arshi ff: without you... #2, chapters 14 - 27 **completed**

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#151

Originally posted by: yashal_khan
hey dear, thanks yeah now I m doing much better actually my RBC level drop down now only 4%remaing bocz of that I fainted many time n hurt badly that was happened again 2 week before n hurt my neck but thank GOD now I m fine😊 .for update it was another beautifull chapter flashback of child hood was superb😊
n present part how he came back home early for his khushii and feel her torment was lovely.
thanks for pm dear

hi yashal_khan,

i am really sorry to hear about your health. fainting all the time... i hope you stay fine and get absolutely ok soon.
thanks for liking the update... i have fun in this fantasy world, feels good to know that i get some of it right. happy to pm. see you soon and take care, all the best.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#152

Originally posted by: twinki
Awesome update
Loved it
Thnx for pm

hi twinki,

thank you for reading and liking 😳.

happy to pm.

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#153

Originally posted by: MyluvASR
nice update

thanks so much 😳.

Edited by indi52 - 11 years ago

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sskaug25

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Posted: 11 years ago

#154

Lovely update. Loved his caring side and the intimacy between Arshi. So Anjali and Dr. Varma's bonding is growing in between. Waiting to know more about the Sheesh Mahal incident their past. Thanks for the pm.

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#155

Originally posted by: ArshiHamesha

Thnx Indi ,

In blue yes he loves and hates with same passion , two extreme emotions , two sides of same coin, two banks of a river...and he is honest at both ends...But with Khushi he could never hate..."itni Koshish ki tum se nafrat karne ki "...A man of golden heart...indeed

@Lizzie..Thnx but Indi's story is compelling and when she started it I was the LOUDEST voice speaking opposite because she took that moment but I promise her I will follow if...

and she is awesome in it...love it 😊

lizzie,

thank you for saying what you do... yes, you guys will make sure i come out of sheesh mahal ok, won't you 😳. and that beautiful story line has me leaping with joy. 🤗

arshi,

i know you were so upset about that coma... i am glad you are enjoying yourself now... promise you one thing, once we are done with without you, shyam will be so halwa, he'll never slither again. i love what you say about this crazy asr man... absolute gold. they really don't make them like that though they really should.

and mwaah mwaaahhh ami style for saying i'm awesome at telling this tale.

Edited by indi52 - 11 years ago

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#156

Originally posted by: sskaug25
Lovely update. Loved his caring side and the intimacy between Arshi. So Anjali and Dr. Varma's bonding is growing in between. Waiting to know more about the Sheesh Mahal incident their past. Thanks for the pm.

hi sskaug,

good to see you, and happy you enjoyed. somewhere i keep feeling like many others i know that it's all lying there in sheesh mahal, the answers, the heart of this story... hoping to go there soon and find out more. thanks for liking the intimacy... it's always most interesting to write that, how to keep it specific to our two characters, i enjoy finding the words and moods for them. 😳

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IronButterfly

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Posted: 11 years ago

#157

It was lovely how Khushi seek comfort in Arnav.

Her way was beautiful. Her dominance in their love making showed that she wanted control. The control was giving her strength. And she was using that stregth to hide her fears.

It's great on his part that he let her take the lead and comfort her.

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Preety_Nebula

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Posted: 11 years ago

#158

Awesome Indi Di😊

I am still stuck in rocking part and you want to go Sheesh Mahal.It will be a lovely ride❤️

Thnx for the PM😊

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#159

Originally posted by: IronButterfly
It was lovely how Khushi seek comfort in Arnav.
Her way was beautiful. Her dominance in their love making showed that she wanted control. The control was giving her strength. And she was using that stregth to hide her fears.
It's great on his part that he let her take the lead and comfort her.

hi, ironbutterfly,

that control thing you speak of, most interesting. i didn't think of it when i wrote, more about how there's this vibe between two people, that transforms energy as they connect... he touched her when she was sad, slowly that feeling transformed to a quiet, and then stirred again to become this sexual excitement... but yes, maybe she seeks to feel a sense of control too over this hopeless situation. the intense feeling of loss around the death of her parents. no matter what she does she can't change it... khushi has tried to seek control of this perhaps through that ultra positive nature... by putting up stars... by having a vishwas... but deep down i've felt always, it is there, which is why the fear of darkness, of speeding cars... some day she will face it all...

i have often felt if there's anyone she'll share it with, it will be him...

in an earlier chapter i heard her saying such things to him.

he possibly enjoyed her taking charge at a male, sexual kind of way. but he also understood her need to do this, as you hint. yeah, that feels like asr doesn't it. 😳

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#160

Originally posted by: Preety_Nebula
Awesome Indi Di😊

I am still stuck in rocking part and you want to go Sheesh Mahal.It will be a lovely ride❤️

Thnx for the PM😊

awww, goofy, you enjoyed?

which rocking part? where where? sheesh mahal by and by. happy to pm. happier to see your bright blue here.