arshi ff: without you... thread #1, chapters 1-13 **completed**

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#901

durga, hi

thanks so much and v happy you liked the update. after that conversation with khushi, the man who was engaged to la, oh i am thinking about that and looks like he's ina mess. next update.😳

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#902

hey divya,

lovely emoticon 😳. thanks so so much.

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rati123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#903

I really love your beautiful story. You keep weaving the past and present to beautifully ! And both os them are interesting.

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#904

rati 😃

thank you. thank you. thank you. 🤗

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Love.life2

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Posted: 11 years ago

#905

Thnx for d pm

Nice u changed tht color for different times.

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#906

thank you, renee.bee...

glad you liked.

and did you suggest the colour coding? i know someone did.😳

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Chochoo83

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Posted: 11 years ago

#907

awsumm chap liking the you put all the details in describing a person's reaction and feelings how he missed his office ... N lagi shart was bring back the memory of good old days of ipkknd

Simply loved it

Thanks for liking my username dear it one of mine favourtie infact want to chnage mine with this one but to many hurdle was thier,fortunatley after 10 yr blessed with daughter n name her yashal 😊

Thanks for pm

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#908

oh yashal khan,

so happy to hear about your daughter.

mine arrived after 16 years.

i can feel your joy.

thank you for reading and liking the details. lagi shart... can we ever forget.

i want to sink into asr and khushi a bit in this story. i so enjoy that. 😆

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cheesemad

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Posted: 11 years ago

#909

Amazing update.

I like the way you give flashbacks in between and the different color coding really helped me today.

Coming to the update, Arnav must be feeling really happy. It feel great to be back to your place after so many days. Personal experience.

I really want to kill that Shyam, he made our ArShi suffer a lot. Stupid man..!!

Loved the flashback, I love that scene where Arnav and Khushi come face to face for the first time in the office. you described it beautifully:)

Waiting for next one eagerly:)

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#910

Originally posted by: cheesemad
Amazing update.
I like the way you give flashbacks in between and the different color coding really helped me today.

Coming to the update, Arnav must be feeling really happy. It feel great to be back to your place after so many days. Personal experience.

I really want to kill that Shyam, he made our ArShi suffer a lot. Stupid man..!!

Loved the flashback, I love that scene where Arnav and Khushi come face to face for the first time in the office. you described it beautifully:)

Waiting for next one eagerly:)

komal,

good to see you and thanks for all you say. i thought he might like getting back to his place of work, it's so much apart of his life, it's his creation really. thank you so much for liking the descriptions of emotions and things, i actually love this aspect of expression, trying to find an emotion or a moment feels exciting. i am hoping to read your new one today. see you. 😳