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Smitakshi Guha

@SimiSays

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

This was TOO GOOD !! 😳

Simply perfect.. I cud actually picture them for real..

Blushing and hyperventilating like a lunatic while reading this.. 😆

Amazing dear! 😊

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Tulipdulip

@Tulipdulip

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

You are back!!!!... Finally...

I mwas missing your updates... Pls don't discontinue...

Loved the OS...cute and funny...

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tina_1234

@tina_1234

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Nice os.
Waitin for u to continue ur old stories

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RizArshi

@RizArshi

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Hey its great to see you back again. Welcome back.

I loved your peace offering to the core. It was amazing. Thanks for the PM :)

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Chandu2000

@Chandu2000

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

This was such a cute os...do pm me when you write the next os!!

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palaayan

@palaayan

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Hello Hi Bye Bye

This OS was simply fantastic Smitzy, the romance, the annoying family members, the passion. It simply spells perfection! The flirtatious Arnav and nautanki Khushi brought a huge smile to my face, even Miss Baand Mami was a welcome asset to proceedings!!

Brilliant OS!

Manreet :)

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Raila1014

@Raila1014

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Welcome back stranger! This was cute and romantic! Always wondered why they did not make better use of the pool after the wedding to erase all the bad ones from the contract marriage. Very nicely done!

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Crazy4IPK

@Crazy4IPK

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Omg, Smita, I'm so happy to see you back.

I was actually worried for you at your sudden disappearance. But one thing I knew whoever loved Arnav and Khushi can't get them out of their mind for a long time. So your return was inevitable. Look at me, still completely is submerged in Arnav and Khushi's world. I guess my craziness for them increased more after the show.

Let's come to the story. Writer's block? you are kidding me. After reading this super awesome OS, I only can say you improved more. I enjoyed through out. Khushi is naughty and unpredictable for sure. But the most interesting thing is a very pragmatic arnav loves her crazy antics. And you beautifully depicted that. Somehow I knew Arnav also will pull her in the pool. Uff what a sensuous description of their romantic encounter.

Mami is impossible. How she intruded a couple's privacy. Anyway i actually love their khullam khulla pyaar. Mr, sexy Raizada's mischief was damn cute and hot. And Mrs. Raizada is no less. i loved her boldness at the end. Whose husband is so sexy and romantic, his wife should match him. What say?

Looking forward for more of your beautiful writing.

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suwin

@suwin

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

that was cute and lovely...

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smitzy

@smitzy

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: sohara
Omg, Smita, I'm so happy to see you back.
I was actually worried for you at your sudden disappearance. But one thing I knew whoever loved Arnav and Khushi can't get them out of their mind for a long time. So your return was inevitable. Look at me, still completely is submerged in Arnav and Khushi's world. I guess my craziness for them increased more after the show.
Let's come to the story. Writer's block? you are kidding me. After reading this super awesome OS, I only can say you improved more. I enjoyed through out. Khushi is naughty and unpredictable for sure. But the most interesting thing is a very pragmatic arnav loves her crazy antics. And you beautifully depicted that. Somehow I knew Arnav also will pull her in the pool. Uff what a sensuous description of their romantic encounter.
Mami is impossible. How she intruded a couple's privacy. Anyway i actually love their khullam khulla pyaar. Mr, sexy Raizada's mischief was damn cute and hot. And Mrs. Raizada is no less. i loved her boldness at the end. Whose husband is so sexy and romantic, his wife should match him. What say?
Looking forward for more of your beautiful writing.

Hehehehe hiii Sohara :)

feels good to be back! Well, How could I not, seeing my dear darling readers like you peppering up all my threads with "come back soon" messages 😳

Yesss I wanted the pool to be used so bad!!! And this was going on in my mind since a VERY long time.. ask asr13, she'll tell you.. I told her about this idea months ago when I was still a regular here. I started writing too but I dunno what happened, I couldn't continue..

anyway!! Thank you so much for a lovely comment! I hope to see your comments in the future too once I start writing my other stories regularly.

cheers babes!

Smitzy 😊