arshi ff: without you... #2, chapters 14 - 27 **completed**

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#751

^^^

thank you, akankha, glad you liked.

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#752

^^^

thanks, sarah_asya_arhi. 😳

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Barunz4ever

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Posted: 11 years ago

#753

Beautiful!!!!!

Ofcourse khushi n Arnav do exist... In our beliefs , dreams, imaginations, thoughts n in your beautiful, emotional , heart touching updates on Arnav khushi . Which make us want to believe that yes such a rare n unique feelings that these two entwined souls share with each other does exist n we ourselves want to feel that HAMESHA...

Thnks for pm

Hope Arnav finds khushi soon ... Which he definitely will😊

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: Barunz4ever
Beautiful!!!!!
Ofcourse khushi n Arnav do exist... In our beliefs , dreams, imaginations, thoughts n in your beautiful, emotional , heart touching updates on Arnav khushi . Which make us want to believe that yes such a rare n unique feelings that these two entwined souls share with each other does exist n we ourselves want to feel that HAMESHA...
Thnks for pm
Hope Arnav finds khushi soon ... Which he definitely will😊

thanks,

and you are absolutely right... they do exist... in all those lovely planes and realities you mention, no less valid than our three dimensions.

sometimes i think it is an inalienable right almost to be able to feel that hamesha...

touched me, your words. see you soon. of course, he'll find her, otherwise i'll really have to get mad at him. 😳

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Crazy4IPK

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Posted: 11 years ago

#755

Loved this chapter.

I wish Arnav finds Khushi soon. He is her protector, her savior, he has to rescue her. Not Arnav, but Khushi is kidnapped here. great incorporation of the telepathic convo. poor Khushi, cooked all his favorite food, even his favorite chicken tikka, but couldn't enjoy the dinner. She sure take care of her arnavji a lot. I was so touched when she felt guilty to eat all the yummy food what he can't eat. But how she can eat so much! That is quite surreal!

You incorporated nicely the mirror scene. No bindi, but he gave her the necklace what she chose. Nice thought. And of course the kiss was even better.

Just waiting Arnav to rescue Khushi before the nefarious guy can harm her.

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rati123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#756

Such a beautiful story ! Thank you very much.

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: sohara
Loved this chapter.
I wish Arnav finds Khushi soon. He is her protector, her savior, he has to rescue her. Not Arnav, but Khushi is kidnapped here. great incorporation of the telepathic convo. poor Khushi, cooked all his favorite food, even his favorite chicken tikka, but couldn't enjoy the dinner. She sure take care of her arnavji a lot. I was so touched when she felt guilty to eat all the yummy food what he can't eat. But how she can eat so much! That is quite surreal!
You incorporated nicely the mirror scene. No bindi, but he gave her the necklace what she chose. Nice thought. And of course the kiss was even better.
Just waiting Arnav to rescue Khushi before the nefarious guy can harm her.

thanks, sohara... so you did not read the ahem part... please do... i need your opinion. he he, you are my sweetest critic, got to have your thoughts.

sooo happy you liked all the nuances... yes he will protect her... not quite himself without her...

i don't want this to become too mushy but inside me i am always jelly and puddle. 😆

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: rati123
Such a beautiful story ! Thank you very much.

aww, rati, thank you for reading... helps me write. 😳

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DurgaS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#759

Lovely chapter Indi. Arnav searching for Khushi was heart wrenching. Hope his heart leads him to her quickly. Loved the uttaradhikari tease. 😊 Thanks for the warning. Glanced and ran away to the next part. Arnav knows he can't live without her and Khushi knows he is always with her. Both are being very brave, trying to survive in difficult situation for the sake of each other. Hope they find each other soon.

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#760

hi durga,

thanks so much... i am so happy you liked the chapter. i am getting quite kidnapped by asr and khushi these days. my friend who is a journalist openly laughed at me today for writing fan fiction... of course first i had to tell her what is fan fiction... but i have to say, i have stockholm syndrome and now i love my kidnappers.

that warning was there to be fair to the readers, i felt writing "mature" upfront sort of skewed the whole thing, instead chose a more specific tagging... good you didn't read, but i really have to say i wrote that with a lot of empathy and feeling... never knew writing stories with other people's characters could teach one so much.

see ya soon.