️ 😉

Ufff cheeni u r raising ur standard wid piece of work of urs 😈 I deamnd more from u nw 😳

I loved d whole OS ❤️

🤗
Edited by Barun_Gf - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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A tight wali jhappi for you cheeni for this amazing piece of work...
U are simply incredible... 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 ⭐️
You showed the complete journey of Arshi in this OS with all the emotions written beautifully...



As promised I have read this OS again... 😃

To start with I really felt bad after reading their son's condition and the fact that they were separate...

And then when the past begun I just loved it...
Their meetings, their slowly growing feelings and then Arnav's confession that he likes her...
Simply beautiful...

Few dialogues which were very simple but it gave a feeling that it came from heart, like
"CM's son is not allowed to make friends."
"I like you Khushi."
"You are not alone Khushi, I am here."
When Khushi said I like you, his reply "I know that."

I liked the way Arnav supported her after Shyam's mess...

But it would have been better if Arnav would have married her coz of his love and not to save her from humiliation...

The gap b/w them was hurting...They needed each other but may be didn't understood each other...

I couldn't control my tears when their son died... 😭 😭
Its not with me cheeni but the way u write makes me feel it so deeply that tears starts coming out...

And when Arnav cries I cry with him...Ye meri problem hai...

The loss made them realize each other's importance...
And the way they helped each other cope up with the loss was amazing and shown perfectly...

The use of dialog from the show was equally beautiful as in the show... 👏 👏

I am happy that they got Agastya back in Swaraj... 😃

Hope we get something soon after your exms...
Edited by avni_barun - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome OS... sacchi mai loved it👏

🤗
really a relation need a bit of compromise and sharing and giving.. but they.. uff!! but love was there.. and someday it has to come out.. and it did.. but by taking their beloved son from them!!
their marriage was love one, but there wasn't understanding.. infact they were unknown to their true feeling!
glad at last they supported each other.. and also they have two another kids!!
keep it on doing awesome work komal⭐️⭐️
Edited by jas0308 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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#UnRes
This is amazing Komal 🤗
I really loved this OS 😊
You completed the whole story in one OS 👏
The start was heart touching, emotional and sad
The Flashbacks
Oh God that Shyam is damn cheap...😡
And their separation was sad too 😭
and their son died 😭
But this loss made them realized the importance of each other and their relation
I am happy that they got an other son
and as usual Arnav is damn naughty...😉 ❤️


🤗
Keep Writing more and more Os/Ts/FF/SS 😛 😆
Love ya ❤️
Edited by --Amna-- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Updated, PMs will be sent out later! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res
Hope you dont mind if I dont unres soon, Pooji's Cheeni 😉

(ps: I have a long list of res'es)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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That was excellent OS...

The way you wrote the story is mindblowing...
You covered from their college days love to till their matured one... you beautifully described the love they have for each other... Feeling bad for the loss of Agastya...😭.. But they realized their mistake... and decided to give it another chance for their love...
This time they succeded and they blessed with Son 😊 ... Once again excellent written... You deserves a big aplaus...👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome beautiful fabulous..

One piece shot..
Proud of. U Laila..
So much intensity.

Totally loved it..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awww
wndrfl os.
Going to recommend it in my album.
Can i get a small banner 4 tis beautifl os?

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