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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful OS...
I love it...

I will think positive about how it ends :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wonderfu os so emotional but I am a sucker for happy ending so Arishi live happily everafter.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
aww this was so emotional... loved it dear
I like happy endings however hard life is.. she comes back for her love
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
Oh..end of our own..
i go with happy endings :)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very heart wrenching. You definitely are very good with such emotional tracks as i have seen in other stories by you.
It is left with an open ending , and the optimist in me would like to believe that she did come back to her husband and daughter.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
Sorry, I'm late.
Funny mood really?? This is the result of you being in funny mood!!! 😲
This was emotionally wrenching with the uncertainty that loomed throughout and ended with the same too.
The promises she extracted from him - to be happy, to give happiness to their daughter Akshita, to not blame her in any way, to give her all his love like he did with Khushi and to live fully even if she dies - they were touching and at the same time I wanted her to stop, to hold on to the hope that she'll survive and they would happily see their daughter growing together and they'll grow old with each other.
I am a sucker for happy endings so no guess in what I'm imagining the end to be - a chance to be together again. 😊 I can never imagine ArHi without each other, for me they'll always be together - in this world or another world. For me even when they'll die it would be Barfi style (Sath-Sath). 😉

I'm still amused that this was an outcome of funny mood.😕



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Posted: 11 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: aquagal

Sorry, I'm late.
Funny mood really?? This is the result of you being in funny mood!!! 😲
This was emotionally wrenching with the uncertainty that loomed throughout and ended with the same too.
The promises she extracted from him - to be happy, to give happiness to their daughter Akshita, to not blame her in any way, to give her all his love like he did with Khushi and to live fully even if she dies - they were touching and at the same time I wanted her to stop, to hold on to the hope that she'll survive and they would happily see their daughter growing together and they'll grow old with each other.
I am a sucker for happy endings so no guess in what I'm imagining the end to be - a chance to be together again. 😊 I can never imagine ArHi without each other, for me they'll always be together - in this world or another world. For me even when they'll die it would be Barfi style (Sath-Sath). 😉

I'm still amused that this was an outcome of funny mood.😕




Thank You so much for your comment :)

By 'funny' I did not mean 'humorous', not at all. I meant a mood which I cannot describe exactly...a strange mood, a weird one.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Rae,
I so want to hug you at the moment. Spur of the moment writing of yours always makes me all teary eyed and my heart pinching.

It hit home ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
emotional...felt sad
but beautifully written
thanks for another arshi os
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
Wonderful writing Rae, emotional and a bit heartrending.

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