arshi ff: without you... thread #1, chapters 1-13 **completed**

First Previous

Page

109

Next Last

Frequent Posters

nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#801

WOW...another awesome update...with perfect combination of present and past...U know Di how much I love this thing in this story...Anjali-Arnav moment was beautifully written...And then Arnav-Khushi in pool...again...par iss bar toh...haayyee...so romantic...And the past scene...I was literally dying to know what happened after their encounter...get that today...Arnav back to his regular life & office...now Mr. Snake can start counting his days,hay naa Di...

Quote

indi52

@indi52

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#802

iron_butterfly,

thanks for reading immediately... gives me strength 😆. yeh, trying t o see what was there in sheesh mahal... often intrigued me. that normalcy... rather hard won. i love to look at it... am really happy you liked. he is a protagonist that thrills me with his sense of responsibility and open liberal mind, and that quick decisive male air... i must find a way to take it to the denouement he deserves.

thanks again, i thought of you while posting, i know you'll enjoy a quick update. 😳

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

indi52

@indi52

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#803

Originally posted by: nishu_shorna
WOW...another awesome update...with perfect combination of present and past...U know Di how much I love this thing in this story...Anjali-Arnav moment was beautifully written...And then Arnav-Khushi in pool...again...par iss bar toh...haayyee...so romantic...And the past scene...I was literally dying to know what happened after their encounter...get that today...Arnav back to his regular life & office...now Mr. Snake can start counting his days,hay naa Di...

thanks, nishu_shorna,

liked the pool? romantic, na? awww i wish i could write chapter upon chapter just on that crazy romance, it just comes, one doesn't have to try. 😆 the past scene, actually wiwy asked me, so why did he grab her like that while she potted a plant, the answer when i looked for it was of course because he found out about a man in her life.

snake is slithering unaware... let's see how long he can survive. 😆

Quote

I_Dont_Know

@I_Dont_Know

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#804

Can you plz change the font style/ colour when you are writing their past? It will be easy for readers. Hope you don't mind.😳

You made ASR freaking hot in this update also😆 The same Khushi and same ASR, nothing is still changed. The bathroom scene! Le sigh😳 And I love your Arnav-Anjali scenes. Let's see what's gonna happen next. Thanks for the pm.

Edited by I_Dont_Know - 11 years ago

Quote

indi52

@indi52

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#805

Originally posted by: Javeria3991
Superb update

thanks, javeria... glad you like.😳

Quote

indi52

@indi52

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#806

Originally posted by: I_Dont_Know
Can you plz change the font style/ colour when you are writing their past? It will be easy for readers. Hope you don't mind.😳

You made ASR freaking hot in this update also😆 The same Khushi and same ASR, nothing is still changed. The bathroom scene! Le sigh😳 And I love your Arnav-Anjali scenes. Let's see what's gonna happen next. Thanks for the pm.

hi i_don't_know,

he is freaking hot, how not to let him remain so 😆. on another thread we are still debating whether he manhandled her or not... but no debate about whether he was smokin' hot or not.

thanks for liking them and the asr anjali.

good suggestion, i was thinking this might be confusing, will set the past in another colour or font... at times there are three time references... will separate them. no harm in making things a little more easy to comprehend, though i love a slight unstatedness in things. 😳

Quote

indi52

@indi52

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#807

Originally posted by: wiwy
😃
Our In di at her best is such a treat!
The nightmarish beginning, the parents fight, maa suffers! Main sab theek kar doonga, Arnav tells Di! But how hurt he was inside! Our ASR in the making!
And in his state of coma he met maa? I am sure he did. That was what he wanted dil se, so he was granted his wish. Thanks DM! The three orphansare together now and can find solace in each other.
Life is back to normal. The ultimate fashion magnate with a pom pom wife who talks of hermees shoes! Ha ha! Oh! love their fall in the pool and what happened thereafter! He he!
The first time he wanted her so...She was going out with a certain Shyamji! No way! how could she! she belonged to him and only him! He had to tell La it was over! But as usual he did the very opposite of what he intended to do! If she could get engaged he could marry La, could he not? Dammit! And he returned the purse he had kept so long! What a beautiful mix of Khushi's engagement upto the Diwali episodes here Indi. And their married life. Blissful! Full of fun and romance.Why could not the CVs do something like this, I wonder.
ASR's first day at work after coma! Yay! Di, Mami, Nani were all there to see him off. How sweet.
After facing a grave setback the Raizadas are back! Snakewa teri khair nahI!
Awesome In di!

ha, wiwy ji,

such a too the lovely commentwa... thank you thank you, meri jaan.

today you, me, farha, we all updated... something in the stars?

yes, sir, the lady in his coma, the one in a garden if you recall, was certainly his mother. do such things happen...? maybe they do. too much evidence about a plane other than ours to completely ignore. plus here it made abs emotional sense. as he floated free of earthly ties, what or who would he encounter. answer seemed simple.

that whole why he had to have her that day came to me because you asked last chapter, sir, so thank you.

glad you like. i want to find this snake now. he better read his shastras and get ready for antim stuff. hyuk. how we love him. really we need at least one defender of this being... after all dm created him too.

Quote

Cynthia Abruzzo DeSiena

@cinthiann1758

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#808

Indi, Loved it! fabulous, love the flashbacks.

My favorite:

he needed to tell her about his mother, he had seen her after so so long, yet he had no idea what words to use, how to speak about it. are there end points of time? does one ever get to cross them? where was maa? where was he? but they were both there that's all that he knew...

The veil of the worlds is thin and when we are open we can share time with our loved ones who have gone before us. His maa was there for him, helping him to heal and rest in her love and warmth so he would not feel alone in the cold abyss of the coma.

Quote

wiwy

@wiwy

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#809

Originally posted by: indi52

ha, wiwy ji,

such a too the lovely commentwa... thank you thank you, meri jaan.

today you, me, farha, we all updated... something in the stars?

yes, sir, the lady in his coma, the one in a garden if you recall, was certainly his mother. do such things happen...? maybe they do. too much evidence about a plane other than ours to completely ignore. plus here it made abs emotional sense. as he floated free of earthly ties, what or who would he encounter. answer seemed simple.

that whole why he had to have her that day came to me because you asked last chapter, sir, so thank you.

glad you like. i want to find this snake now. he better read his shastras and get ready for antim stuff. hyuk. how we love him. really we need at least one defender of this being... after all dm created him too.

Yes, when you updated I thought the same too. We posted our stories on the IF same day too, minutes apart, remember!

Re Arnav seeing ma. I know people close to me who have had these other wordly experiences. so, yes, I am a believer.

I am glad you told me why he had to have her that day. I was really curious. Though actually there needn't be a reason at all. Things just happen. They really do. But thanks anyways. It was a good spin.

Re Snakewa no coexistence can be contemplated! He tried to kill our man In di! What are you thinking! Give him the boot! Pronto!

Quote

indi52

@indi52

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#810

wiwy,

things just happen... yes sometimes they do. but there is always character that takes us there... especially to things like that lovemaking that day, while he has a girl friend living with him... if i read this man right, there had to be a reason. i enjoyed your asking.

you know how i am about asr, teehee.

shyam teri bansi... maar diya jaaye ya chhor diya jaay,. what would be really unkind, ruthless, i need to think that up... if i get a chance to take my thoughts away from the asr khushi scenes that is. tell you one could write a book on just the scenes that keep playing out in the head...

about the meeting of worlds, yes there's too much evidence. and i often wonder about it so it sort of came naturally... his relationship with maa is pretty pivotal... he needs to go through it still. i like to believe this was not just a little detail added to get the girls oohing and aahing... it stays with him. it may have been in one place for long, but with khushi's entry a little opening up and then in no man's land a freedom and a readiness...

i am slightly nuts, na? asr does not exist 😆 but nor does macbeth or othello or ulysses... do i exist?😃