arshi ff: without you... #2, chapters 14 - 27 **completed**

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#511

Originally posted by: Atyay

Love the update. 👏

good to see you, atyay,

thanks. 😳

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#512

Originally posted by: rk2127
Nice update
A true tribute to arshi Teri meri dance.

thank you, rk...

🤗 for that in pink. 😳

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#513

Originally posted by: sonia_1
Beautiful update.
Mami and OP are in competition 😆
Chacha did something with Khushi's mother and maybe Anjali 😲 ...Hope not.

Teri Meri ~~ brings back all the magical memories.

ha, sonia, so whose englissiya is more powderphool tells tells. 😆 thanks so much for liking the chapter. chacha ji is giving me nightmares currently... slippery eel. may teri meri always remain remain magic.

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: 1987Trisha
Beautiful...beautiful...beautiful... update dear...
we can never ever forget Arshi's Teri Meri dance sequence...it was something so so beautiful
I really fall in love with this FF...
Specially the last part...they way you have described it...superb...

thank you and thank you for that comment. makes my day... a happy reader. makes writing feel really good. thanks again... last part... uff i had fun writing it. see you soon, trisha.

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#515

Originally posted by: asha_mehta
Arnav should give vijay a chance.
Continue soon

asha,

you are so right... hopefully arnav will have the sense to assess the situation with his dimaag not his dil. 😳 i hope to continue soon, hate these long gaps myself. 😕😳

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anonyasr

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Posted: 11 years ago

#516

Love the way you weave this story.

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#517

^^^

thank you, anonyasr... i realise the updates come after long gaps... hope to mend that soon.😳

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nishu_shorna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#518

God...what truth lies in the past...I seems horrible...not only Khushi's mom, but Anjali too was a victim...I am still shocked...waiting for the whole thing to be revealed, whatever that may be...
Arnav's reaction to the news was natural...the protective brother he is...loved how Khushi dilute the situation...she is just perfect for him...
So PayAsh are expecting...a happy news...and it did distructed mami, at least for a while...
Om Prakash...mamiji's new competetor...superb...
and the phone convo between Anjali and Dr. Verma was nice...loved how their relationship is progressing steadily...
and the tribute to Teri Meri...WOW Di...just perfect...
lovely update...thanks for the PM Di...

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RebeccaDaphne

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Posted: 11 years ago

#519

Loved it, amazing update! A beautiful tribute to Teri meri, and an intense past is slowly unravelling!

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Arnav_Khushifan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#520

Indrani thanks for the much awaited update and it is on the anniversary of Teri Meri dance was cherry on the top. Old secrets are going to cause lot of ripples. I just hope that Arnav and Khushi stay strong and together through this whole ordeal. I have a feeling they will because they have overcome a lot and their love for each other and family will get them through this also. Sad that Anjali also suffered at the hands of the uncle, a little shocking to understand. Hope Dr. Verma is going to completely heal Anjali's bruised heart and fill it with happiness. I loved their phone conversation. Looking forward to their love story. Excellent update and looking forward to the next one.