arshi ff: without you... thread #1, chapters 1-13 **completed** - Page 87

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DurgaS thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh yes, tough boy and ziddi too. 😆
Arnav and Khushi, such wonderful characters we are given, isn't it Indi? Exploring their relationship is really a fascinating deed. And you are doing it so beautifully. 👏
About ASR's dress while he's hammering Shyam, how about a poll for your readers? They will surely enjoy it. 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
deepika,

thank you and thanks so much for reading.
indi52 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: DurgaS

Oh yes, tough boy and ziddi too. 😆
Arnav and Khushi, such wonderful characters we are given, isn't it Indi? Exploring their relationship is really a fascinating deed. And you are doing it so beautifully. 👏
About ASR's dress while he's hammering Shyam, how about a poll for your readers? They will surely enjoy it. 😳



this is the second time today you've made me laugh madly. 🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
The flashback was sad...poor arshi
But then the present mo,et makes everything better
Amd what Shyam is out and free😡
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Posted: 11 years ago
aww anita, yeah there is unfortunately sadness...as in life. but yes happy days, and shyam has to be out and alive to get the dhulai of his life ha ha.
Edited by indi52 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
A confession 😳


I was apprehensive to read this story. I tried once to read the prologue but could not complete it. The image of ASR on the first page is the one photo of him I can never bear to see. So I left this thread. This story was recommended by Nishat (nishu_shorna) and she got an earful for recommending me such a story where the first thing I read is about ASR being hit by a bus.
Today I want to apologize to Nishat for scolding her and to you for judging your story without even reading it. I am very sorry and thankful to you at the same time. Nishat and Farha apu (Omoraboti) persuaded me to read this wonderful story and I am glad that I listened to them. This is a wonderful story. I love your way of story telling. Its very gripping and at times makes you want to shout at your screen for what was happening in the life of Arnav and Khushi. I am thankful to your daughter and husband for asking you to bring back Arnav to life and to you for being a lovely mother and wife. That moment and many others made me extremely emotional. I am eagerly waiting for the upcoming chapters. This is one of the best stories on Arnav and Khushi I have read so far.
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Posted: 11 years ago
rizarshi,

first, thank you.

and then, please do not apologise.

i am honoured by the time you take over a sundry tale on a forum and that endearing confession. tell you, farha is a sweet heart and so is nishu_shorna for doing this. they are too sweet. and you are lovely for giving without you a second chance.

i am not really a fiction writer. never thouught i would ever write this... never thought many things but that was before ipk. the reason for this is that picture i couldn't look at, couldn't bear to think of. had to enter that fear. and see if he died, then what.

found it was not to be... he insisted on living and i was only to happy he did.

yeah my husband and daughter were rather insistent that i stop torturing the reader hehe. but i suffered too i say 😆.

welcome back and thanks for everything you say. i do hope the story remains interesting and exciting for you.

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Posted: 11 years ago
ironbutterfly,

you know how good you make a crazy writer feel? tomorow i iam twelving.
Edited by indi52 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
sorry, ironbutterfly... long day today, the words are all jammed up. will update tomorrow, hate saying i will and not doing it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update Indi.
Arnav tried to find solace in Anjali's arm. Their turbulent past gave this two orphan siblings an ocean full of pain. It was so wonderful how Anjali always protected her brother like a mother.

Khushi's innocent candor always amused Arnav. So that he can't be angry on her for long. He wanted to go to office. But he always has to surrender to his childlike cute wife. Thanks to you that you used the pool in your story. Mr. Raizada never loses and he knows very well how to tame his crazy wife. Loved his sweet torture to his sexy wifey.

Arnav wanted to get rid of Khushi's thought from his mind. He somehow felt that he was doing injustice to Lavanya. but lavanya provoked his anger, when she was teasing Khushi with shyam. And he became so exasperated that literally blasphemed Khushi with afflictive words. Poor girl, got hurt terribly after his affliction.

ASR is back in action. i guess within no time he will get culprit shyam.
i absolutely loved the last line where he avowed to protect Khushi.

loving the way how you are simultaneously telling the story of present and past.

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