arshi ff: without you... #2, chapters 14 - 27 **completed**

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Posted: 11 years ago

#531

Awesome update

Thanks for pm 😊

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indi52

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Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#532

^^^

mishtee,

thanks so much for reading and liking the chapter.

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aarwen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#533

Reality( in this case the show) and fiction (in this case yours) are blurred.. Absolutely brilliant!

Knew your ASR would be stylishly perfect but you took Khushi to where the show could have taken her.. I loved how even though she did not say it aloud out of hesitation but she had intense feelings for her Arnav..

It started so sad that I was scared to read further yet helpless to stop.. But Arnavji woke up and everything is how it is meant to be.. Non stop reading ahead.. 😊

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#534

^^^

aarwen, 😳

thank you so so much. i do hope you enjoy the story... it's really my little trip with these two people who kept me rapt for almost a year and a half... still rapt. i appreciate your reading my work.

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aarwen

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Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#535

Originally posted by: indi52
^^^

aarwen, 😳

thank you so so much. i do hope you enjoy the story... it's really my little trip with these two people who kept me rapt for almost a year and a half... still rapt. i appreciate your reading my work.

By the way please thank your husband from my side for the Brazilian soccer team 😆 .. Incredible how seamlessly you used things already known with the unknown. And the rabba ve references of songs that seem to play in their ears 👏 How not to believe that love is like this..

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henamani

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Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#536

u have retained the flavour of the characters really well

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indi52

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Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#537

^^^

hena,

good to see you and thanks so much for saying that. 😳

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Msserialfan123

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Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#538

Hi indi! Loved the update! The back story of Anjali chotey and chachaji sounds ominous and coming in the wake of the phone call about anjali going out with the doctor, looks like the memory was particularly scary. Poor Arnav , to have to face not just monetary but also other troubles when he was all of 14!

Loved your re-creation of teri-meri as well, befits the anniversary of a sensational scene!

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janu

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Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#539

Thanks for PM

Teri meri ,one would never forget this one and a perfect time to bring it back...

Arnav ,whichever mood he is in ,just looks for Khushi and her reactions...her feaar for darkness ,speed ...

Anajli is also a Raizada and I want to see that trait in her ,the bold and decisive one..hope you are taking us in that direction...

I just need more insight about the "sheeshahal" and its history.

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Crazy4IPK

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Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#540

Fantabulous!

Firstly thanks for reincorporation of teri meri. just perfect!

ASR can do anything for his beloved Khushi. So nothing wrong to be little filmy. But whatever ASR does he makes it classy. I was having goose bumps while reading the description of the sensuous dance.

Possessive brother is mad that his sister is dating a married man. But how he forgot that his sister was married too. I loved how Khushi made him understand Anjali's feelings. But again, he hurt her. And again the angel took it easily and didn't get angry on him. She really can understand her short tempered husband.

Your favorite OP is in love with an educated girl! Not bad! And he is learning englishiya too.

it was great to know about both Arnav and Khushi's past.

Arnav saw his chachaji's suspicious activity.