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meera30

@meera30

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Numbing. Totally numbing. I don't know what brought this on but as always it was powerful, powerful writing Rae. You do have a way with OSes. Have I ever told you that?

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mayurisb80

@mayurisb80

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

That was wonderful...I loved the way you left the end open atleast there is hope...

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thebubblespop12

@thebubblespop12

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

In my ending of course she lived and all three lived happily ever after!

Wonderful os! So much power behind something so short!!

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

well we can think that she did make it through
or she didnt
but that doesnt detract from the story
his promise to him that matters
aww that was beautiful for sure

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meera06

@meera06

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Emotional ..well written!

I'm just going to imagine a happy ending for this one!

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Amiarisme

@Amiarisme

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

her promises ,ahhh didnt she covered everything there was to cover in case if she is no more around.

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Sasha

@sarunsashasingh

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Amazing n beautiful writing.
I hope both Khushi n the baby are fine.

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__blossom__

@__blossom__

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Oh my god! That was beautiful!

I know u'll find this strange but im glad you ended it there because its because of the ending what makes this os so beautiful! I mean i want to think her as alive and happy with her family but this mini heart attack i got wen you ended it there was thrilling! Im not joking!

Great OS! very well written!

Loved it! :D

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

loved the os beautifully written love d the emotional turmoil beautifully describe loved the promise loved the open end it makes us choose how it goes so in my mind both survived awesome os thanks for the pm

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vrinda16

@vrinda16

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

That was such an emotional OS Rae but the open end u gave it makes me wish that it was good news the Dr. had to c say to Arnav abt Khushi having survived this too

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