arshi ff: without you... #2, chapters 14 - 27 **completed**

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divsarunfan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1041

wow awesome👏👏
simply superb
keep rocking di👍🏼

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1042

Originally posted by: ravalisharma06
Wonderful update!!

thanks so much, ravalisharma, glad you liked.

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Love.life2

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1043

Thnx for d pm

Overwhelming for me.

Omg the nerve of the creep goadin khushi to kill tht mailk n giving her a guilt of commiting a sin.

Only if tht devil wud hve ended by tht mallik n then the mallik arrested wud hve solved.

Coz how many times did tht devil come back after each crime.

Poor Arshi hve to relive all the dreadful memories n their entire life wht they believe ws tormentin them bt the truth ws even more horrific.

However Arnav may hve a little bit of venting out at tht vile murderer by beatin bt nothing cn give them wht they lost.

I m confused at times when Arnav sees the lehenga then yells ma n then khushi n sees the fearful hazel eyes.

It wud hve been nice if u explain a bit abt wht is he thinking is it d past is khushi's eyes or her mother'sa eyes tht he saw tht night.

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1044

^^^

hi renee,

thanks so much for reading.

yeah, lot of pain here and perhaps finally a way out of the pain too.

okay that confusing vision sort of thing he slips into.

he used to always see himself running down a corridor and the word "maa" trapped within it. it was a recurring nightmare where he is running and there's a terrible feeling that something is going wrong. usually he would see his sister dressed as a bride. and hear shehnai.

when he is in coma at one point, just before he awakens, he feels he sees his mother in a garden and she tells him to go back... someone is waiting for him.

later, one evening he finds himself near ber plants on a ridge area in delhi, where there is also a lot of shivji's datura flowers growing, he remembers how his mother liked the flowers... somewhere soon after that he gets this vision like thing, where he is running down the corridor, he can hear gun shots... then suddenly the pillars in his imagination that line the corridors start moving and flowing toward each other and he can see maa behind them, and a girl running with her lehenga lifted, she looks back, it's khsuhi and a bullet is coming at her...

it is just a funny picture in his head, but it brings together the women he loves the most... and a sense of danger all around. a bullet targets khushi.

this time as he runs away, he gets the vision again... and that's when he feels, no, he will not leave, he must go back... he wants to face this evil. he also wants to make sure khushi is always safe.

something tells him if he leaves now, that bullet coming toward khushi will not disappear. it's a little extra rational this feeling. a bit surreal.

hope that helps.

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1045

Originally posted by: divsarunfan
wow awesome👏👏
simply superb
keep rocking di👍🏼

hi divya,

aww... thanks so much... good to see you and your friend.

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RebeccaDaphne

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1046

Hey Indi! Amazing chapter, actually I read the last few chapters only today and I was stunned at how the story progressed! It's wonderful, so fast paced and intense. The last chapter was brilliant, it was like watching a film, and at last with the three of them together after their ordeal, I felt relieved for them. I love your story, it completes what we never got to see in the show, in fact your story is in many ways what I wished to see, you explored a track that was always needed, your imagination brought it to life and it was written beautifully. Thank you! 🤗

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sabreenxz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1047

hie indi sweety!!!!!!! kahan se laati ho yaar itni creativity ...em just amazed to read such a lovely and beautiful updtaedxss ...just awesome chapter yaar...i really fell in love wid ua amzing updates sweetooo...just around of handfil aplauxse to ua amazing update loce arnav n khushi n love u tooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! muahhh👏👏👏👏👏🥳🤗

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Mehreen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1048

Indi 👏

a beautiful climax of this story you have created.I really enjoyed their dependance on each other blindly without asking any questions or pointing out anything.Minor details which make so many differences.

Family is a pillar at these times but I think these three always have each other to hold on.