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BerryBlush07

@BerryBlush07

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

poem 5! 😃..i just wrote it ..its a bit short...posted as i got the advice to do so..😉

i wud lyk tp mention one more thing..the thing that inspired me to write this is..

this post and it's TM: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/iss-pyaar-ko-kya-naam-doon/3668354/bus-yun-hi

thanxx alot buddy! 🤗

this about khushi's reply on the last minute of her birthday to arnav's heart-felt gesture..😳

Yes u almost crushed my day...

never felt this much dismay..

but every cloud has a silver lining...

my day's ending was just as shining...

i know u don't know how to express...

neither did u succeed to impress...

but yes I too know u as the way u are..

your actions might have placed a scar..

They might have been close to what meant forbidden...

but your intentions are never hidden...

And by far i have been to the depth of that sea..

which you are almost yet to see...

I am talking about nothing but your heart..

and I would like to end by saying ,

with that u set the whole world apart...

The End..😃

Regards,

Berry 😳

I~I Moonlight beauty.. ;) I~I - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/iss-pyaar-ko-kya-naam-doon/3662188/i-i-moonlight-beauty-i-i

~ Confused Feelings...~ - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/iss-pyaar-ko-kya-naam-doon/3663135/confused-feelings

#$~I Hidden Desire I~$# - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/iss-pyaar-ko-kya-naam-doon/3665408/i-hidden-desire-i

); :: Unexpected Pain :: ; - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/87895449�

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supriya

@supriya.arshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

Lovely 👏👏

loved the last bit!!!

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Khesnee B

@..Peppermint..

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Posted: 12 years ago

First page🥳

Sorry for UnRes so late

Anyway now abt the poem, its awesome and im tired of saying that bcoz all ur poems are too good! It was short yet full with feelings! The acknowledgement that khadus Raizada can't express was perfect😆

And yeah poor girl was hurt but still Arnie wishing her with that rose was so perfect😳

I am talking about nothing but your heart..

and I would like to end by saying ,

with that u set the whole world apart...

Indeed the guy is different, one in a billion

The entire world is at one end and he just stands apart😳

Loved loved loved it❤️

P.s- that rose scene reminded me of SaRun's offscreen where Sanaya was acting like a pregnant and barun was...*sigh* Miss them

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Anisha

@-Aniisha-

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

beautifully written Ayeshu 😳 loved it to the core

keep writing more !

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Posted: 12 years ago

Awesu Ayesh!!!! its awesum!! :)
silver lining??? jaani pehchani line hai!!! :p...
btw ur frst poem ka... shh its a secret!!! :p...
thxx for the pm and the school shud know about this secret of the vice captian of the suphir house!!! :p...

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BerryBlush07

@BerryBlush07

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: HeBarun21
Awesu Ayesh!!!! its awesum!! :)
silver lining??? jaani pehchani line hai!!! :p...
btw ur frst poem ka... shh its a secret!!! :p...
thxx for the pm and the school shud know about this secret of the vice captian of the suphir house!!! :p...

thanxx alot heba..🤗

yuppp..its a jaani maani phrase..😆 😆

@bold: what r u trying to do?? u better not do anything evil! 😈