arshi ff: without you... #2, chapters 14 - 27 **completed** - Page 18

Awesome update.
Khushi has become arnav's world and his inspiration
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Originally posted by: Preety_Nebula

Come On Di the part where he is rocking her...are you teasing me?Me love it .I read three times that part.My shonu loves her shoo much.Thanks.😊

Originally posted by: asha_mehta

Awesome update.
Khushi has become arnav's world and his inspiration
Continue soon

Originally posted by: indi52

libranangel, hi,

what can i say. i am completely speechless and breathless at this comment you leave behind. i am also madly honoured and wondering how possibly could i be deserving of this.

you are right, everything in ipk is fact, even when i have disagreed. that was a place and a feeling like no other. there are days i actually ache to see asr and khushi. the only recourse is to turn to old episodes. which is what we do on a thread called blast from the past. i have never felt like this about any show, on tv or movie, high, low or medium brow.

the fact that i write something called fan fiction at all is really a tribute to the original... and all involved in making it.

but what you write about my words, i am still sitting, and shaking my head, not yet daring to smile.

terribly happy you felt things... if words do not make you touch places within, they seem a bit empty.

and delighted you like the intimate bits, their love making, their sensual and sexual connection. i keep thinking it's fairly easy to write these things, but making it specific to these two people, that's where lies the challenge and the inordinate fun of it... so i try.

i have not read too much fan fiction, but i think i have seen meera's work... will try and read the two you mention here. had no idea khushi was in a coma... that must have been very interesting... i can't imagine what asr must have gone through...

i thank you hugely for every word, i must say it is quite amazing how solid and marked the characters are... i always talk to them when i write, if something feels not quite right, it gets dropped, the characters seem to have a mind of their own... that khushi jumping out of the window... i was at the point where they are both standing at the door face to face with each other. my mind said, now what. and i saw her shutting the door and running, leaping through the window, mojri in hand... crazy.

thanks for reading and saying you'll trust me with this and go where i go. a reader's trust is a precious thing. i do hope i don't take weird turns.

actually, i am still finding it hard to breathe after what you say... thing is, i love writing, and my obsession with ipk has meant i have written constantly this past year and a bit more. helped me centre, helped me know exactly how much i enjoy words and their power, i was pushed into writing fiction by a friend, i was not sure, not at all, but as i got into it... oh it is another world and it is nurturing, and endlessly fascinating.

i look forward to seeing you... sorry for the incoherent response... all your fault.😆

i do try to answer all comments... seems fair. plus i love meeting people.

and please do not worry about not hitting like. i won't lie, i used to frantically count when i started... then i realised i have some of the sweetest readers and there's too much joy in writing to worry about numbers. welcome to "without you," thank you for making me feel so good about writing it... and most of all for having such a good times. oh our poor husbands.

Loved the episode Indi how you brought Heer Ranja dialogues into their love, love making in the form of Khushi's thoughts going into the depth of her mind and how she inspires ASR the hamesha feeling of their love for each other.

Anjili foreboding about what may happen like the way the story is progressing

Originally posted by: indi52

chalhov ji,

thank you so much... yeah that heer ranjha thing that flowed into it... when you love someone, sex is a part of the thing or so it feels to me... it is imbued with the properties of pyaar as it were 😆. otherwise it is an act, a fun happy fabulous act maybe, but without that hamesha element... i am sooo old fashioned.

good you like the turn story is taking. 😳

Indi agree nothing old fashioned about it

Wow Indrani. This was an awesome chapter. Loved how well arnav understands khushi and lets her take a lead. I am glad that Anjali has dr. varma to turn to. i hope she realizes soon as to why she turned to him!!! Please write more about these two and would love to know more about dr. Varma's background. So ASR is going back to Sheesh Mahal. Hope what he finds does not cause Khushi any more anguish. She has suffered enough. Its time she got to enjoy her life with her Rajkumar for Hamesha. Please do an update soon. Thanks for sharing this story with us.