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Originally posted by: Butterfly003

You leave me speechless!😆

Awesome ❤️

I seriously can't find words to say 🤔

I really loved it!😳

Well written👏

thanks for PM😳

Originally posted by: kenny_Arhi

First of all let me do a happy dance as im on first page

Ok now a big thank you Ayeshu...i know it was tough but you still managed to make it as good as ur other masterpieces

Ekkks i so LOVE it damnit😳

Thanks for not putting a creepy pic this time😆

Now coming to the poem,

The pain,the heartbreak was clearly visible in the poem😭

While going through the poem i was thinking of ASR's eyes(poor guy- looked like his entire world crashed😭) when he came to know abt khushi's engagement and you just described his feelings perfectly😳

Of course his "precious" khushi was being "nabbed" from him and the stupid person he was, still stopped at Farak padhta hain kyunki...😡😡

It secretly hopes someone to hear...

And witness these unseen tears...

This line was so so apt to the situation, when i think that Anjali and Arnie were so close and Anjali still failed to see his heartbreak and those unseen tears as you put it, Khushi did notice it but poor girl was still confused wid her feelings😆

You are too good at poems girl

P.s- Purple font is back😳

P.P.s- im sure i wont get rotten eggs or chappals bcoz it was damn good and im damn sure everyone loved it

*runs to read it again*🤓

Originally posted by: sweetnoori

Hii ayesha dear,,
woow its ossawm yaar,
aww arnv
lovely peom 👍🏼

Originally posted by: kenny_Arhi

Edited on pg 1!

Originally posted by: BerryBlush07

*stretches her arms and clears her eyes..*

i am going take my own precious tym to reply to this precious comment...😳

@ pink : excuse me 😡 😆 😆 ...*whispers* u r welcum 😳😆

man it was damn tough..as i said it literally left me sleepless...😆 😆 but all that paid off..now that u have approved it

hehe..cudnt find a creepy one..🤣

me too..while writing it i felt i am ASR..going thru the pain etc..i srsly noe how he must have felt..poor guy..😭 😭 😭

yupp...hated that dialogue..it was left over- incomplete...😡 that line came lyk magic! i was soo sure that it will complete my poem...😳 😳..yupp it started as confusion and ended as boundless love ❤️

@ orange : 😳 ..." warn me if u r going to command sumthin again..😳 plzz 🤣

p.s: yupp i love ur purple font..😆 😆

p.p.s: i hope soo..😳

*hugs keshu * 🤗 thanxx alot yaar..🤗

Originally posted by: flutterlashes

nice...loved it!!

Originally posted by: kenny_Arhi

Oops i take back my thank u😃

what to do..u wrote it so well that we all couldn't help but love it😳

Don't even try to find a creepy one...the previous one still haunts me

@red- u couldn't have said it better

for the time being i have to other requests or command as you put it but will surely let u know when i have one😆

I accept the hug🤗 but i dont accept the thank u🤔