arshi ff: without you... #2, chapters 14 - 27 **completed** - Page 19

Originally posted by: indi52

hi rashmi,

thanks for dropping by. glad you liked. tell me, why can't i pm you... is your inbox full or something? 😳 i do hope asr does not find anything untwoard in sheesh mahal... and will definitely look at doc verma with eagle eye and get to knwo him better. 😃

Originally posted by: DurgaS

Chapter 14

Shyam, out on his bail, manages to get another Rani Sahiba, this time a deaf and mute girl. How pathetic. The poor girl must be devastated to see the true face of the man.

I really liked the showdown between Arnav and Shyam. That was smart of ASR to go there with a plan. The minute Shyam got hold of the revolver, I knew it was empty. I liked the timing of Khushi and Anjali's entry to the scene. Completely cinematic and effective too. So, Shyam is finally cornered and deliberately blurts out something about Khushi's parents. Is there a connection between the stories of A's parents and K's parents? How does Shyam know? And how much does Khushi know about the past and why does she ask Arnav not to believe him? I am really eager to see the story shift to Sheesh Mahal now.

Originally posted by: Arnav_Khushifan

My inbox is full sorry. I have to go through them and delete some of the stuff. Thanks for trying to PM. but don't worry like our baba said to khushi mein thumarhi har baat ki khabar rakhta hun I am always on the lookout for updates from my favoraite writers and you my dear are on the top of the list.

Now please hurry up with that update.

Originally posted by: DurgaS

Chapter 15

So, it was Khushi's mother who introduced her to Salmanji. I like the name Lajwanti Sachdev. 😊 When the little Khushi says Kabootar wala, I was thinking have the kabootars flown in here from ncofl. But the kabootar wala turned out to be Salman Khan! 🤣 What a connection! 😆 Also liked this one, ek bada sa... neela sa... daant... blue tooth. 😆

So, Anjali is worried about the acidic words blurted out by Shyam. I guess, at this point, she really needs someone to talk to, to express her fears, someone who's mature enough to understand her state of mind. At this juncture, the only person she could think of was Dr. Verma. Eager to see how their talk goes. Why him, thinks Anjali. Why do I feel so for her, thinks the doctor. Whatever that why may be, neither of them are going to jump to conclusions and proceed to the next level any time soon. This rishta, whichever way it might go, will take a long long time to develop.

Give all the love you can to your niece. Witnessing acerbic battles by parents must be very difficult. And she's only 7. All the pain she's absorbing right now might come out in some form, some day. Do take care of her.

Originally posted by: indi52

aap bhi na, durga...😃 kuch zyada hi sochti hain... while analysing is the coolest thing in the universe, just letting go and being and feeling has its joys too... so you knew diwali kiss wouldn't happen... awww... but in a way i am glad it didn't... it made them both think and feel stuff, something lovely in all of that.

tells me what you are doing, c'mons tells me... seems exciting... 😳

I know. Anyway, stopped analysing later on as things went haywire. Tracks changing overnight which even a layman could detect. So, sat back and started enjoying Arshi scenes.