arshi ff: without you... #2, chapters 14 - 27 **completed** - Page 2

Originally posted by: ArshiHamesha

Congratulations for the new thread...Indi...🥳

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For bringing my dream on this paper...Shyam's true confession which we didn't have...You have a big heart for IPK and it's CV but not me...

So he found another RaniSahiba...filthy piece of dirt.😡

How beautifully you have described his eyes fell on a needy rich person to leech on...😡

He realy did the damage to his face by punching, kicking and all...Thank You...😊

Sheesh mahal and his parents...their fights, and his fragile young brain which was molested by these thoughts and fears...a ticking bomb of emotions which he is sitting on most of his life...Simply beautiful...Loved the touch of Rahim Chacha...

His planning besides his anger to catch the rascal is amazing...you should've done so for the real IPK.👏

Khushi did her HW to save her love and knows how to touch to heal this wounded man.He is indeed a man of actions...but he does have a blanket of fears which no one can see or he doesn't want anyone to see but Khushi...

Thank You Indi ...I just loved this .Ok I am going back again reading one more time...I will chat Later gater...

Originally posted by: ...SaRun...

Congratulations on new thread.

Awesome update.Love every scene of it.Well described characters,nani,mami and her puri and majboori 😆, Rahim chaha,Anjali,Shayam.

Shayam's end is so satisfying good to see ASR's shatir dimagh in action.

Thanks for completing the kiss at the poolside ☺️.It was superbly written scene.

Are we going to Shesh Mahel now?

Thanks for the pm.

Originally posted by: Suni

Awesome update! Wonder what will happen to the mute girl now?

So are we off to Sheesh mahal now?

Originally posted by: cinthiann1758

he felt her hand on his shoulder. he turned around, he needed her. she stood there looking at him, worried. she was fully dressed. he pulled her into his arms and under the water with him. she didn't demur, she just let her arms go around him and held him. after a while, she stood on her toes and kissed him on the little cut on his cheek, somewhere along the way, shyam must have taken a swing at him, he couldn't remember, he couldn't feel.

she put her hand on his heart and let the water flow all over them, she could sense he had shut down somewhere, a numbness. his skin didn't quicken to her the way it always did. she felt he was not ready to tell her anything right now.

shyam was venomous... no encounter with him could leave one completely unscathed.

I expected a "shower" scene but alas no for my Indi is complicated. It is not so simple our Arnav here. You have done justice to the villainous, Shyam. How could Arnav make love to his wife after being tainted by that venomous snake? He was truly numb. The venom slowly seeping into his bloodstream but that venom is not only caused by Shyam but by a history of terrible men in his life. Thank you for writing an interesting story. I am enjoying it.

Originally posted by: indi52

thank you, arshi my dear,

shyam was punched, kicked, and caught out for you. for over a year i have felt your hurt and pain and shredding regarding this slither, this creepy insect, this piece of filth... so yeah, this one is for you.

i would have had asr kill him too, but that would lead to a hell i didn't want to go to.

we all know how unemotional the creatives at ipk became. folly of our times i think... somehow this make money make money frenzy seems to have tainted everything.

very wells aid... blanket of fears. we all have ours, but his especially thick, and he fights them all the time, but a grip around his heart they have, especially when it comes to those he loves.

loved your comment. you are too good to me.

Originally posted by: sohara

Uff, what an update.

I was breathless till the end. aaah, i am so happy to hear that...

And I must say what a twist. Gosh, I was cursing ASR for coming to Shyam with a loaded gun all alone. Then the sound of click, just made me anxious; who became the victim of shyam's vicious act? Lekin kya jhatka dia? ASR came with a full plan. he is asr, my jaan sohara, never doubt him, ever. his mistakes may be huge but that only happens when his heart is messed up... he has gone along with the whole wide world and their sweet good plans for as long as he can, again because of kambakht heart, but now no more... his turf has been encroached upon yet again, enough! shyam. 😆His Harvard brain is something beyond our imagination. Oops, the credit must go to you. nahiiin, it's this man and his big huge love... not the nacheez rambler. As you are the mastermind behind it. And ASR had beaten Shyam black and blue. I'm dancing in rapture. me too metoo, let's balle balle together, and sohara, did you just say you were dancing? i thought only the ahem ahem that stuff would get you there... forgettiya it, let's nach and nach some more. i wanted him to catch shyam by the neck and rub his face in the wet mud, but asr said, no, we'll do it his way. 🥳 The fight sequence has been written beautifully.And Anjali's slap at the end completed the revenge. i am glad, anjali is going through a lot. But I must say, what a clever guy shyam is. He enmeshed another innocent disabled girl in his web! Poor girl as she is deaf and dumb, couldn't hear his evil deed what he confessed by his own mouth. But before going to jail, he planted another seed of anguish in ASR's mind. shyam is clever in a sneaky slithering way, such people always try to poison you, especially when they are going down. he has planted a rather confusing and scary thought in asr's dimaag.🤢😡

Now ASR and Khushi are going to Sheesh mahal. It was always my wish to see ASR and Khushi visits sheesh mahal together. But my wish remained unfulfilled like so many dreams about them. i hope i can give you the sheesh mahal trip you want.

The recreation of the engagement day was wonderful. Their poolside romance was making me ecstatic. How his bridled passion for Khushi erupted, was giving me goose bumps. and great assimilation of the character dheela dialogue. But what an answer he gave to her by not getting engaged with La. It was just an aww moment when he ran after her, hugged her and said the epic dialogue,

what if I would've lost you! so glad you liked... he does make love rather headily, doesn't he.

Brilliant, how you started the story with the very significant moment of sheesh mahal and ended the chapter with Arnav's anguish with the thought of sheesh mahal. thank you.

And finally congratulations on the new thread. thanks again. 🤗