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Posted: 12 years ago
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heello all! 😃
i am back! but this tym nervous.😵...one of my best IF buddies has requested or shud I say commanded me 😆 😆 to write a poem on Arnav's reaction to Khushi's engagement ... which is a rather tough one 🤔...so i dont noe what i wrote..but had to complete it...i hope u ppl understand..😳
and that commander is none other than Keshni a.k.a Kenny_Arhi my keshu😳..so if u don't like it..then go after her not me! 😈

and here it goes...


Arnav just realized that khushi is engaged to shyaam...and after this realization his whole world goes hay-wired ...and the pain strikes him badly...and so does his agression..

It is harmless they say..

But I feel it in a different way...

I hear a remorseful melody...

And suddenly my life is in jeopardy...

Never have I felt like this before...

Why is my heart afraid to see more..

It has been brutally stabbed...

As though something precious has been nabbed ...

I feel my soul being tightly grasped...

As if something needs to be unmasked...

Oh! Why this unexpected strain...

It's more like a firey - rain...

A single thought has left me shattered...

My life has been unjustly tattered...

Nothing left for me to lose or gain...

But still I feel this deathly pain...

It secretly hopes someone to hear...

And witness these unseen tears...

THE END


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do check them out! 😳
Regards,

Berry 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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You leave me speechless!😆

Awesome ❤️

I seriously can't find words to say 🤔

I really loved it!😳

Well written👏

thanks for PM😳
Edited by Butterfly003 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res

unres

oh gal..., ayeshu...!!!
u write so well, nijvaglu thumba chennagi ithu😳
this was one of the best poems i read of yours...!!!!
keep going gal...!👏👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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First of all let me do a happy dance as im on first page
Ok now a big thank you Ayeshu...i know it was tough but you still managed to make it as good as ur other masterpieces
Ekkks i so LOVE it damnit😳
Thanks for not putting a creepy pic this time😆
Now coming to the poem,
The pain,the heartbreak was clearly visible in the poem😭
While going through the poem i was thinking of ASR's eyes(poor guy- looked like his entire world crashed😭) when he came to know abt khushi's engagement and you just described his feelings perfectly😳
Of course his "precious" khushi was being "nabbed" from him and the stupid person he was, still stopped at Farak padhta hain kyunki...😡😡

It secretly hopes someone to hear...

And witness these unseen tears...

This line was so so apt to the situation, when i think that Anjali and Arnie were so close and Anjali still failed to see his heartbreak and those unseen tears as you put it, Khushi did notice it but poor girl was still confused wid her feelings😆

You are too good at poems girl
P.s- Purple font is back😳
P.P.s- im sure i wont get rotten eggs or chappals bcoz it was damn good and im damn sure everyone loved it
*runs to read it again*🤓
Edited by kenny_Arhi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ye ho kya raha hai..😕 itne res..at once 😳

edit : i am resing this for anu di 😳

Originally posted by: .Anisha.

wow how beautifully you have portrayed the heartfelt emotions of Arnav for Khushi... Im speechless

I loved it to the core damnit 😳
keep writing more !


😆 😆 thank God ur lappy finally listened to me ...😳
anu di is speechless 😲 😲 😆
i noe that dammit...no matter how bad it will be u will always luv it to the core dammit! ...(no! i am not saying that this is bad 😉) and that is one of those reasons why i luv u..🤗
thanxx aloott anu di! for finally cuming 🤗

Edited by BerryBlush07 - 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: BerryBlush07

ye ho kya raha hai..😕 itne res..at once 😳

See how good the topic was☺️
*self- gloating*😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nothing left for me to lose or gain...

But still I feel this deathly pain...


very nicely u have described.. well done 👏

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Gayathri_k

Nothing left for me to lose or gain...

But still I feel this deathly pain...


very nicely u have described.. well done 👏

thankyou..😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thanxx alot!..😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: kenny_Arhi

See how good the topic was☺️
*self- gloating*😳

yupp topic was gud...and tough ! 😡 😆
i cudnt sleep last nyt due to this...man this was the hardest..!!

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