arshi ff: without you... thread #1, chapters 1-13 **completed**

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anu1017

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Posted: 12 years ago

#881

Nice update😊 thanks for the PM!!!!

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#882

thanks for reading, anu. 😳

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nishu_shorna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#883

So much difference in Arnav in past & now...and the way u put the past scenes...i just love it...
thanks for giving the glimpse of Arnav's room as well as his dull life before Khushi...so thats how she entered in his office...and returned in his life...thanks to Mr. Snake...
AR is not only his office,rather his dream...thats why he's so impatient to return there I guess...
loved ArShi office moment...these two are just made for each other...
So today Dr. Verma progresses from Ms. & Mrs. Raizada to their names...am loving this slow & steady development...
now that ASR is determined all truth will be out soon hopefully...
thanks for the pm...waiting for the next part...

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RizArshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#884

The transition between past and present was absolutely wonderful. I didn't know time travelling would be fun. It gives the story an edge. Same place, same people but only the time has changed and so are the relationship dynamics. What was once love hidden behind the veil of hatred has now become a love without which it is impossible to live. Khushi is back. The bubbly, chirpy one who was lost somewhere in the past few months. Now that the other half of her heart is back, she too is back with the mission to make everyone happy. Mission starting with Anjali. Arnav on the other hand is getting close to the person who has dared to ruin the peace of his life. I wish Shyam gets his due soon. Yet another breathtaking chapter. Thank you so much for the PM. I really appreciate it.

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IssK.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#885

Nice update! Arnav Singh Raizada is a dude ⭐️⭐️

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#886

Originally posted by: nishu_shorna
So much difference in Arnav in past & now...and the way u put the past scenes...i just love it...
thanks for giving the glimpse of Arnav's room as well as his dull life before Khushi...so thats how she entered in his office...and returned in his life...thanks to Mr. Snake...
AR is not only his office,rather his dream...thats why he's so impatient to return there I guess...
loved ArShi office moment...these two are just made for each other...
So today Dr. Verma progresses from Ms. & Mrs. Raizada to their names...am loving this slow & steady development...
now that ASR is determined all truth will be out soon hopefully...
thanks for the pm...waiting for the next part...

hi nishu_shorna,

thanks o much. i am glad the office scenes appealed. yes his company, his work, his office, his dream. not just awork space. part of him really. doc verma is slow and steady, hopefully he will get there soon. men. thanks for your words. and next chapter soon.😳

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#887

Originally posted by: IssPKaur
Nice update! Arnav Singh Raizada is a dude ⭐️⭐️

danke. a dude that's out to kill me.

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#888

Originally posted by: RizArshi
The transition between past and present was absolutely wonderful. I didn't know time travelling would be fun. It gives the story an edge. Same place, same people but only the time has changed and so are the relationship dynamics. What was once love hidden behind the veil of hatred has now become a love without which it is impossible to live. Khushi is back. The bubbly, chirpy one who was lost somewhere in the past few months. Now that the other half of her heart is back, she too is back with the mission to make everyone happy. Mission starting with Anjali. Arnav on the other hand is getting close to the person who has dared to ruin the peace of his life. I wish Shyam gets his due soon. Yet another breathtaking chapter. Thank you so much for the PM. I really appreciate it.

thanks, rizarshi,

lovely to see you. i love the way you understood the time thing. yes, i felt it gives it an edge, you touch the same characters at many points in one read, feeling them more intensely. khushi is back, and i thought she would naturally start meddling in her good natured vein in a loved person's life. and asr is not not not allowing shyam to do his thing again. i hope he succeeds. thanks again. will see you soon. 😳 here's to time travel

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.Brooke.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#889

A truly gripping update, it was very detailed and painted a great picture in my head. Your description of Arnav's feelings were so emotive, and your outtake on the room was absolutely brilliant i wish they included it the in actual show.

The ASR's belongings were portrayed exactly how one would picture his room and other things.

I wish there was more detail on the office lunch as i am always up for seeing more ArShi romance 😳

Good to see hp and op busy in house cleaning and since there has been a downpour at my placeas well i could empathize with that scene.

Thanks for the pm.

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Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 12 years ago

#890

Indi🤗

Just got back and open it and here it is...

Love their first meeting...typical ASR and his love of AR ,reflects in him as he is a self maid man and he developed this whole Empire on his shoulders...it's inevitable not to think and give importance as it runs in your veins...

Their understanding and longing needs no words the very same way his protective steps towards his Khushi.He will not leave any stone to keep her safe.

Nice touch of Drji and Anjaliji along with our paagal Khushiji..

I can see your longing towards your "OP"😊

He does not like RAIN...hmmm...I'll wait to see how will you explore that with the reason...

Edited by ArshiHamesha - 12 years ago