ArHi OS: Matters of the Heart (ASR's POV) - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
Nicely written.
Good to know about both sides of the story.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
Awww c: Awesome! Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
It was wonderful..i really loved arnav's pov more than khushi..you jus expressed every feeling of him beautifully..be it missing her or being eager to meet her after 5 years or feeling disappointed wen he couldn't find wat's going in her mind,his expecting heart to find an opportunity to talk to her,feeling elated wen he got a chance to dance with her or feeling jealous wen she pays attention to someone other than him, feeling hurt wen she got hurt by himself, feeling happy wen she smiled bcoz of him nd feeling anxious dat he may not get a chance to meet her hereafter..nd i really loved him more wen he expressed his love to her in dat one kiss nd felt disappointed dat she didn't respond nd didn't say anything.. wen i read dis version i felt more close to d story than dat one..i really felt happy wen atlast she said don't..i too felt a sigh of relief even wen i know dis s going to happen.. funny me..but i really enjoyed arnav's pov.. thanks for the pm..nd expecting for ur next beautiful update like dis eagerly..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was sooo beautiful! You made me cry, dammit!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing OS..
That last part was very Emotional...
Loved it..

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Fantastic!

He wasn't aware when he pit someone else for Khushi that he in love with that very girl in question!

So well written!

I always love reading Arnav's POV in first person!

It is difficult to write in first person, I know, but you have done such a wonderful job.👍🏼


Annnd! Thank u so much for the pm!😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
i liked this better than even than khushi's POV!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing👏 👏 👏 👏 👏👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wonderful... loved this version too
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20

Excellent Os...

You wrote Arnav's feelings beautifully 👏

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