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ARSHI"S INDEX

EPISODE 153-154

Payesh Wedding Part-6

Dance me or Dance with me

King wants to dance around his queen at his own terms for rectifying his mistakes yet queen is in no mood to dance on her king's command .She would rather dance with some one else to keep her ego chin up and he would see her with some one else with burning desires under the fire of ego.

Arnav's feet jams up when Madhu tells NK to hold Khushi's waist and look at each other eyes with passion.His rage and acrimony has no limit and it's not gone unnoticed and felt by Khushi who was feeling uncomfortable too gives her side look to Arnav who leaves with hissing anger.But she herself can't gaze anyone with intensity and she feels that too today.There is a strong longing in between them He can't see and she can't feel the same other than his touch.She is conveying that message while turning her head to her King who just gave command to her bro to take his place and that bro of him is feeling awkward at the same time.


Shyam enters with his despicable game in his hand with his daring and filthy eyes always lusting over Khushi under which she feels very uneasy.He calls Anjali in their room and here he starts his slouchy game.He gives Anjali red roses and starts sneezing over it which makes her uneasy and at the top he suggests Khushi's name to bring Anjali's phone [Khushi is not HP of this house].She dances over his commands and calls Khushi.Khushi sees her distress and yelling over flowers and throwing em in the garbage.He pretends that RaniSahiba doesn't like cheap gifts like him.

Pause here:He just called himself cheap'.so true these flowers are not cheap.Even their thorns have more value than him.

Khushi glares at him for his temerity and audacity and shut him off for that.Her words show how much respect she gives to Anjali.She knows how important Shyam is for Anjali so there must be a reason for her to throw these flowers.She shuns the ill thoughts and moves on without dancing on his slouchy games.You go girl! Smart cookie.

One thing was good the rest of the time he couldn't come down and after Buaji's name'..who wants to get ripped apart limb by limb.


In GH Buaji takes out her wedding dress and thinks it's best for Khushi and she calls her in joy.NK and Buaji meaning the great NandKishore and her first dancing chat was hilarious.

Pause here:Buaji took out old wedding dress for Khushi indicates future as Khushi wears Anjali's wedding dress and all for her wedding rituals.

Payal and Akash dance so well and become totally unaware of their surroundings.which was not gone unnoticed by Khushi, Anjali and NK.They pull their legs promptly.


Madhu brings back everyone back on dance floor.Khushi pulls Naniji to dance floor while she descends but she doesn't pay attention in her enthusiasm Arnav was coming down.He tells her go dance with NK as he is his replacement''.Replacement word dances like Tango in Khushi's brain and she takes full swing with it.

NK can hardly keep up with Khushi in dancing and steps on her feet so many times.When Madhu tells them to get to their positions ,Khushi ogles Arnav in her background and here the challenge starts in her head.She wants to challenge his pertinacity.She calls NK "chote" and then "Arnavji" and poor Nanehji becomes confused.She tells him as he is the "replacement" of Arnav so she should call him with his name.It aggrevates Arnav.Madhu declares her "patakha" [bold] instead of a simple girl.Khushi deliberately calls NK Arnavji and rebukes at different steps till she castigates at him by saying"You can't do anything right'. 'It's easy to make people dance in your tune, but not easy to dance."


Arnav incinerates at her castigation and ready to leave when her rebuking words stops her again to give her a glare"Arnavji Nazron se Nazrain tou milaiye"[Look into my eyes]..By saying this she gives a glare back at Arnav and

murmurs "now get the punishment for giving NK your place"'hmmm interesting doesn't it sound Khushi you want him to dance with you.

PONDERING CONNECTED DOTS:Her each word comes true during Teri Meri dance.He explores her waist,seduces her,completely puts his guard down for her to give her what she is desiring here.Their deep and intense gazes are way beyond looking into eyes.


Nk starts twirling her while she castigates against Arnav monotonously. "Jiss ka naam Arnav ho who koi bhi kaam theek nahin kar sakta" [Whoever has this name Arnav can't do anything right] she continues,"They can't sing,dance or laugh"She wants him smile and laugh'.

PONDERING CONNECTED DOTS:Arnav fulfilled her wish and dances from Teri Meri to Bali mein Honeymoon till all the way Salman and Phela Phela Pyar

This was getting over bearing for Arnav and he can't allow that.He walks towards her heedlessly and she lands on her chest when NK lost control of her while twirling'.His tight hold on her shoulder grabbed her permission by her fast heartbeat and heavy breathing.Time froze in between them and they both totally became unaware of their surroundings like only they exist in this frame and no one else.Her crazy heart beat was not gone unnoticed by Arnav.She looks up gets lost in his soft and intense gazes while his breath is brushing her face.His hand on her shoulder has loked down by hers as she granted him permission.Raba Ve intensifies the desires in their eyes with their pounding hearts.


PONDERING CONNECTED DOTS: Arnav's words later fits here"Khabi Khabi mujhe lagta hai tumhare au mere elawa iss duniya mein aur koi nahin"[There is no one in this world except you and me]


CREDIT TO TUMBLR

"yehi aada ho, yehi josh ho aur chehrepe yehi bhao ho"

(there should be the grace, the eagerness and the rage on the face.) "

Madhu commented to see the expressions in Arnav and Khsuhi's face.

His expression changes after the realization of the surroundings yet hands stays frozen"Tou jiska naam Arnav ho woh khuch bhi theek nahin kar sakta right'.Shyed mujhe tumhain pakadna nahin chahiye tha'girne daina chahiye tha"[It means I should 've let you fall instead of catching.] Big meaning..

PONDERING CONNECTED DOTS: In Sheesh Mahal Arnav caught Khushi and she landed on his heart since that day regardless he tried his best to make himself away from her.Each time he got rid of her she entered his shell to have her place there whether he threw her out of his office or home ,he ended up having her in his arms.

He speaks with in an enticing voice. But Anjali answers for Khushi as she is worried about her. NK also looks a bit dubious with their proximity and gazing. Madhu asks Arnav, is he planning to join them? Her assistant and his witticism is reaching sky highg limits with ArHi's couple hint for future . But Khushi estranges with this idea,"no, I don't want to dance with him."

Arnav rages over this and says again obliquely that he also doesn't want to dance with her. Khushi exasperates at him for this by telling him when she said that she wants to dance with him?. She continues practice with NK. Arnav strides fast, but doesn't forget to give his turn look at her. Khushi is feeling awkward but Nk gets doubtful and quizzical to see both of them and their expressions. hmmm'.Today he gets a glimpse of their war ..


Madhu's break brings a new level of dance in between Naniji and Buaji who is being called to have a twist in this sangeet.Both Ladies give such a competition to Madhu that she is ready to run away.At the top NK call them "Budiyah"[old] instead of "Badiyah"[good] to pacify these ladies.NK and his hinglish is the charm of this show.

Khushi corrects NK along with others yet tease him by calling him "Naneji aap bohat Budiyah ho"[NK you are too good] which brings a soft and seductive smile on Arnav's face by looking at her smiling as her smile is the survival of his life but over here is a relief for him seeing her smiling after the heartbreak he caused .Khushi looks at him and gets a "sukoon" peace in her as he does not look LG while smiling for her.They both share a sweet intense stare. Arnav changes his expression to grinchy one and leaves his Khushi wondering about. Arnav's veracity seeing his crazy Khushi smiling over NK's foolishness is worth watching .Indeed small things matter to him and that's why Khushi is the reason of his happiness who also values happiness in small things.

On Dinning table Buaji and Naniji compares dance master with their MIL and NK has problem with her strictness .Khushi's style to show NK the steps of dance with her innocent expressions makes NK just stares at him but her LG burns his lips in desires and didn't go unnoticed by his crazy girl.They both share a deep look which makes Khushi flustered.NK praises Khushi which in unbearable for Arnav and his face delivers only anger.


The dance topic changes to New year eve and NK mentions them that he read in the horoscope section in the newspaper that whom you will meet first at 12 on the New Year's Day, you will be with the person for the rest of your life.This news jerks both Arnav and Khushi and they give each other a quick shot like they have a set mind that it will definitely happen to them or they want this to be happened . hmmm'.interesting..Both want to see each other yet their egoistic thinking and silly acts are making this new year eve more appealing.

Symbolism and connection:#12 completes life cycle and brings good fortune'connection is easy as Their union is inevitable which is going to bring good fortune in both Anjali and Arnav's life including Guptas.Shyam's reality will come out during this year which is lingering as a grey shadow on every ones' life.

Anjali mentions she sees her hubby face each year at that time which makes Buaji ,Khushi and Payal sad for her.When NK mentions Akash and Payal and their plan on new year eve,Buaji and Naniji jumps in the middle to restrict them meeting like this before marriage.OK ArshiH is confused then what the heck they are doing while dancing and all'..No logic for me ppl.

Khushi teases Payal but condemns herself and prays for not seeing LG at that time.

She prays to DM,"Sach mein Khushi agar 2011 keh akhri palon mein tu ne uss laad governor ka chehera dekhliya na, tou 2012 ka bhi kalyan ho jayaiga. Phir porey saal tum kuch nahi kar paogi, sirf, what the what the karti reh jaogi." She prays to DM.

Translation: Really Khushi, if you see that laad governor's face at the eve of 2011, then 2012 will turn bad for you. And Then the whole year you won't be able to do anything excpt what the what the.

Arnav after hearing all of this "EXCUSE ME."

"I'll not come in front of you that's for sure. But somehow I feel that you will come in front of me right at 12." Arnav is confident at her crazy girl.

"I'm not crazy, that I'll come in front of you." Khushi japes at him .

Arnav foreshadows with confidence as he knows it will happen because he will make sure of it.

I don't know why, but you will come. I wish my prediction is wrong but I know you will .

Pause here:So you are preparing her mind to set a challenge as always so you can lose over her to make her feel better after the heart break you caused for her.

Khushi stops him, "you are saying whatever you feel like it.I am not that crazy..

"Let's see tomorrow." He turns to leave, but comes back again."Honestly it will be better if you don't come in front of me."

So challenge is on and Khushi is up to his challenge

"There is no way she will confront him tomorrow."..hmmm.let's see...



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episode 166

they call it a vampire. something in a piece of communication which is so powerful that it seems to "suck" all the attention, and doesn't let you see the entire picture. a few words became a right royal cousin of the prince of transylvania for me while watching the first days of sangeet.
loved the the metaphor. very well said.

as anjali and snake announced the first dance of the evening, they gave an ishara about the first dancer...

he said,"jab woh naachti hain, ujala toh reshmi hota his hai..." when she dances, brightness of course becomes silken...
she said, "andhera bhi makhmali h jata hai..." darkness also becomes velvety.
i went, "what the..."

a beat in my ears delicate, playful; flashes from a sultry "cabaret" of those days which are now in retro land, but where i grew up. a hot number with a girl swinging and gyrating in shimmery costume, fingers spread out covering part of face, come hither looks just behind, a feeling of night and naughtiness.
aesthetic description of the cabaret dance.

"reshmi ujala hai...(the perfectly measured pause with a heady rhythm building up before the next words float in light and alluring) makhmali andhera... aaj ki raat... aisa kuchh karo..."

silken is the brightness, velvety the dark... this night tonight, do something...

anyone seen sharmilee? the 1971 super hot romance about an army officer utterly sexy with the uhhhest smile, shashi kapoor... in love with the wrong twin, the very sultry rakhee. in that film there was this cabaret, by one of the newer dancers, the fabulous helen being the reigning queen forever. she was smooth and sensuous, and together with rd's music and asha's knowing, worldly singing of the evening words, that number pretty much set fire to the moment and got permanently embedded in an 11 year old's mind. the song, the words, the slowly undulating danseuse.

only her name was not top of mind. no... i thought, can't be jayshree t, i've seen her do so many dances, that sophistication... not her surely.
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thanks for the video. I watched some song before, but never saw any movie. I never knew that Nani was a famous dancer in Bolly movies.

of course, i was wrong. it is her. i am so grateful to the writers for inserting this little wink wink into the dialogue. between that dance uo there and the one we saw in 166, it was like a tribute to her extraordinary career and talent. more than 40 years she's been around, i was surprised to see her as nani ji, i had no idea she could act so well. in hindi films she mainly did itemish numbers i think, there may have been a few exceptions... she was achhi nahi bahu in one. perhaps marathi film gave her the opportunity to explore her talents as an actor.
i also loved her character as nani. she is a fab actress.

and there she was.

sweet, strong, capable, and bichhu yeh bichhu dancing nani ji. got to say, this nani really was like none other as khushi said during holi (was it?), aap toh naachti hai.

i also had no idea how articulate this woman usually in skimpy clothes and strange make up was. saw a wonderful hour long interview with her once, will post if i can find it. jayshree t really astounds me... who would have thought...
nani is an awesome dancer. Plz do post the video. I would love to watch that.

whew. as you can see, nani ji got me this episode.

even the boy came second.
hmmm pondering thought!!!


there was more velvet in the episode. it was the fabric of her dress, it was in the look in his eyes every time he saw her. sometimes it was in her eyes too, just below the miff and challenge.

and there was glamour. for the first time and perhaps the only time in ipk, khushi looked not just beautiful but glam. sanaya carried off the maroon velvet top and chiffon lehenga beautifully, who could blame asr for looking acutely in love... a bit sillified by it almost.
Khushi was looking like Sanaya for sure, smart, gorgeous, ravishing and sexy. No wonder why the sexy dude couldn't take his eyes off from her.

as the evening of sangeet gets going, rm is full of guests, everyone is looking great, a gorgeous stage twinkling with fairy lights awaits the performances.

the gupta's arrive, someone's scanning the view casually as if he doesn't care. even to the most clueless observer it is fairly clear however that he is waiting for his challenger to arrive. she who will do "kuch bhi" should she lose. he is not just waiting... waiting impatiently.

asr is not alone in his search, there's nk on a similar quest. movie style they practically dash into each other so focussed they are on their pursuit... realising what the other's up to, both look a tad embarrassed, but not for long. asr wades in on the offensive, "kya dhoond rajhe ho tum?" what are you looking for?


poor nk, "er, woh khushi ji..." the man is looking mighty irritated. nk and khushi's little friendship is irksome, jealousy is not an emotion he is comfortable with, but seems he can't cast it aside either. in all these light asr jealous of nk khushi moments are we seeing shades of what's to come? if this bothers him, imagine his state of mind on the terrace that night. he's about to tell her "faraq kyun padta hai" and there she is... khushi in the embrace of another man. how his mind must have shattered. and then the fusillade of "revelations."
exactly. Can't even describe in words, how he felt! But I would be happy if he would clarify this with Khushi before coming to a conclusion.

"par nannav, tum kisse dhoond rahe ho?" but nannav, who are you looking for? nk counters, a hint of mischief there?

who are you looking for... one could go deeper into that one... really who is it that asr seeks? a girl who drives him crazy, or a path to himself really, or maybe something else?

he is caught unawares by that query, just looks lost... but la la la the notes are in, traipsing, lilting, a song in his heart though his khadoos air is intact..


payal, rather beauteous today, eyes searching for the one. mano in a mood to snub. but her son is in romantic hide and seek vein. di enters the fray, and a sweet fam moment... there's a festive feel to the night, a brightness rather special.
Awesome description of the scene.Loved Akash's sweet gesture to Payal.


suddenly... bang.. drag...
all turn. an entry is in progress.
"hai re nand kissore, zor lagake hainya, dam lagake hainya" oh lord, push it with your strength, way to go... with more energy... way to go...

buaji, rope slung over one shoulder is hauling in something heavy out of sight. "dhakka maaro dhakka." push... push.

nk and asr have turned to stare as has mami, all nonplussed.

and from behind buaji rises a vision... heaving... khushi with hair open, teeka on, glowing in maroon, pushing something.

nanhe sees the lovely one, hair blowing gently, can't contain himself, exclaims, "khushi ji!!"


a head swivels.

"what?
"
Look how impatient he is looking. He was longing for so long to see her beautiful face.

and khushi bends down again to push.

eyes turn swiftly in the direction... "kahan?" where?

but she's nowhere.

nk says, there, but uh huh, no kkg..."nk, din mein sapne dekhna band karo..." stop day dreaming, advises the dour one.

ah, so she is a sapna a dream, not a darwana (scary) one?

khushi comes up again.

nk, "she's right there!"

and she's down again, even as a head swings... the game of hide and seek, ankh micholi resumes... feels as though he is here somewhere, being invoked before sangeet in the ipk way... sense of krishna... hai re nand kissore.

and this time unlike the evening of di's anniversary, there is no doubt, another fabulous love story has taken birth on earth. we believe in reincarnation it is said, perhaps every story of love between two souls, is a rebirth of a primal, first love story ever between the masculine and the feminine force? there's radha and krishna in each one of them maybe?

asr thinks khushi won't come today, too scared of losing.

"shayad challenge se dar gayi hai." got scared off by the challenge maybe.

and out pops miss muffet looking big spider in the eye.

"hum nahin darte... samjhe aap." i don't get scared... do you understand?

oh he is happy to see her. so happy that his mind says something to the air and it wafts and winds lifting her hair, swirling around their love song...

i want to defeat you, says her look.

i want to win you, replies his.😃

he reaches her along with nk, "main hari prakash ko bulata hoon" let me call hari prakash, she and buaji are lugging a heavy trunk and he offers a sensible solution... get someone to carry it.

of course, she declines, no question of being sensible here, this is the enemy party and kkg has brought along super sanaka as her stealth weapon. there's no running away from this madness tonight. makhmali sanaka.👏

as this huge trunk was hauled, pushed, abandoned, sat in the middle of the way, intrigued mami, one had to wonder what it was all about? did it symbolise anything... perhaps the heavy burden of the knowledge of shyam that all the guptas hid...😆
or maybe something else. what i couldn't get over was what couldn't be carried by buaji and kkg together, nor by nk, the very thin hp could pick up just like that. 😆

last few minutes had interesting intercutting between nani ji and nk's bichhu ye bicchu dance and shyam desperately seeking scorpion. a little obvious, but apt nonetheless.
shyam is so disgusting! The CVs deftly showed the bichhu dance of nani and NK, along the real bichhu dance of shyam.

by the way, did anyone notice how terrific the man was looking in his galaband. dark brown deepening chocolate eyes. vampire number two.
hai! she ki aar bolte. how many times i died to see my sexy boy!

Mind blowing analysis
Again i want to ask you, how do you write so good?
All the bold lines stood out for me.
my comments are in purple.
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thanks so much, sohara...

she ki aar bolte... see our sexy boy has you exclaiming in bangla... what all he does for us... hayee.😆

jayashree t was a dancer in many hindi movies... not just cabaret... other stuff too. one may or may not like those dances but now i can see you can't fault her on skill. very talented. this particular cabaret was a major hit... the song was superbly sung too... and despite that strange men rushing around being lewd, somehow she looked very smooth and sexy and not ridiculous... lovely moves i thought.

about asr not asking khushi that night what the truth was...

i asked myself that question. other people... "normal" people may have been able to come to that. but here was a man, hurt, betrayed by his own father and family, bottled up for 12 years, never having ever fallen in love... who for the first time feels something for a woman, something other "normal" people feel anyway, but a rare absolute novel thing for him.

he cautiously lets his barricaded heart step out a bit... wants to say everything to her... give himself to her, tell her faraq kyun padta hai...

then his sister has an accident... he is worried sick and in emotional turmoil... he still wants to reach khushi... only to find this.

would he have a discussion with her about it, then and there?

my instinct... no.

"chhap gaya hai dimaag mein, mit nahin sakta."

barun executed that chhap jana on his dimaag as he quietly turned away from the scene that completely shattered him... the moment when i realised we are actually looking not only at a good looking man but an actor. an actor with tremendous potential.

his parents' death, all the troubles of his life didn't shatter him quite this way... he broke inside... his response again was that "himmat dikhai" and for his di's sake or so he thought he married the woman he loved with his spirit and soul. there was a tragedy in that moment for arnav singh raizada.

as there was for khushi kumari gupta.

i am rambling again... 😆





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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sohara

oh, Soni, that is so sweet of you.
you made such a lovely Mausam he suhana poem with us.But how cum you missed your part!
your name should be with us also.


Probably a little late to comment but i love this!!!
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Probably a little late to comment but i love this!!!


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Episode 159

Nahi!!!!

Lights out, 10 seconds before midnight, jalebi in hand, she anxiously yells for her sister to wake up and come celebrate the New Year with her.

10'9'8'

Didi wake up!'

7...6'5'

Didi, hurry!...

He sees his phone he makes a quick run for it.

4'3'2'1'

Midnight!

She takes a bite of her jalebi, lights go on and she turns to face her Didi and sees Arnav instead.

Nahi!!!!! Oh no!

Two couples have come face to face on New Year's Eve at midnight. It is said that that is the person who will be your life partner. One couple is happy to see each other but the other thinks they have been cursed' I always felt arnav wants to see khushi deep down inside but as for khushi he is still a laad governor so for her she is cursed

But have they?

She is so beside herself more so then him. She is yelling at him for coming before her and his answer to her is "Excuse me?" He was not expecting such a reaction from her

Kushi is reminding him of his words to her that she will be the one who will show up in front of him but she says it is not so. Look who has come in front of whom! I was happy khushi reminded him because he was so confident that khushi would screw upYou just have to look at his eyes to see she has hurt him a little he looks a little bothered to me. me too But of course he will suppress whatever it is he does feel. She asks him how did he come in? She looks at her open window and asks him did he come through her window? He grabs her, puts her hand over her mouth and pushes her up against a wall. "Shut up! Shut up, KKG!" He tells her. SHhh, someone may hear. God forbid they are found in this compromising situation with Payal outside the house as well! I can imagine it now...Haye Re NandeKishore, yeh ka huwa She stops struggling when she realizes that Payal is not in her bed.

Akash has brought Payal sweets from Lucknow. He holds her hand and says, to her not to think that she is separating from her family. They will both be part of each other's family. They are not losing anyone they are gaining each other. Nothing is more important than Payal's happiness and she tells him that he is her happiness. Wonderful! I found this sweet too...akash is a sweety but can he live up to these promises

Kushi says that this is called love and how nice akash has done this for her sister. She can't believe that he is his brother.

Excuse me again, what? She means he believes in love, ASR says it is stupid and nonsense. He says he told Akash as such. Kushi turns to him and says but why are you like this so bitter? As she says these words to him he swallows hard, I think knowing that deep down he has some feelings for this crazy girl he didn't want before him on this night, but he will not give in. he walks over to her with a harden edge, and says to her that the entire world is crazy to believe in such things. Wishing does not bring you anything. I am also sure that when he was 14 and wished with all his might to have his mother return and that couldn't happen is when he lost all faith. When his uncle threw him out of the house with absolutely nothing but the clothes on his back, he lost all faith. No he will never give in to any of these crazy emotions. The world will never beautify with artificial flowers. The world is stone hearted and merciless and always has been he proclaims! He tells her she will never understand this because she doesn't have a'..brain, dimaag, to understand. The perfect O forms at her mouth. How dare he? She goes to reprimand him when a knock on the door occurs. I loved how you described this scene, the red really stood out to me

At the door is NK with an armful of roses. I find him so adorable

Kushi is going to open the door with Arnav following when she sees Buaji has gotten up. She pushes him back in the bedroom. What the? She covers his mouth. Shhh, Buaji is up! ASR would have just left when he had the chance and he does not care what anyone thinks but he is enjoying khushi's craziness.

Buaji asnwers the door and NK is standing there.

Surprise NK!

Nahi!!!!

Buaji says she wanted to see NandiKishore and there is NK standing before her. NK sees her and imagines himself and Buaji in wedding attire. Silly boy! Buaji asks why he has come and asks him in. I really enjoy bua ji and NK...they are just to funny

Kushi AKA Sanaya was absolutely brilliant in her comedic role. One of the Blasters had mentioned that she reminded her of Lucille Ball while Arnav resembled Desi Arnez. i agree with the read too I have to agree 100%. She is perfect with her comedic timing and incessant rambling and antics. Holding her ears and bobbing up and down to beg him not to yell, hysterical! Or how she holds her fingers up in front of her lips shhhushing him until he agrees. So very cute. she cracks me up

Garima has now awoken. What's going on? Is anything wrong? Nk says no he has just come to wish Happy New Year. He asks for Kushi. Buaji calls for Kushi she says NK has come. ASR says "what?!" with a look of disbelief. She slips out the door sideways not letting the door open all the way so ASR is not seen.

They all are asking when she came back and where is Payal? Kushi says she is not here, um , no she is sleeping. So funny!!! Again her comedic role is fantastic. NK says hi and happy new year and Kushi says Happy New Year backin a round about way. Again cute hysterical. Where is Payal? She's not here, no again Payal is sleeping. Buaji goes to her room, Kushi rushes ahead and closes the door. Buaji asks inside and Kushi says LG, no Arnavji, no Payal is sleeping! She just can't lie!!! NK asks her if Nanav is inside? Nahi! Nooo! she says. No one is in there. Garima says Payal. Kushi says Payal is sleeping!!! She holds her ears and starts doing her squats again and they think she is going crazy so late at night. NK saysto her, stop and that she just said that Nanav was inside. She says why does he call him that trying to distract him from the subject. He starts to tell the story and she says amazing. Loved how you described it!!!!!!!👏 this scene made me go🤣

Arnav is pacing back and forth wondering why NK is there and how has he overcome his jet lag so fast. He opens the door slightly to see Kushi shaking his hand Happy New Year. He goes to hand her roses and Buaji takes them out of his hands. Garima is just shaking her head. she knew those flowers were not for bua ji Kushi says bye and is pushing him out the door and then she pushes Buaji to go to bed too.

She runs into her room and shuts the door. She is pacing back and forth while being barraged by a myriad of questions by Arnav. "What the? Why was NK here? Why did he give you flowers?" Jealous? I think so. He asks her what is the matter and if she is okay. She says how can she be since she has seen him at midnight. She says she sent Buaji to bed so he should leave, PLEASE! He asks her what was he doing or wasn't he trying to do just that? Buaji calls Kushi who is now freaking out even more. He says he is going out there and she says in front of her aunt she will kill them! She tells him to lie on the bed and he asks her if she has lost it. Se says if aunt comes in she will find out her sister is not here and make a big to do. As she says to do she waves her arms and he goes flying on to her bed. She tells DM wants the same as he is lying on the bed. She helps place his feet on the bed and covers him. this girl is something else and what is more unbelievable is that arnav actually went along with it

Buaji wants to know what took her so long as she tries to enter the bedroom. Kushi is standing there blocking her way. That is definitely not happening when Buaji is concerned. She pushes her aside and calls Payal. Kushi runs and says she is sleeping. Buaji says so why are you awake, go to bed. Kushi tries to deny that she is sleepy and Buaji insists. This is another fun part of the episode when Kushi slips into bed beside Arnav. (where she belongs!) 👏

Tentative, daring not to touch her "sister", she slowly enters the bed.

Buaji covers her and tells her move over!

Nahi!!!

Not in bed with him!


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Episode-159

Time stilled for a moment, dhak dhak dhak dhak, the thump of their heart beat is only audible now.(thanks to Arshidiehardfan to make me notify this) Both became oblivious of everything, the challenge, the ego. Romantic rabba vey is playing on the BG, Arnav's caramel orbs are shining with tenderness, flickering with emotions. Both are transfixed by their intent gaze. Khushi who was effervescing to celebrate the New Year with her jiji is bewildered to see Arnav in her room right at the eve of New Year. But sanka devi's addle pated brain spoiled the moment between them. She comes back from her trance and starts to chide Arnav. How cum he is in front of her. Arnav is trying to assuage the situation; he is telling her that his phone dropped here. But our jhalli doesn't let him even talk.

"your phone didn't came here by itself, obviously it came with you." 😆

She is grumbling,

"Oh God whose face I've seen @ 12".

"excuse me, I also saw your face." Arnav retorts immediately. arnav seemed offended

But Khushi is Khushi, she is making it a big issue. It's the time to retaliate him. She is reminding him of his conceit that he will not come in front of her, but she will somehow confront him.

"you came wrong place at the wrong time Mr. Raizada. Now my whole year will be ruined."

Khushi's flippancy is acerbating Arnav. But who listen to Khushi she is baffled, how he came to her room. She thinks, he must came through the window. Arnav exasperates to hear her blabber. He moves close to her, covers her mouth with her hand and pushes her towards the wall. Khushi squirms under his strong grip.

(There was something sensuous in this scene. He touched her as if he owns her.)

"Shut up KKG, I also know how to scream. I'm not doing so, cause I do not want to wake everybody up and let them know that your sister is not home."

Khushi now realizes that Payal is out with Akash. But nautanki starts to scream jiji.

Arnav admonishes her to be quiet. He tells her that Payal went out with Akash.

Under the sky, Akash also celebrates New Year with Payal. After finishing the countdown he offers his hand to hold hers. Akash is saying mellifluous words to Payal. He even arranged Luchnowi tea for her. He is assuring her that her family won't be separate from her even after her marriage.

"How you will be the part of my family, same way I'll also be the part of your family."

"hum kisiko nahi khone wale , hum to serf ek doosre se panewale"

"we are not losing anybody, but gaining each other. For me Nothing is important than your happiness."

Payal also have the same thought.

Pause: sigh I wish if Akash would remember this vow, then he wouldn't behave like a mommy's boy in six months and would support Khushi along with Payal. i was thinking the same thing

Khushi is really happy that Akash has done so much for her sis. Arnav who was standing beside her moves back. Khushi says that she can't believe that Akash is his brother. Arnav gets annoyed and comes back to her.

"excuse me, what!"

Khushi tries to covers up,

"I mean Akash ji believes in love, so he did this for jiji, so that he can see her face @12".

But Arnav thinks this are all stupid, filmy, nonsense stuff. He also said the same thing to Akash.

Pause: really, then why are you so worried to see Khushi @ 12. 👏

Khushi retorts him, he thinks this is nonsense, cause he doesn't believe in love.

Arnav agrees her. Khushi asks him,

"This is the first night of the New Year; everybody must wish their beloved Happy New year. On the first night of New Year, everybody has new hopes, new dreams, but you? You nurtured so much bitterness inside you that you think even love is nonsense? Why are you like this?" arnav seemed offended

Rabba vey is in piano playing in the BG, depicts the inner turmoil of them,

"The whole world thinks like this, cause they are crazy. You don't get anything by wishing. This is all nonsense. The world doesn't get beautiful by embellishing with fake flowers and stars. The world remains relentless and stone hearted as always." he has seen so much in life and i really felt for him

There is suppressed pain in his voice.His distraught past made him sardonic. the world he came across was really brutal.

"But you will not understand. Cause you don't have the thing to understand the depth of this words."

Khushi asks him what is that thing?

Arnav turns back and says derisively, he thought she will not even ask.

" it's called dimaag (intellect) KKG, what you don't have."

His insolence exasperates Khushi. She goes to stop him. She can't let him go without giving her answer. But she can't complete as someone knocks the door. They are perplexed; who can it be knocking so late at night!

It's NK who came with a big bouquet of roses. He is smiling in anticipation.he is adorable

Khushi thinks it must be Payal. But she is ambiguous, why she would knock the door?

Arnav and Khushi come out from the room to check. But unfortunately bua also woke up, she is coming to open the door .Her nandkissore came, how can she stay asleep. Seeing buaji Khushi vehemently pushes Arnav back to the room. Arnav is dumbfounded,

' what the"

It's time for Khushi to cover his mouth.

"Bua woke up"

Bua is going to open the door chanting nandkissore's name. Where NK is dreaming to see Khushi's face, he is muttering that @ 12 he will see the person's face, who will be his life partner for the rest of his life. Bua opens the door and NK opens his eyes. He is shocked, but bua is delighted.

"humri nandkissore!"

She is squeezing his cheeks; she looks really delectable to see nandkissore at midnight. buaji is thanking god that her wish fulfilled to see her nandkissore. 😆

Then comes the hysterical moment; NK is imagining himself as a groom, holding his bride in his hand. The bride's face is covered with the veil. He says

"I do"

The bride says,"humoho do."

Oh gosh the bride is buaji.

"nahiii!!!!!!!!"

NK screams in premonition.

Bua thinks God has sent his ambassador to assure her that he will always be with her. NK cowers to hear this, "nahi" 🤣

Bua asks him why he came. She invites him inside.

Inside the room, Khushi is beseeching Arnav not to go outside.

"mei kaan pakarti hoo." She even is ready to hold her ears.

If bua finds him she will not spare her and Payal also. She thinks she will not spare him as well. Arnav is getting frustrated. Khushi suggests him to say "what the" as much as he wants. She is even ready to serve the punishment. She starts to sit up and down. She requests him wistfully not to go outside. Aranv finally agrees at her plea.

Amma also wakes up hearing the door bell. Bua introduces NK with her. Bua again expresses her happiness to see him, she squeezes his cheek again. Amma looks a bit incredulous that why he came so late at night? Nk says he actually came to wish New Year. Bua asks him did he come for her. NK retorts not her only, but for Khushi as well.

Bua screams "khushi, payalia .look nandkissore is here."

Khushi and Arnav both are flabbergasted to hear this. Arnav is fuming. poor guy is jealous Khushi opens the door slightly and slides her lissome figure out very carefully.

Now starts Khushi's drama. I think I won't be able to justify Sanaya's brilliant acting by words. 👏Amma asks her when did she come and why Payal didn't let her know. Khushi tells them that Payal is not at home and immediately rectifies herself that she is sleeping. She illustrates by keeping her hand on her cheek and cradles her head, closing her eyes

"jiji to so gaye he. So gaye hai.(jiji fall asleep)"

Nk who was trying hard to grab her attention finally wishes her happy new year.

Khushi is literally mourning,

"yeah, new year, new day, new night, and at midnight."

Hearing her incoherent speech, Nk thinks she is drunk. When he signals her, she doesn't get him, thinks he is asking for water. bua calls payal again. Khushi says her she already fall asleep. Bua goes towards the room. Before she can reach there Khushi runs and closes the door. Bua asks her about the door. Khushi says it's closed now. Khushi accidently utters laad Governor. She stammers, she means Arnavji. NK is flummoxed, "you mean nanav is inside?"

Khsuhi immediately covers it up,

"I didn't say that. I mean jiji, there is nobody inside the room."

Amma says "but payal should be". Khushi doesn't let her complete

"jiji is sleeping." She leans her body on bua's shoulder to show them Payal is sleeping. When bua again mentions Payal's name, Khushi tries to divert them.

"plz spare jiji. I'm doing sit up."

She starts to sit up and down. All looked stupefied to see her delirium.

NK suspects, something is wrong. He asks her again, is Nanav inside? despite answering his question Khushi asks him why he calls him Nanav? Nk starts to say that long time ago. I am so glad you could describe khushi's antic...i had the hardest time forming words

Khushi snatches his words,

"you were kids right? wow'

Arnav is sullen, pacing back and forth, what NK is doing here and how cum his jet lag gone so fast? He takes out the watch from his pocket and wears it (it's the first time I'm seeing him wearing a watch.) glad you pointed that out He opens the door slightly and sees that khushi and NK are shaking hands and NK is wishing her happy new year. Before NK can give her the roses, bua snatches the bouquet from his hand.

"I love roses so much." Bua is enamored. Poor NK is crying inwardly.

After greeting him Khushi says him namastey and shows him the gate to leave. NK says he is yatim(orphan) that the whole next year, he will see Khushi. Khushi mends him yakin (sure). She is literally coercing him to take a leave. Bua seems still frolicking to meet nandkissore. bua ji is something else...glad she found someone after shyam

"bohot hi achcha hai humri nandkissore.(my nandkissore is really good)"😆

Bua sits down on the chair. But Khushi can't let her sit. She says her that, she needs to go to sleep as well; otherwise she may have a headache. She pushes her towards her room. Bua hands over her the flower bouquet.

Khushi rushes inside her room, she rambling in consternation. Arnav is fuming,

"What the, what NK was doing here? And this flower? .Khushi, are you alright?"

"I saw your face @ 12, how I can be alright?" Khushi pleads him to leave. Arnav infuriates to hear this.

"What I was doing"

He grits his teeth in anger. When Arnav comes near the door to leave, bua screams from outside,

"ye titlia"

Khushi again inhibits him to go outside. But Arnav is obdurate, whatever bua may think, he will definitely leave now. Khushi pulls him back. Bua is screaming from outside to open the door. Khushi tells him to lie down on the bed.

"Are you lost of your mind?" Arnav retorts.

Khushi pleads, if bua sees him inside she will come to know that Payal is not at home and she will create a hue. She spreads her arm and thereby Arnav falls on the bed. Khushi gets aghast to see his angry face.

"See DM also wants this, that's why she made you fall on the bed.."

She picks his foot and makes him lie on the bed. She covers him with the blanket. Bua is still screaming from outside. Arnav sees there is no choice left, so he covers himself with the blanket.

Khushi opens the door and bua asks her why she took so much time, what she was doing? Khushi pretends that everything is fine. Bua says Payal caught a cold so she came for her. Khushi blocks her way, ""jiji is sleeping."

Bua says her then why she is awaking. She also should sleep. Khushi is cowering to sleep on the bed. She tells bua to leave, she will sleep later But bua is adamant, she will make Khushi lie down first, then she will go.

"I'm alright buaji, you go."

Khushi feels like crying. Bua scolds her as if she is a naughty kid, not sleeping on time.

"leto maharani.(lie down princess)"

She yells. Khushi is trembling in fear, glancing at the clad figure on the bed. Bua finally makes her lie down beside Arnav. Arnav and Khushi's first bed scene, I am so surprised arnav went along with khushi's plan...i mean he is ASR he does not care what anyone thinks of him...i think he was just to shocked and confused to act at this point...khushi is something else

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Posted: 11 years ago
episode 163

- Nice catch

the culprits own up. man gets up... looks at all. clenches jaw. notes nk's pally behaviour with khushi. everyone is so happy. he looks at her, something in his eyes...

this something in his eyes was what made the episode count as far i am concerned. otherwise, not much really happening here, just a day on the way to sangeet. of course, there's nk's little thing for khushi, which i feel is practically mandatory, expected of him where he comes from, he a jawan ladka, she a jawan good looking babe, both unencumbered, how not to be attracted... -
true

useful too, since it lets more of that "something in the eyes" come on.

and there is too a disgusting interlude with peeping tom shyam, that sick rustic villain attitude, interesting how buaji falls upon him and gives him hell without caring about making a scene outside the house. the same lady who'd called for smelling salts at the sight of a heart with two names on the wall of her house. good for her, maybe even a clear hint to overly cautious middle class parents about keeping quiet where their daughter's names are involved in that "izzat abroo" pill we've all collectively swallowed. -
entire thing well said 👏

as all rush off, nk is a bit wary of nannav, khushi too... but they walk out, and carry on in conspiratorial vein, while a quiet man watches.

"khushi ji aapka plan successful ho gaya..." khushi joi, your plan is successful.

hi five, and... a very confident khushi, "woh toh hona hi tha nahe ji, aur aise karne se arnav ji apna haar maan hi lenge..." that it had to be and thsi way arnv ji also had to accept defeat...

and as needed, nk is called away... the usual ipk devise. voice off screen.

"haar jeet ki baat itni jaldi?" talking of winning and losing so soon?

the man who loves to win ain't givin' up. and asr with full asr music in attendance, strikes a stance on this whole affair.

speaking of which, have you guys scene this music being used in a pashto drama? between nagin dance and this one, the awards are all taken. please do see at https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/88815903

good one

"aur achha hoga tum iss maun vrat ki aur thodi practice kar lo, kyunki sangeet ki competition main harne ke baad tumharo bolti band hone wali hai, kkg," -
love his confidence...nd the line too good
he walks up to her, for once she stands firms, then turns to walk off, but hand on shoulder... he stops her.

"waise toh tumhari aadat hai, par iss baar competition mein girna mat... main sambhalne nahin aaoonga," -
oh oh
terribly sweet and sexy and of course, he will be there... hamesha.😳

he turns to go, trips on the carpet. almost falls. she catches him... that whole sambhalna thing which resolves on karwa chauth starts here... 👍🏼who will take care of whom, save whom... she will also always be there. a subtle rabba vey moment seasoned with their little altercation, it's heat. -
Lovely 👏

"aur aap girne say dariyega mat kyunki hum aapko sambhal lenge..." and you don't worryabout falling, because i'll always save you,
because i'm from lucknow where the winner also helps the loser...
good, angry young girl... give it to him.

he just looks at her, a bit disconcerted, possibly stirred in a way he didn't expect by that sudden touch of hers...

he is about to say something and she starts off her "haan haan" predicting the whole conversation... often getting it wrong but who is to stop this express train. he looks on, seems amused, i could have sworn in fact he was.

"jahan pe aapka yeh what the khatam hota hai na, wahan pe humare thumke shuru hotey hain..." 🤣where your what the ends, my hip thrusts begins. complete lunatic... and lovely she is, how not to fall madly for her. the poor man. -
i love tht line she said...so amazing😃...nd so her...awesome ⭐️

thrilled with herself she walks off... leaving a hot bothered sexy man behind, determined to vanquish this miss walkie talkie.

in the living room a smitten nk believes khushi ji can get things done without saying a thing? huh? shyam enters, wearing green, gah... same as akash, what? and kkg in green too, what's up?

"khushi ji aapki kamar kitni lambi hai," khsuhi ji, you waist is so tall, nk in fine hindi.

"how dare you, kkg?" asr in mother tongue english.


the natraj ki murti, usually the smugglers heist in hindi movies of the seventies which seems to hold sway over the creators' imagination, makes an appearance. can't figure out why the props girl couldn't find a box it could fit into properly.

anyway, the beautiful lord of dance, the majestic nataraja, nani ji's trophy won at a young age, is declared the prize. khushi who was sitting next to nk while asr seethed at the opposite end, leaps up and does pranams declaring it will be the gupta's soon.
"hello hi bye bye, mind it!" counters mami in contender mode, very rajnikant.

little eyetalk between the the laad governor and miss jhalli all through. as also shyam's constant lurking around khushi, trying to engage her in conversation,... he seems to be reaching some sort of an edge, a little desperate, almost careless.

khushi leaves, and surprisingly asr follows. he must talk to her it seems.

"khushi!"

she walks on, oblivious, or pretending to be.

"khushi kitni baar kaha hai tumse when i'm talking to you don't walk away..." that walkkk away. how many times i've told you when i speak don't walk away. again this thing, he has something about people turning away or not paying heed when he talks. why i wonder... and why was this never explored further? -
love his english...the way he talkin in english to khushi...is somethin really different

"chal toi nahin sakte par hum bhag toh sakte hain na,😆" can't walk, but i can run, can't i? she runs... maybe she knows he's reached boiling point. and maybe something in her wants to get burnt too. she must run.

what was he trying to tell her. disconcerted gorgeous man alert.


ek do teen chaar... as kkg and bua ji practice their sangeet dance, someone approaches gh... shyam. he lurks behind pillar spying... a lascivious smile on his face as he indulges his khushi fantasies.
a sense of senseless obsession growing. eeew.

disturbing scene... invasive this spying.

buaji sees shyam smiling mesmerised at the dancing khushi... and takes on the bessaram aadmi. shyam is still speaking of his innate decency. if you repeat a lie many times, it becomes the truth. nicely directed.

in the meantime nk is making love sick blank calls to khushi... and he also wants advise from naanav. so now he has to be nk's love consultant. first akash, now nk, obviously his prowess with women is well known, hyuk. when he picks up the courage to say something, nk talks gibberish and then in frustration disconnects the phone and leaves.

phone, tired gardener, irritated by nk making a play for kkg... phone rings. he picks it up... "hello," off hand.

dancing girl freezes.


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episode 164


she was the most gorgeous mami ji i ever saw, that she the sanskari one made a good bit of fun of her elders, her sis's ma-in-law to be and their one of a kind buaji, i was completely willing to overlook because she was really and utterly funny...
👏
otherwise would this man have looked thus.

- Lovely ⭐️

while one left me rofling... no i wasn't holding my stomach, i just let it all hang outiya, mami ji of the khoosie bitiya kind... the other made my breath hitch and go haywire with this intense desire of his that keeps pulling him to strange places. sometimes her bathroom, sometimes the store room (oh that hot humid sunday), and very often the kitchen (now why this kitchen thing all the time, home fires etc., back of director's mind?) and there he went as though drawn by a string, then all that red rose, albeit, made of felt and brought on by a mami act. was that the reason the wonderfuliya act in the very first place? apart from a good dose of laughter, it would bring a red rose and two lovers into the same frame? maybe i ponder too much. - Good thinkin

but felt like that to me, and felt good, rose being pretty loaded with reference, memory, meaning in ipk.

164 started with an irate khushi asking asr why he has picked up the phone. madam, it's his home...🤣

"hum nanhe ji se baat karna chahte hain..." i want to talk to nanhe ji...

he's about to say something but holds back... in these little moments so much being said.

"nanhe yahan nahin hai, ab tum meri baat su..." nk aint's hee, now you liste-

he's been trying to tell her something for a while...

but she cuts in... stopping him, saying she knows all this is his evil ploy to distract her, to stop her from winning.

haar jeet, losing and winning, the theme continues.
listen, khushi... he tries to get into the conversation but with a "samjhe aap" and a "hum jeetenge" i'll win, she ends the chat.

we see a bit of manorama mami's insecurities re new daughter-in-law, vis a vis her "posting" in rm. but her son assures her this ain't no "demosson," it's in fact a promotion... to ma-in-law status while maintaining her elder daughter-in-law place in the fam. funny as it all seems, the entire situation reflects some real emotions and fears that accost many of us.
and oh kitchen politics are far more lethal than ordinary running the government sort of politics... no doubt about it. - ru referin to Arshi kitchen scene or saas bahu drama 😕

then all are off to gh for intense gift exchange, and surprise, both asr and shyam want to tag along. asr mainly because he remembers her talking rudely to him and insisting she'd win... how dare she. actually, the man is madly jealous by now but pretending huh, never. and shyam because he can't help but be a slimeball; what an opportunity to let bua ji know she can't be rid of him so easily. she has held him by the scruff and thrown him out... twitch twitch, smile creepily... he'll show her.

khushi and payal are much into mami day, natraj ki murti enters dialogue and... ting tong.

looks like the lord of dance is here! at the door are two people, thankfully khushi's twin is lost in her own world with her perfumewa👏. man in consternation, then cracking up. - Indi you r just crackin ...

another moment to be looped eternally.

jumping to, drawing room at gh. gifts are being given and taken... nautanki khushi is yet to make an entry. some people are impatient. bua ji calls out," titaliya, chai bani ki nahin..." butterfly girl, is the tea ready? man observes keenly, something brewing, hotter than tea.

he gets up... "kaa hua babua..." what happened, dear boy? "wo mujhe paani chahiye." er i want water.

butterflies. the man is desperate to meet the woman, he of course believes it's to tell her off. possibly one of his earliest moves as callow lover boy, he's come here looking for her, when he knows where she is, he has to get there. there's that need, palpable.

"nahin nahin nahin that's ok, main chala jaaoonga," no no, that's ok, i'll go. he walks off before anyone can stop him.

khushi is getting rid of mami things, praying to dm, save me... a hand comes and takes the red rose clip off her bun.

she swivels around as her hair cascades down... the first time he's done that. such an intense sensuality in the moment...
on a computer, in a 6 inch star player screen what i'm seeing is making my shoulders go hot, my ears burn, causing extreme acidity too.

and that red rose in his hand...

silver smooth voice... out to make a point,

"actually, main bhi lucknow se hoon," actually, i too am from lucknow... awww.

"aap yahan," you, here? she's flustered.

"i said, main bhi lucknow se hoon..."

"haan, toh?" yeah, so?

"toh tumhari himmat kaise hui meri baat poori hue bina jaane ki," so how dare you leave before i've said what i had to...

she turns around without giving an answer.

"natak mat karo... pehle mera phone kaat diya... phir maine baat karne ki koshish ki toh..." don't put on an act, you disconnected my call, then when i tried to talk...

someone calls off screen.

she goes to take the tea...

"enough." clenched teeth.

again that thing between them even when they are far apart.


"ab sirf main baat karoonga aur tum sunogi..." now i'll talk, you'll listen.

he insists their side will win, she refutes... asr music coming on.


"tumhe itna yakin hai ki tum nahin harogi?" you're so sure you won't lose?

the battle of words continues, while their desire have their own chat, sotto voce... you can't hear it, but feel it you will.

"itna confidence?" so much confidence?

a little advance... retreat.

"aazma ke dekh lijiye..." try it out and see, she's not giving in.

"socho, khushi kumari gupta, agar kismat ne saath nahin diya, toh" think, kkg, if lady luck is not with you... he's walked steadily toward her, pushing her to the wall almost...

awful sexual tension, on the surface in him, beneath it in her.


"agar hum haar gaye toh..." she's a little nervous? if i lose...

"agar tum haar gayi toh?" if you lose..? the puma is closing in on the prey.

kkg asr have already taken position, the dance is about to begin. again. and this time it's a smouldering, passionate tango. i want to win you. i want to defeat you.😳

i want to eat the sunbeam flaring in your lovely body,
the sovereign nose of your arrogant face,
i want to eat the fleeting shade of your lashes,

and i pace around hungry, sniffing the twilight,
hunting for you, for your hot heart,
like a puma in the barrens of quitratue.
~~~ pablo neruda, sonnet xi ~~~

WoW...i mean really ⭐️👏 more than the screen ...i sometimes feel tht passion nd heat in your writin...fabulous ⭐️

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