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Posted: 11 years ago
#41
Wow open end
Well very few writers follow that trend
But I loved ur os
It's to the readers view what he/she wants to believe in
Thank u for posting
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
Nicely written.. Arnav n Khushi's conversation was so emotional.. I will end it like Khushi made it along with their baby... 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: msin

Very emotional...but these days I have seen ... That whatever the patient may say... The doctors save the mother first,.. And then the child..I have seen a couple of very close cases... Where the child did not survive due to severe complication but the mother was saved... The hospitals refuse to entertain any pleas of saving the child...at the cost of mother... There are certain laws good hospitals tend to follow..


Hey! Thank You so much for your comment and also for the information. I will not even pretend to know about such laws but what I wanted to portray here (and what the doctor resounds) is that due to some complications, the child has a better chance at survival than the mother and hence the doctors would work according to that. Hope it is clearer now but once again thank you :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: AngelTeen


Thank You so much for your comment :)

By 'funny' I did not mean 'humorous', not at all. I meant a mood which I cannot describe exactly...a strange mood, a weird one.



Ok. I was wondering if you write such heart-wrenching and tough one-shots in funny mood, what would you write if you're actually in a serious mood. 😛
After reading this OS I remembered 'Papa Raizada' and the happily ever-after to overcome this. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
Another beautiful piece of writing...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
Awww...that was so emotional
Very beautifully written
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
Heartwrenching and oh so real. The optimist in me thinks that the story ends with a miracle and both baby and mother are saved...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
Great one. ... But Kya hota hain??!!!! Does she survive. ..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: emistry

Great one. ... But Kya hota hain??!!!! Does she survive. ..


Thank You and as I said in the note following the story, you can decide its end on your own. Its open-ended.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
Wow,
Im completely spellbound
This os is truly Mindblowing.
Really nice job.

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