My first OSs - Memories & Once More - from OS contest - Note Pg4

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I would like to thank Alina and other organisers for conducting the OS contest because of which I decided to try writing an OS for the first time.
A special thanks to all my blaster friends who have always been supporting me ever since I've joined them.
This post is dedicated to indi52, who has always been guiding me, encouraged me to write more and thereby was fruitful in instilling confidence in me.

Entry #1

MEMORIES

'Let's go to Lucknow!' said Aarav at the dining table. Everybody looked up startled. 'What, exclaimed Arnav. 'Yes Dad. I've just 15 days holidays left before my school reopens. Nani keeps talking about Lucknow, why don't we make a visit?' Khushi and Arnav looked at each other. Khushi noticed some uneasiness in Arnav's eyes.

Things had settled down for a while. Babuji had recovered, he was now able to speak and walk for short distances with the help of a stick. He was able to expose all of Shyam's untold evils which resulted in Shyam getting life imprisonment. Amma, Babuji and Buaji returned back to their home in Lucknow. Anjali Di was happily married to her second husband who was a reputed businessman in London. Arnav had made sure to carry out all inquiries about him before the marriage. Though he missed his Di very much, Arnav was satisfied that his Di was finally with a good man. Akash's project in the US was a success and Akash and Payal were returning back next month. NK had gone back to Sydney to assist his father in business.

All of Arnav's problems seemed to have been sorted out. But, when Aarav suggested Lucknow, he had an unsettling feeling. With Aarav insisting on making the visit, and Nani too supporting him, Arnav had to give in. Aarav became excited and hugged his Dad, but Arnav felt a certain fear lingering in his heart.

After arriving in Lucknow, the Raizada family made its way into Gomti Sadan, the Gupta home in Lucknow. Arnav and Khushi had not been to the town since the release of the video tapes to the media. So, it was a weird feeling for both of them. After the initial hospitalities by the Gupta family, the Raizadas proceeded towards Sheesh Mahal. Sheesh Mahal was under the care of a trustee for its maintenance. As soon as they neared it, Aarav couldn't believe his eyes at the sight of the huge palatial house. He along with Nani and Khushi made a tour of the bungalow with the help of a guide. Arnav wandered about stealthily until they came back. He was lost in his memories when he heard the happy voices of his family. 'Dad, this is so big. Is this really ours?' exclaimed Aarav. Arnav nodded amused at the little boy's wonder. In the evening, as they made their way back to Gomti Sadan, Arnav had a slight smile on his face and the fear in his eyes was nowhere to be seen.

After dinner, when Aarav was put to sleep, Arnav asked Khushi to come outside. When she came out, she saw Arnav sitting on her old scooter with her helmet on. The sight made her laugh out so loudly, annoying Mr. ASR a bit. 'What's so funny? I want to show you something. So, just come and sit.' Khushi, knowing her husband quite well by now, decided to not say anything and sat down on the pillion behind Arnav. As they neared their destination, Khushi realised that they were going to Sheesh Mahal. It was decorated with colourful lights, just as it was on the day of their first meeting. Arnav got down from the scooter, lifted his wife in his arms and carried her inside. 'Arnavji, what are you doing? Put me down.' said a flustered Khushi. 'Sshhh'' was the reply. He took her to the area where Khushi had fallen into his arms the first time they met. Arnav gently put Khushi down and asked her if she remembered the place. She looked around and nodded with a shy smile.

'Khushi, when we were coming here early today, I was afraid that all those memories which used to haunt me night and day for so many years, would return if I visited this place. I was not ready to come here. But, Aarav was so eager, that I couldn't refuse. Khushi, as I was walking around the house, I remembered all the happy memories that I had spent here. So many memories which were dear to me came back to me. Memories of that fateful day also were there, but it didn't hurt as much as it used to. And then, when I came here, I remembered our first meeting. That was the day you had entered my life and my thoughts. That moment became the biggest memory of my life. And I will never ever forget that. Happy Anniversary Khushi, exactly two years back on this day I found my life, you.'

He handed over a gift box to her. As soon as she opened it, she found a beautiful pearl set ' a necklace and a set of danglers. Those pearls brought back memories of that day and she smiled. She hugged her Arnavji affectionately. Arnav continued, 'Thank you for coming into my life, Khushi'. 'You mean falling?' giggled Khushi. Arnav smirked, 'Of course, and you are an expert in falling'. 'And you in holding me, like always', smiled Khushi. 'Yes hamesha' agreed Arnav.

Still hugging, Arnav gestured her to look up at the sky. As Khushi looked up, she saw fireworks adorn the beautiful night sky. 'Oh, Arnavji, this is so beautiful, thank you', that was the reaction of an exhilarated Khushi. Arnav was entranced as he kept looking at Khushi who was smiling and giggling away. He was finally at peace.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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My second OS entry

Entry #10

Once More

As NK was nearing Arnav's room, he heard typing sounds from the laptop and thought that it must be Arnav.But, he was surprised. In front of him was Khushi, with a Bluetooth in her ear and busy typing. 'Khushi jeee?!!' exclaimed NK. Khushi looked up to see a surprised NK with his mouth half open.

'Nanheji, when did you come? I thought you were coming next month?'

'Yes, I was. But, I thought of giving you all a surprise and here I am. But, instead you've given me a surprise! What is with you, the laptop and Bluetooth? And where are Nannav and Aarav?'

Hearing that Khushi laughed and said,'Aarav has gone on a school trip. You know that Arnavji has made me incharge of the Indian wear section. Well, all this is related to that. Arnavji left very early today morning. I've been trying to call him, but his phone is switched off. Anyway, I am leaving for office in some time. I will meet him and tell him that you've come. By the way, how was your journey?And did you meet the others?'

'Yes Khushiji, I came up after meeting everyone. The journey was fine. But, at the airport I had a tiff with this girl. She thought I purposely bumped into her and started accusing me for no fault of mine. I had a hard time coming out of that situation.'

'Really Nanheji, you are sure you weren't flirting with her?' winked Khushi

'No Khushiji', pleaded NK.

Meanwhile, they heard some sounds from the hall. Khushi immediately concluded, 'Oh, she must be here.'

'Who?' asked NK and followed Khushi to the living room. They saw Nani, Mami and Anjali welcoming a young girl who had arrived with her bags to spend some days at RM. As her back was towards them, NK couldn't see her face. But when Khushi called her out 'Ananya'' she turned around and NK immediately recognised her.

Ananya knew the voice and turning around said, 'Khushiji'.' and when she saw NK, she shouted, 'You!? How dare you follow me up to here. Do you know, Khushiji, this guy has been chasing me from the airport' she complained.

Hearing this, everybody except NK, broke into a laughter. Mami explained, 'Ananya, this is my nephew, NK.

'Oh, I'm sorry. I didn't know' said Ananya, but a look towards NK implied that she was far from sorry and still believed that he was a flirt.

NK came near Anjali and whispered, 'Di, who is she? Is she also one of Nannav's ex-girlfriends?' NK had to get his doubt cleared as he realised that he seemed to be having a special liking for all of Arnav's girlfriends.

Anjali laughed at his doubts and explained, 'No, but she is his ex-girlfriend, Lavanya's cousin, Ananya. You know about Lavanya , right? We met Ananya at Lavanya's marriage in London and invited her to spend some time here.

Later Khushi bid goodbye to all and left for office. At the office, she asked for Arnav but was told that he had left for a meeting outside. Khushi wondered why Arnav was behaving so from morning. She hadn't talked to him all day and he was clearly avoiding her. She went into his cabin and was fiddling with his things, lost in his thoughts, when a hand suddenly covered her beautiful eyes. Khushi immediately knew whose it was. 'Arnavji, stop it. I'm angry with you. You haven't talked to me since morning and now you are doing this?'

'Why not? I love it when your nose becomes red in anger.' laughed Arnav.

'Arnavji, I am not in a mood for jokes now. Please tell me what is going on?'

'No Khushi. I won't tell you. But, I'll show you. Come.'

Arnav took Khushi to a posh restaurant. Arnav had booked a table at an exclusive corner from where they could not be visible to the rest. Khushi kept asking him the reason for this special date. Arnav asked her to be patient and gave the order for food.

'Arnavji, now I can't wait anymore. Please tell me the reason' requested Khushi.

Arnav smiled at his innocent wife, took out a gift parcel hidden under the table and gave it to her. 'Here, this is for you.' he said. Khushi looked at it wide eyed with her 'O' mouth. 'Where did this come from? That's why you left early today, to plan for all this?' asked Khushi. Arnav nodded and asked her to open it. Khushi gleamed with excitement and opened the packet. Inside was a beautiful red colour saree decorated with pearls of various sizes.

'Khushi, remember the first time we met? I was very rude to you that day. I still feel very bad about it.'

'Arnavji, I know. But, why are you saying all this today?'

'Because it has been exactly two years since I met you. Happy 2nd Anniversary Khushi' smiled Arnav.

Khushi was in tears now. She couldn't believe that Arnav had remembered the date of their first meeting too.

'Of course, Khushi. Didn't I tell you? I remember each and everything about the moments I spent with you.'

Khushi smiled and hugged Arnav. After some time, they returned home from their date. When they went inside they saw Ananya and NK quarrelling again and Anjali trying to calm them down. When Anjali saw Arnav and Khushi, she asked them to talk to these two and went inside. Arnav was about to say something, when Ananya tripped over Aarav's tennis ball and was about to fall. But, NK was right there to catch her. Ananya was saved but both their eyes met and they fell for each other.

One look at them and Arnav smiled and whispered to Khushi, 'Looks like next year one more couple is going to celebrate their anniversary.' Needless to say, Arnav's prediction came true. After many fights, quarrels and patch-ups NK and Ananya celebrated their first meet anniversary next year.

-Medha-, 8Lucky88 - Thank you very much for voting for this entry. 😃
jakhushi - Thank you for the special mention for this entry. 😊
Edited by DurgaS - 12 years ago
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They both are really beautiful...awesome dear...
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Both of them are awesome.. Read them during the contest.. :)
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Durga...i really Loved Once More ⭐️⭐️❤️...i don remember readin it...sorry

nd Memories...honestly i had read it...but the thing is...i dislike Aarav...don ask me why!!!!

nd whn i read the OS he was thr...i was lik why...why would any1 include him
!!!!!
but Arshi Part was nice 👏

But really Wonderful Writin Durga 👏⭐️👏
Edited by supriya.arshi - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
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Once again, these are fabulous, Durga!! 👏⭐️

Edited by Katelyn - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Entry #1

MEMORIES

Durga, what a fitting tribute to this auspicious day in Arshi's and in IPK fans lives! Just a little walk down the memory lane it felt like... that first paragraph, we could never see on screen little/big things to close those important loops.. felt at peace.. as if finally some one who has been left midway reached their destination finally... how these characters became part of our lives that a part of us was left with them.. still!!! Beautiful piece. Very imaginative. Thanks for sharing it finally. Will read and comment on the other one later.
Edited by Horizon - 12 years ago
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Memories is really beautiful Durgey! Babuji is recovering, Di is happily married, Akash is doing well in the US, Payash returning to RM, snakewa behind bars forever, Arshi's Arshi relationship on the roll, celebration of second anniversary in Seesh mahal where they first met, pearl set et al, fantastic! ⭐️ 👏

I would have loved to see all this in IPK before it ended. Good job, Durgey!👍🏼 I am so proud of you! Good girl!
But agree with Supi about Aarav. Never liked him much!😆

In the second story, enjoyed the blooming romance betwen NK and Anaya, good to know La is having a good life and above all Khushi, the businesswoman, at last financially independent, good for her! And her Arnavji!😃
Edited by wiwy - 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: nishu_shorna

They both are really beautiful...awesome dear...

Thank you. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: .sakshi.

Both of them are awesome.. Read them during the contest.. :)

Thank you. Thanks for the vote. 😊

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