arshi ff: without you... #2, chapters 14 - 27 **completed** - Page 108

Originally posted by: ...SaRun...

I am speechless its simply awesome 👏

Originally posted by: wiwy

Aww! That was absolutely briliant in thought action and words!👏👏👏 My heart skipped a beat when Arnav changed his direction and ran back to the danger zone. But you are right he had to face Sheeshmahal headlong. Only then would he be rid of his nightmare. That scene that lay at the very core of his dark self was magnificently described by you In Di! And I loved how he thrashed those horrendous monsters. Shyam is poison. Why did Anjali want Chhotey to stop? I hope he does not come back into their lives ever. The last part, how Khushi hugged and broke into tears was amazing. It must have been a difficult chapter to write but you did a great job! It was like everything was happening before my eyes. I could follow it to the minutest of details like the salty relieved tears rolling down her cheeks..

Originally posted by: IronButterfly

High on emotions and drama.

Originally posted by: indi52

hi rizarshi,

thanks so much for liking that chapter... yes the sheeshmahal saga needed to be faced and dealt with strongly. i am glad asr got the opportunity to do that. and khushi too needed to hear the truth. they will slowly begin to let go now i have a feeling. good to see you. do you make gif siggies? is that what your siggie says? see you next week.