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Posted: 12 years ago
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heyy!!
ok...first of all!!
thank you sooo much!! to who all liked nd commented on my previous thread...🤗 🤗
nd also to whom all going to comment and like...😆 😆

ok here is my second P O E M 😳
i hope u lyk it! 😃



This poem is about the feelings arnav and khushi get..
they are confused...and dont noe whats happening...as they are new to it...
at first they get very annoyed then towards the end...they finally find it..sweet...😳


I feel small flickers raising from my heart...
As though the whole world is far apart...

I am clueless! What am i dealing?...
This different kind of feeling..

My face turns pinkish red...
Do I need to go to bed?..

In my stomach now butterflies fly...
"What is happening to me??!" , I sigh...

Nothing fulfills my heart's satisfaction...
And nothing seems to be much of elation...

Oh! When will this thirst quench...
In the sprinkling rain I feel to drench...

I am clueless! What am I dealing?..
This sweetish-bitter feeling...

I've lost half of my reflection...
Even the crystal waters show me deflection..

This feeling is soft as velvet..wish i could touch..
I never had one as such...

The End 😃

Your feedback ...
it shud never leave my back...😃 (i noe this one is srsly lame..🤣)

Regards,
Berry 😳

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MT_loverboy thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#2
wooww
i m telling u
u r a poet...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#3
I loved this poem a lot ❤️

Awesome yaara🤗
Edited by Butterfly003 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: MT_loverboy

wooww

i m telling u
u r a poet...

oh wow! 😆 that was fast..😆
thanxx again! 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#5
thanxx alot..suganya..😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#6
Thats very nice berry! Keep it up <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This time I will save you from my poems 😆...but seriously these two poems where very nice...

Now I know how you managed to patao your bald ASRs BD ;)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oye hoye , confused feelings hai yaar pyaar
awesome poem 😊😊😊😊
it actually reflected my feeling too 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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What the hell...i rushed to come here only to know that im on 2nd page...that not phair queenji😭

U actually found that lame😲 i pray to differ!
it was awesome ayeshu; reflected the perfect feeling of falling in love!

The confusion that arise in the heart of lovers,

The feelings so new😳 and oh yeah those butterflies and Dhak Dhak and acidity you feel while even thinking of that special someone!

The sweetish-bitter feeling is indeed love❤️

*sigh* it was beautifully written Ayeshu and felt really nostalgic reading this piece!

Tu shayar ban gayi ayeshu☺️ and now tu fizool frogs ke liye poems bhi likh sakti hain🤣
love your poems a lot😳
Keep them coming!😊
Edited by kenny_Arhi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#10

Originally posted by: MT_loverboy

wooww

i m telling u
u r a poet...

GB skool mein bhi woh aisi hai!!! :)

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