arshi ff: without you... thread #1, chapters 1-13 **completed**

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wiwy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#171

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Wow! Indi! Is it faraq at first sight for ASR, Indi! Did he go to the mandir to check if the goondas had harmed her at night? He said"Shut up Khushi" but he meant" tum theek ho?" , I think.

He beat up the goondas who had troubled her. I hope you are also referring to me coz I too made such a comment on pg17:

Is Arnav going to beat up the gundaas who locked up Khushi? He is already feeling so protective towards her.

Thankyou for beating those oily guys to pulp!

And Khushi is so brave. She is consoling naniji when she herself is aggrieved so. A positive person always, even in crisis. Really nice touch, indi.

Arnav, her"Arnav" in coma...what will she do now?

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mastermagician

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Posted: 12 years ago

#172

That was such a beautiful chapter!!!

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#173

^^^ mastermagician,

thanks for your comment and that prompt visit, hope you had fun.

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#174

Originally posted by: wiwy
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Wow! Indi! Is it faraq at first sight for ASR, Indi! Did he go to the mandir to check if the goondas had harmed her at night? He said"Shut up Khushi" but he meant" tum theek ho?" , I think.
He beat up the goondas who had troubled her. I hope you are also referring to me coz I too made such a comment on pg17:
Is Arnav going to beat up the gundaas who locked up Khushi? He is already feeling so protective towards her.
Thankyou for beating those oily guys to pulp!
And Khushi is so brave. She is consoling naniji when she herself is aggrieved so. A positive person always, even in crisis. Really nice touch, indi.
Arnav, her"Arnav" in coma...what will she do now?

wiwy,

it was you that wanted those gondas beaten up... aaah, thanks and 🤗 for the thought. i liked that dhishum dhishum asr. erm did he go to the mandir to check on her? not really, how was he to know she'd be there? he went to do his puja. 😆 nahiiin... well, when is it that he goes to the mandir, c'mons tells me.

in a coma... indi feeling awful. must update soon.

thanks so so much for rushing over to read. i have to say i enjoy writing this stuff out of nowhere, practically... spend the whole day wondering what happened to them next. yeah nani is kind of my girl... very clever that resemblance between the two.

it was always faraq at first sight for asr, just that we conventional types keep expecting him to say it our way. 😳

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BarunDiwani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#175

Indi!!! so you give us a glimps of happiness then put him in a comma??

Pehle current phir shock...nahiiin! well i guess it beats the alternative. notheless its a wonderful update, took my emotions on a rollacoaster again. Uff love the way he teases and rubs his stuble on them...also love the dishum dishum scene int the hotel room, it was a pleasant surprise, and thank for making it fun. loved the "shut up Khushi"...its always been a fav part in the show, love how you incorporated it here. One of the most touch moments here was Naniji "he is a reflection of me" 👏...indeed he is, good thing i wasn't at work this time or else would've had to run to the bathroom to 😭...you make everything so freaking interesting to read.

thanks 🤗

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nishu_shorna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#176

So he passed into coma...but Arnav Singh Raizada kabhi haarta nahin...Khushi will bring him back...with her strength,faith and love...
the way u put their journey in between the story is really awesome...
Loved the update...thanks for the pm...

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#177

^^^ nishu-shorna,

thanks for your comment... yes yes yes, our man never loses... what's coma to him, nothing. i know, the story isn't easy, so i thank anyone who is reading it... so glad you are enjoying the style of telling.

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crazyaddiction

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Posted: 12 years ago

#178

reading your story is like watching ipk again...u make it so real ... always loved reading you even on honeypriya's thread... those were the days... sigh ...

thanks for the pm

ash

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#179

^^^ ash,

thanks and a super sigh... yes indeed those were the days. crooner was so rich and diverse and fun. every day a new episode and a host of thoughts... i am so happy that you read and got a feeling of the real ipk... ok i'll take that as a major compliment... though i must admit, the cleverness of those writers and their handling of things was always just sort of well, divine. 😆. i could never stop marveling at the dexterity of style and the depth of getting characters and feelings. that too in a tv serial.

thanks again. 😊

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Cadence_12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#180

indi di 🤗 you are getting me so addicted, not that i wasn't before. am even beginning to think, if they really wanted an ASR accident in the serial, i would have said yes if they had asked you to script it.