arshi ff: without you... thread #1, chapters 1-13 **completed**

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#811

Originally posted by: cinthiann1758

Indi, Loved it! fabulous, love the flashbacks.
My favorite:

he needed to tell her about his mother, he had seen her after so so long, yet he had no idea what words to use, how to speak about it. are there end points of time? does one ever get to cross them? where was maa? where was he? but they were both there that's all that he knew...

The veil of the worlds is thin and when we are open we can share time with our loved ones who have gone before us. His maa was there for him, helping him to heal and rest in her love and warmth so he would not feel alone in the cold abyss of the coma.

thanks, cynthia.

i like what you say... the veil of the worlds is thin. i do hope some day to be aligned in such a way as to part it and look and feel that side. thanks for believing she was there. maybe i needed that as much as him. 😳

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#812

Originally posted by: ArshiHamesha
Indi...😊 I think this was the BEST update ever or may be its me as it took me a while to absorb it and I needed time to sink in it before any comment...

Wonderful three tracks...👏⭐️

First...Siblings as Arnav and Anjali are rare...and same is Khushi and Payal
His LIFE got frozen in the moment of the gunshot and her sister in wedding dress, and those dreadful nights of parents fight...Kids at this age never ever forget what their role models become naked like this in front of em...they can't absorb that shock of seeing em fighting, yelling, shoving each other and they always blame them .An anger and anguish full of pain and teary thoughts just crumble their structure no matter what...Anjali is his mother and he finds MOM's peace in her just like Khushi's touch reminds him of her

Second Part the pull of magnetized spark in between em is from the day one...very nice touch of his misunderstanding that she was engaged and had a fling with him...while he was creating havoc in her senses.Her running away from him and his coming towards her is always there...You know what I was watching the Dugha epi and noticed one thing...he is the one who made sure she comes back to him and the scene you mentioned where his Di reminds him "uss Larki ka kya" ...and his mind goes back to her...he knew she will come back to him and that's why when she hit her scooty to him ,he didn't say a word, dying expression...but just before hitting he said to Aman or whoever I don't care if she leaves the country and here she is in the mirror and not crossing him facing him...warning him "your own reflection is about to change be ready I am here to show you If you are ASR then I am mini one"
I am saying it in a joking way but that is exactly happened...and he was stunned to see her there and then he got the permanent ...DENT ...when she pressed her right on him"aapki himmat kaise huwi"...THAT WAS THE FIRST DAY WHEN SHE SHOED HER RIGHT ON HIM AND HE REMAUNED STUNNED WITH SMIRK...He was happy but as they both are our lovely fighters who we adore...couldn't stop...but he answered her right there with his eyes That's my girl...he always show his right and did verbalize with his eyes but she is a man of actions couldn't get it in the beginning but it clicked her in TEEJ epi when he deliberately showed her his inner sight during pooja and gor his answer in her jealousy...yes bina dil keh dilli became dilwali...

And here too, he is getting a dent that she feels what I feel then why Dammit...
He is making a hasty decision ...oh well that is our ASR...who loves to bring tears to wipe em later.If she didn't see his extreme convulsion ,he couldn't see her tears...nice ...love that...both don't need to see that...they are feeling that..."don't hurt me as it hurts you"👏

My fav part which I wanted desperately to see in IPK...🤗 🤗 🤗 for that...a big cuddly Jhappi in punjabi style crushing your bones hug...

I can't put any pic of that...😭

Love how she takes him down along with hermaneee shoes..😆 love his fake ones at least you are bringing new ones in this story...

So the HUNT is started...For the guy who is only after HIS khushi

Indeed Khushi is safe with him as always ...

Thnx and sorry for my boring long bak bak...

arshi,

boring bak bak? so why do i always look forward to your analyses and symbols? 😆 thank you, dear one, for this lovely post. three tracks... yes, i guess.

you like hermees (not hermaaneee, but ha ha i am going to steal that and use it somewhere)? you like the pool scene. forget side wide, now we are in the pool shool, oy paapi and jhappi time, punjaabi ishtylewa.

what a waste of that pool i often used to think... remember the day she almost fell in but he saved her? why? why? i wanted to jump up and push them both in... so now that i had a chance, kaise chhor doon?

anjali was dear to him as he too her... the strongest sibling bond ever. yes, often formed while watching their essential love and care givers in terrible discord. my parents fought a lot, but i always sensed their love and regard for each other, here though, i think there was a sickening power play. the father being the son of a wealthy family with a curbed idea of responsibility... charming no doubt (which is why ratna fell for him) but amoral, thinking he could do as he pleased, a nasty sense of entitlement that the wealthy often have... along with it a filthy temper, possibly the result of a skewed upbringing and personal frustrations while growing up. ratna was strong and capable with a huge conscience, but possibly in her world, people didn't leave their husbands for such things. and so it went on.

anjali was definitely motherly toward him, as elder sisters can feel that way i know, he never thought of her as maa but his closest connection to that love maybe... and those memories, how they were tied by them. he a biyt father like, she a little mother like, two young peopel trying to keep together a sense of family... a family suddenly disappeared. i don't blame him for staying stuck in that moment in sheesh mahal... not many would be able to find their way out of it.

i adored your delve into the way asr and khushi's interactions were structured. from the first moment on there was no getting away... and unwittingly, he always made sure, she'd be in his life. though she did also do that once, when she did not go back to lucknow after threatening him she would.

what a mad jodi... me lau them and adore writing about their craziness. thanks for coming along for the ride. maybe it's in an suv? 😆

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binimoti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#813

This was a nice part, update soon and thanks for pm

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Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 11 years ago

#814

Indi I was referring to her man...as hermaanee...😉...Because he wanted more than that for that moment...😆

Thnx for reading my long Bak Bak...but there is no doubt they wasted a lot of things which could raise the bars of this show but again , then a lot of will be dead or in asylum or some where if they ended up in the pool...imagine that.If we as old ladies can't live without seeing them in one day...how about young ones...😳

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Newbiesoapfan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#815

Ab mein kya bolun - ASR style... am speechless!!

Beautiful!

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#816

Originally posted by: ArshiHamesha
Indi I was referring to her man...as hermaanee...😉...Because he wanted more than that for that moment...😆

Thnx for reading my long Bak Bak...but there is no doubt they wasted a lot of things which could raise the bars of this show but again , then a lot of will be dead or in asylum or some where if they ended up in the pool...imagine that.If we as old ladies can't live without seeing them in one day...how about young ones...😳

so cute... hermaneee, aww i didn't get... but i will definitely use it, so give permission 😆 dil se. ok if you say it was to save the world they didn't fall into the pool, i'll live with it... 🤣

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#817

Originally posted by: binimoti
This was a nice part, update soon and thanks for pm

thanks, binimoti... 😃. i will do so. good to see you.

Edited by indi52 - 11 years ago

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#818

Originally posted by: Newbiesoapfan
Ab mein kya bolun - ASR style... am speechless!!
Beautiful!

hayeee, ash... please say speechless is a good sign 😆. thanks for the beautiful.

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Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 11 years ago

#819

Originally posted by: indi52

so cute... hermaneee, aww i didn't get... but i will definitely use it, so give permission 😆 dil se. ok if you say it was to save the world they didn't fall into the pool, i'll live with it... 🤣

you don't have to ask ...Dil laga keh ji...use where ever...Ok if it is not for the world then how I supposed to console myself...for that sexy pool especially whenever I see those scenes when he pulls her from falling ... and she lands right into his chest...Just think...only this answer saves me...😆...