ArHi OS: Matters of the Heart (ASR's POV)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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superb os..writing names on the desk part was superb,it reminds me of many things😆..thanx for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ok I love this one ,may be more than the previous part .. when I first read khushi's part I was like he doesn't deserve her forgiveness .. but she loved him so I was happy for her only .. reading Arnav's pov everything seems so different now .. great one
p.s : thanks for the pm
Edited by farha_ipkknd - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aaahh i was thinkin i hv read dis bfre..bt i like this vesiion betttr..Arnavs an iddiioot :p
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Posted: 11 years ago
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it was awesome...
well when u wrote it from khusi pov it was natural

but arnav pov is more difficult to write as its more complicated

so finaly we came to know what arnav felt about her all the time

it was really amazing story from arnav pov
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yup must have been harder
Oh he almost lost her
Hmmm so he was being that way as he thought she don't love him anymore
When noting could be further from the truth
At least he tried
And in the end it worked out
This make more sense with both their POV
Cheers for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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superb yaar.loved both of it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awww it was so swt frm arnav pov to. U wrote arnav's feelings vry well. And thank u so much fr pm dear.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome !!! both have same feelings but not aware of it.. love can be difficult at time.. but happy for arnav, khushi they got a chance to confess their feelings and come together in this lifetime.. uneasiness, restlessness, jealously but then too these two idiots took so much time to come clean about each other., loved it..

thanks for pm 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow this was an amazing and awesome one shot,

Love the fact it was so long and also from Arnav's point of view,

Even though Arnav knew he made a mistake in the past but he was young so he probably didn't realise to what extent.

I'm glad him and Khushi got a chance to meet again,

Awww loved the part where they doing the decoration they finally let go of the past and wow the dance they shared was awesome,

So glad Khushi finally told him not to leave and Arnav finally confessing his love,

A beautiful and perfect ending,

Absolutely loved the one shot, it was a wonderful read.

Thanks for the PM xx
Edited by P4rveen12 - 11 years ago

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