ArHi OS: You Are The All I Have|| TY Note, page 19

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-Roshini-

@-Roshini-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Beautiful os
i read it twice and cried like hell

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RizArshi

@RizArshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

I am speechless. It was beyond beautiful. Heart touching. Damn you made me cry.

Very well done 👍🏼

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Aaliya Sobti

@Aalu_Malu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Res

UnRes!!!

Is it long?? I mean it was like too short, I wanted to read more n more 😆

Firstly Arnav Singh Raizada a CM 😲 Kinda different, I loved it though 😳

Oh! Being a CM is a tough job Khushi, she should have understood But anyways, am with ASR here 😉

Lol...that quirking an eyebrow 😆 Loved that part !!!

It was an emotional OS, felt bad for both 😭 Waise can Swaraj raise an eyebrow 😆

The college part was awesome, lol...they should have told 'Love' not 'Like' 😆

'Its a checking out session' 😆

Khushi in black, No comments on Shyaamwa's act 😆

I am sorry all are muddled up!!! But that doesn't matter I know, what matters is that I love it 😉

Beautifully written Cheeni!!! This is the first work of yours that I read, it's amazing 👏 And I LOVE YOU!! 🤗

*runs before POOJA Agarwal shoots me* AWESOME! 😆

Edited by LOLWAsAalu - 11 years ago

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Tia Maharaj

@Honeybee27

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Soo sad yet so beautiful...❤️

This was absolutely amazing, I adore your style of writing and this OS really brightened up my day. This OS actually got me in tears and I felt bad for both Khushi and Arnav...good work!😃

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Bhool gayi.

@Sanaya.Barun

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

This was amazing! Just amazing!

I felt so emotional reading this.. Beautifully written.. Loved it :)

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starsarun

@starsarun

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

It was unexpected more than Hearbreaking shot! :p
I was near to crying...
Shocks after shocks..
1. Khushi was ex-wife.. Means Arshi were divorced!
2. They had son :o
3. His son suffered accident
4. Arnav being CM
5. Agasthya died! ;(
6. They were divorced becoz of their understandings...
Thank God I am alive..
Itne shock ke baad koi bhi mar jaaye...

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

That was really so beautiful.. Loved it... They got a second chance.. Their son left them to get them together..

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Param

@pup03

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

awesome OS !!! loved it.. 😃

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Hetal

@Divyahet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Unres.

KC every time you wrote an OS with different concept and every time I have no words to express what I felt ?

Amazing OS.👏 with the touch of sadness.
loved their first meeting,
their second meeting at CCD
and the confession "I like you too!!"
following their first cute little fight of course one sided.😆
And that cunning Shyam 😡
Akash gave perfect solution for the situation.
They got married, blessed with son and..
lost him too ..
but their son's mrityu helped them to be together once again..
though Arnav was a reason for Khushi's well being but he was not ,
the loss ...
and then another son Swaraj came to their life.👏👏

simply awesome and emotional one.
waiting for more LONG OS from you.
love and hugs,
thank you for the pm,
take care.

Edited by Divyahet - 11 years ago