arshi ff: without you... thread #1, chapters 1-13 **completed**

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#891

Originally posted by: ...SaRun...
A truly gripping update, it was very detailed and painted a great picture in my head. Your description of Arnav's feelings were so emotive, and your outtake on the room was absolutely brilliant i wish they included it the in actual show.
The ASR's belongings were portrayed exactly how one would picture his room and other things.
I wish there was more detail on the office lunch as i am always up for seeing more ArShi romance 😳
Good to see hp and op busy in house cleaning and since there has been a downpour at my placeas well i could empathize with that scene.
Thanks for the pm.

hi, lizzie,

you liked his room and the working hp, op? ha, that's nice. sorry about that office lunch, but i'll keep that in mind. 😳 oh those squelchy rainy days and dirty shoes ugh. thanks for reading and all the comments.

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#892

Originally posted by: ArshiHamesha
Indi🤗

Just got back and open it and here it is...

Love their first meeting...typical ASR and his love of AR ,reflects in him as he is a self maid man and he developed this whole Empire on his shoulders...it's inevitable not to think and give importance as it runs in your veins...

Their understanding and longing needs no words the very same way his protective steps towards his Khushi.He will not leave any stone to keep her safe.
Nice touch of Drji and Anjaliji along with our paagal Khushiji..
I can see your longing towards your "OP"😊

He does not like RAIN...hmmm...I'll wait to see how will you explore that with the reason...

op hates mopping and cleaning and glucky rain problems. he thinks that is for lesser mortals like hp... ha ha, he's a character. but he is true to his employers, almost treating them like masters in the feudal way, even when they don't ask for it. i do have a thing for him, arshi, you got me there.

thanks for liking the update. i hope there's fun in it... khushi and asr, strangely enough practically write themselves out. and asr is in such a tremulous state of mind, having been away for so long, yes this office is his jaan too, not just a place with a name on the door. in his veins as as you say.

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#893

Originally posted by: binimoti
Nice part

thanks so much, binimoti, good to see you. 😳

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Cynthia Abruzzo DeSiena

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Posted: 11 years ago

#894

Indi,

I am sorry I don't have much to comment on, perfection as always. I love the changes in color and font, good idea I may borrow that one. Loved the way the story is going. The headache? Hmmm

The darkness of the rain and how he doesn't like it. The graze of the bullet flying. This one was interesting and the love blooming with Di and Doc. And the playmate love in the office, even if only a kiss on the cheek...hot!

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#895

hi cynthia, 😆

the not much time to comment comment was... hot. thank you, dear one.

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nisha_mehta

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Posted: 11 years ago

#896

Update was too good.
May khuhsi and arnav always find happiness
Continue soon

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#897

thanks so much, asha. 😳 hopefully will do an update this weekend.

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jg12

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Posted: 11 years ago

#898

Beautiful chapter & great idea to use different colours.

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#899

thanks, jg12,

glad you had fun. someone suggested this colour thing... happy to hear it works.😳

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DurgaS

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Wonderful update. So, the gulabi kiss has made its appearance here, lovely. 😳 Loved the brown part, especially the first one with the description of the damp weather ( and HP's hassles with it, poor guy 😆), description of ASR's state of mind as well as the description of the room. Hmm... so Chachaji and Pitaji used to shoot clay pigeons, very interesting info for an investigating mind. 😆 Khushi enters ASR's office, an interesting phase is starting, looking forward to it. 😃

Dr. VV is back and Khushi is back being chirpy. Happy that Payal has noticed this change in her little sister. Hope ASR gets to know the whereabouts of the creep soon.

Waiting to see what happens after ASR announces to Khushi that he's getting married to La. 😳