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smitzy

@smitzy

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: Raila1014
Welcome back stranger! This was cute and romantic! Always wondered why they did not make better use of the pool after the wedding to erase all the bad ones from the contract marriage. Very nicely done!

😆 thanks hun :)

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smitzy

@smitzy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: Neha2014
Glad you are back Smitzy and that too with a bang..
.Loved the OS...absolutely romantic!!!!!!!

thanks dear! :) Glad you enjoyed it!

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smitzy

@smitzy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: srat

Welcome back and instantly you raise the heat on this very cold day !

I loved how it was jutst about the two of them with a little interruption from Mammi ji..

Only Khushi can celebrate two anniversary's and get Arnav to agree to them !

Who needs to go to dinner , bet Arnav was glad he was late coming home..

hahaha thanks dear 😆

Originally posted by: suruchirazdan
welcome back dear... i dont know since how long i hav waited for u...and thanks for writing such a fabulous OS

cheers! :)

Originally posted by: Simi939
This was TOO GOOD !! 😳
Simply perfect.. I cud actually picture them for real..
Blushing and hyperventilating like a lunatic while reading this.. 😆
Amazing dear! 😊

aha! hyperventilating sounds about right 😉

cheers!

Originally posted by: Tulipdulip
You are back!!!!... Finally...
I mwas missing your updates... Pls don't discontinue...

Loved the OS...cute and funny...

hahaha thanks dear! I'll try (really hard) not to discontinue 😉

cheers!

Originally posted by: RizArshi
Hey its great to see you back again. Welcome back.
I loved your peace offering to the core. It was amazing. Thanks for the PM :)

awww thanks hun :)

Originally posted by: manreet_gill
Hello Hi Bye Bye

This OS was simply fantastic Smitzy, the romance, the annoying family members, the passion. It simply spells perfection! The flirtatious Arnav and nautanki Khushi brought a huge smile to my face, even Miss Baand Mami was a welcome asset to proceedings!!

Brilliant OS!

Manreet :)

Hey Manreet, thanks a ton for the lovely comment! M really glad you liked it! 😊

To everyone else who read and reviewed - thanks a ton guys! :)

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Crazy4IPK

@Crazy4IPK

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: smitzy

Hehehehe hiii Sohara :)

feels good to be back! Well, How could I not, seeing my dear darling readers like you peppering up all my threads with "come back soon" messages 😳

Yesss I wanted the pool to be used so bad!!! And this was going on in my mind since a VERY long time.. ask asr13, she'll tell you.. I told her about this idea months ago when I was still a regular here. I started writing too but I dunno what happened, I couldn't continue..

anyway!! Thank you so much for a lovely comment! I hope to see your comments in the future too once I start writing my other stories regularly.

cheers babes!
Smitzy 😊

Forgot to mention in my comments, that thank you so much for using the pool in the tale. Though the dirty pool of the sexy tycoon's was a bit awkward!😆 but no problem. we imagined it like this,like our so many unfulfilled dreams about our beloved Arshi.

Dying to read the 101 letters. you just stopped it in the crux of the moment. and taming the angry young man also.

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Varsha Dutt

@varsha2KD

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Welcome back... 😃

Awesome OS... loved it...

I always wanted to see Arshi make use of the actual pool... 😉

Somehow I knew Arnav also will pull her in the pool... 😆

whoa...what a description of their passionate romance 😳

Looking forward for your amazing work 😊

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zaibun un nisa

@saima4744

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

well come back.

lovely os.

hot and romantic.

firt nok jhok of arshi.

then romance with anger in side the pool.

mamai entry 😡as usual un complete kiss.

but mamaji👏👏 pulled mami back leave the love birds.

what a pretend searching a ring OMG.

lovely en.

tf pm.

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Amrita

@Amti4u

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: smitzy

Hi darling!

Thanks so much for such a rousing welcome back comment 🤗

Ya I know I haven't been around much. But hopefully should be back soon.. exams aren't over yet.. last one on 26th :)

Thanks once again! It feels good to be back :)

cheers!

Smitzy

2 more days left... Do well...

And Desperately waiting for 101 letters... 😃